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Review of chapter "4" from ChefJackButler
Review:
This is absolutely enjoyable, but I keep being distracted by all the Americans talking as if they were born in England, by which I mean that you've got them using the common terms for certain things, and using manners of speech, that might be common for someone in Great Britain to use, but are radically different from the way an Americans would speak.

The one in this chapter that caught my eye being the comment about setting an appointment for "half one", which is not the way an American would say it.

From reading your other stories, I figure this was something you fixed as you grew as a writer.
Comments from author:
Yeah, sometimes I get my slang etc mixed up.

Thanks for the review
Review By [ChefJackButler] • Date [15 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from raxadian
Review:
While I like the idea of Faith being the daughter of Bruce, I think it would be better with a Faith that's younger and less experienced.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [14 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from raxadian
Review:
Wrong, Batman is careful, going all stupid, with no plan and no backup is more of a Slayer thing.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [28 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "26" from Obsidian
Review:
wait... you are just gonna end it there? what?! Oh come on. no big fight with the big evil to finish it up? no after it's all done? sigh. but good story. well except for the british sayings you had coming out of american mouths. didn't sound right.
Comments from author:
Yeah, sorry about that, sometimes my British colloquiums come out at
the wrong time.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [31 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "26" from (Current Donor)Katrina
Review:
That was one heck of a rolicking battle. Great story all around. Thank you for sharing it.
Comments from author:
I try and write my battles big.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [4 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "26" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Good ending.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review and all your others!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [27 Dec 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "26" from MarcusSLazarus
Review:
Now THIS is interesting.

The idea of Faith as Bruce’s daughter is simple but effective even without the additional complication of the villains’ plot (Even if I’m suspicious about the idea of even Lex Luthor being able to capture the Phantom Strange on his own), and while I’m slightly uncertain about why Gotham would NEED a Slayer- to say nothing of a Slayer academy- considering the very public-yet-secret reputation of Batman, the initial meetings between father and daughter certainly work.

The prophecy adds another interesting edge to the situation, suggesting that the villains’ schemes aren’t just the result of a group deciding to coordinate their efforts but the result of external influence by another source, as well as giving the JLA a reason to coordinate with the Slayers even before Faith learned of her true parentage and you included Circe’s confrontation with whatever’s really behind all this (Although I’m not that sure about the implication of Bane being stronger than the Beast; he might be bigger, but surely the Beast’s strength would be supernatural where Bane’s at this point is just the kind of strong that anyone could be if they were REALLY focused on training, considering his resolve to abstain from Venom).

Still, ambiguity about a few cross-continuity details regarding power-VS-power match-ups, aside- and I DEFINITELY don’t agree with the idea that Luthor knows who Batman is, although it’s possible it’s one of those items of knowledge he acquired from his ‘backer’-, there’s definitely some interesting moments, particularly when Faith’s confrontation with Zsasz opens up some disturbing potential wounds or when the Council take action against the League, to say nothing of your final revelation about who the villain actually is (An oldie, but a goodie).

You could have explored the aftermath of the conflict in more detail than you did, but all in all, an excellent story with some interesting ideas; keep up the good work!

...Any chance of a sequel looking at Batman meeting Angel or Faith meeting her biological brother?
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [23 Dec 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "26" from Morgomir
Review:
Great ending. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "26" from banditdoz
Review:
Amazing story thank you
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [21 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "26" from Aille
Review:
Great ending to a great story. Thank you for sharing it over here.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [Aille] • Date [20 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "26" from (Current Donor)RngrThorne
Review:
Wow, nice payoff. Glad I was following this. Uh, any chance of a sequel?
Comments from author:
A sequel? Wish there was, but I haven't any idea where to take it. Faith's got her win back over Bane, Joker's dead, and Ghul's been dealt with. So really, the Batman's villains gallery has been decimated. On the other hand, something like Final Crisis, with Faith\Xander in the middle of the trouble, squaring up to Darksied (or at least on the fringes of any battle), might work. We'll see!

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Current Donor)RngrThorne] • Date [19 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "26" from OlBear
Review:
An excellent story and thank you for sharing it.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [OlBear] • Date [19 Nov 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "26" from Harry
Review:
Well, the Prince of Darkness has been disposed of, thanks to Mr. Terrific and Superman. And I think that Rah's Al Ghul is about to have a LIVING NIGHTMARE! When you threaten the Dark Knights daughter, you are going to be in for some SERIOUS trouble! And you did leave one small plotline hanging for us: What happened to the Spectre? Was he destroyed in the battle or is he back on the job after some recovery time?
Comments from author:
Heh, I have to admit I forgot about the Spectre. However you could assume with the destruction of Lucifier\Luthor any spells powering his prison would dissipate.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Harry] • Date [19 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "26" from Teucrian
Review:
Good story. Great work wrapping everything up tight fairly quickly, too.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [Teucrian] • Date [19 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "26" from JonnyNapalm
Review:
Some great conflict at the end, but the finish feels a little abrupt. Still terrific work though. Thanks for sharing it with us.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [JonnyNapalm] • Date [19 Nov 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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