Pretty good. Decent pacing and a credible threat. Suffered a bit from you trying to cram practically the entire marvel universe into 23 chapters, but my compliments on your knowledge of it.

You're possibly right, my love of the Marvel verse is such I probably did try to cram its entirity into the story.

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Loved it! Cannt wait for rhe next installment! Happy New Year!

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Can't wait for the sequel!

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Interesting job in the ending, but still leave people at a cliffhanger. Hope to read the sequal soon.

Probably start posting 'God Wars' next year.

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Excellent story and I'm looking forward to the sequel. Keep up the good work.

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Fantastic ending. Keep up the good work.

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Good ending, good place for Xander and Faith in the Marvel world!

I look forward to the sequel.

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Good work on the new chapter, I'll be looking forward to more.

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Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)

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Really love the abruptness of the end of the incursion. The seemingly endless assaults felt like some great splash page moments from the comics I love most. Great chapter.

Thanks. Yeah, Marvel's comics of the past ten years have become too restricted to the good old USA, I like to show action throughout the world. After all, if a threat's global, why not show it?

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Hmm, good chapter!

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Great chapter. Keep up the good work.

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Ive Read plenty of marvel comics ..... have you read any dark horse ??? take it you haven't.... Buffy gets twilights abilities in the season 8 comics... flight, strength etc

I take it you've never read a Marvel comic then. Next to Spidey, Luke Cage etc., who are hardly the power players in the Marvel verse, they are weaklings. Next to even mid-level players like say Cyclops, Iron Man, Ms. Marvel, they're gnats, then there's Hercules, Thor, Doc Strange, the Hulk, the Eternals, Black Bolt, Gladiator, Nova etc., who make the likes of Glory and Illyria look like gnats.

A Slayer might be tough in the Slayer verse, but the Marvel verse they're nothing special.

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Nice work on the new chapter, I'm hoping that you'll post more soon.

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Good new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)

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