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Faith The Series: Prequels

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Review of chapter "Prequels 4." from MarcusSLazarus
Review:
Simple start, but an interesting way to explore the concept of Faith and Giles as a family and a Slayer/Watcher team, I'll give you THAT for nothing...
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying it, thanks for the review.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [25 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prequels 4." from (Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
Very good start. Look forward to seeing what comes next.

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Comments from author:
Thanks. Another EIGHT seasons to go!
Review By [(Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [14 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prequels 4." from (Current Donor)Listener
Review:
This was really creative. I think you skipped over some things you could've explored more (ie, Faith's dreams), but I like how she figured out who she was. That was a fun scene.
Comments from author:
I have to admit to being really, really bad at writing vague dream sequences. They usually end up being too obvious or just really really hard to decipher.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Current Donor)Listener] • Date [13 Jul 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prequels 4." from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Much better end for Lothos than the Buffy movie. I think you have Faith being a better slayer than the Buffster - good show!

Great chapter, good handling of the fight scene.
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed the fight scenes.

PMed you about the rest of your comments.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [12 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prequels 3" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Oh, Faith you only think you know what being a Slayer is about.

Great chapter!
Comments from author:
Yeah, Ms. Lehane's act is all bluster and bravado.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [10 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Faith The Series: Prequels 2" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Very, very good. I like the background on the characters. Gives more depth. I like where you are going with Faith.

Thanks for a great chapter!
Comments from author:
Yeah, more background was where I was going with this story, displaying motivations etc. Thanks.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [6 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Faith The Series: Prequels" from darkcarnage
Review:
Still one of my favorite story that you write. Are you just posting here or are you going to do some rewrites?
Comments from author:
There's been rumours that fanfiction.net MIGHT be coming down on writers of stories that are too violent etc., so as insurance I'm moving some of my stuff here (only my favourite stuff, and the stuff I can fit in under the site's 50% + xover rule.
Review By [darkcarnage] • Date [2 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Faith The Series: Prequels" from OlBear
Review:
I've been reading your work on other sites and I'm glad to see you posting here. I find your characters very much in tune with how they were portrayed in the show with the subtle twists that makes good fanfiction. Keep up the good work and I look forward to more.
Comments from author:
Fan fiction is merely the Marvel comic 'What If' come to life! :D
Review By [OlBear] • Date [1 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Faith The Series: Prequels" from CPTSkip
Review:
Very nice start. Both your Faith and Giles ring true. I look forward to seeing where your Giles and Faith go and what adventures they have.
Comments from author:
Thanks.

Giles & Faith have a way to go before they're a team.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [1 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Faith The Series: Prequels" from cmdruhura
Review:
Nice start. Good to see she got Giles so we can see how he interacts with Faith that differs from how he dealt with Buffy in canon. We have nothing to really go by for any differences with her canon Watcher. The fact that Weasley and Robin are introduced this early is a nice plot grabber. Giles is going to revise her training to account for her already quick survival reflexes. Can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
It's going to take a while before she trusts him for sure.
Review By [cmdruhura] • Date [1 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Faith The Series: Prequels" from Jazzibear
Review:
This is very promising – well expressed and exciting.
I shall be following it enthusiastically.

By the way, shouldn’t it be English reserve?
Comments from author:
Gah, darn spell checker. Good catch, I'll edit it!
Review By [Jazzibear] • Date [1 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Faith The Series: Prequels" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
This has lots of potential, no easy roads for Faith even when she is the primary hero.

I like the way you are handling Giles and Faiths interaction, he is a great watcher for her. I hope Wesley meeting Robin will give Wesley a chance to get over his attitude before he meets a slayer. I also hope you don't kill Faiths first watcher...

I will defiantly be tracking this one!
Comments from author:
Yes, Faith needs to learn to trust and let people in if she's to survive. However Giles also has to learn a few lessons too.

As for the rest... Wes and Robin are going to turn up, other than that.... :D
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [1 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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