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Review of chapter "14" from DieselDriver
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Gah, you need to work on your descriptive phrasing. Some is really cool like I noted before, but this one "station’s cigar shaped structure," is contradicting your description of the station as a sphere. Even so, neither is correct. A cigar tapers at the ends. B5 does not in any of the pictures I've seen. It is a symmetrical cylinder with flat ends. At least it was before this chapter. Still, the story is interesting, I'm enjoying reading it.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. :D
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [5 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "13" from DieselDriver
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quote: "image of a grey long sphere rotating in space". Doh! B5 is a cylinder.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [5 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from DieselDriver
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Interesting turn of phrase. I've never heard of Darkness taking someone as it's son. Perhaps a new mimbariism?

I couldn't believe my eyes when I read that G'Kar (Andreas Katsulas) and also Dr. Franklin (Richard Biggs) were both dead. They were such an interesting pair of characters.

One of the funniest scenes was the end of the episode where Marcus and Franklin are sneaking into Earthspace aboard a freighter and Marcus is driving Franklin crazy by singing "I am the very model of a modern major general". I've heard that by professional "musical" singers and his voice and tone quality was as good as any of theirs.

This story is bringing back fun memories.
Comments from author:
Andreas wasn't such a shock because the bloke smoked like a chimney, but Biggs
always seemed so young and full of life (not unlike Angel's Lorne).

Yeah, that was a great scene.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [4 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "22" from Harry
Review:
Well, it looks like the Dynamic Duo are here to stay in this time period. And I don't think that these Black Op groups are going to have much success getting to them. With the company that they are going to be keeping, and the promises made, you mess with them, you are going to be wishing you had NOT been born!
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "21" from Harry
Review:
Well, it looks like a deal has been struck between Faith and the Soul Eaters. And I know that Faith is not going to back out of the deal. Now, to see if the Techno-Mages will come and aid in the fight.
Comments from author:
Soul Hunters, not Soul Eaters (one's mixing up the x-over!). :D

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "20" from Harry
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Well, De'lenn let the warrior class have it and full bore! Lets hope that they get the picture. And I KNEW that Susan was not going to give up without a fight! This lady does NOT know the meaning of the word QUIT! Now, we have two more meetings to go: Techno Mages and the Soul Eaters.
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "19" from Harry
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Well, Londo is back in the saddle and he knows his old friend/enemy G'Kar is helping out. Now, its time for the Centari to get into the frey. And lets hope that Susan makes it out in one piece. I would HATE to loose her in this battle!
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "18" from Harry
Review:
Well, Susan has her orders. She may not like them, but this is one time, when its either Genocide or utter and complete destruction. And YES! Londo Mollari is BACK! No more Drakh influence on him. Time to mobilize the Centarui fleet and help out in the fight.
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "17" from Harry
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OH YEAH! The old gang is coming back together again! And, as extra help IVANOVA herself is coming! I remember some the code that they had for her: I WILL LISTEN TO IVANOVA! I WILL DO WHAT IVANOVA SAYS! FAILURE TO LISTEN TO IVANOVA WILL RESULT IN SPACING! IVANOVA IS GOD! *Sorry about that!*
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "16" from Harry
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Well, its time with the information from the Great Machine, to put together a Alliance to stop the Dragons and the Drakh. If it fails, the entire universe is doomed!
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "15" from Harry
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Well, now we know what the Drakh have been up to, and what is going to be needed to stop these Dragons,. Lets just hope that this party can get to Drahl before its too late.
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "14" from Harry
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OH BOY! A NEW generation of these Dragons?! That is NOT GOOD! They must have a weakness, and one that can be exploited before everything goes down the tubes!
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "13" from Harry
Review:
I smell this Dragon, or whatever it is, heading toward B5. And if that is the case, get the White Star fleet out and ready to go! That may be the only thing that can help stop this mess before the followers of the Shadows can claim victory.
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "12" from Harry
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Its good to see Lyta and G'Kar back, if even for a small time. Now, lets see how Londo handles this information. I smell a LOT of yelling and throwing of items in the room!
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "11" from Harry
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I think what we are seeing is a techno organic creature. A INTELLIGENT techno organic creature! And the power that it has, makes me think that a call to beyond the rim may be necessary. Its going to take some SERIOUS firepower to stop this thing!
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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