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A Werewolf Initiation

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Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from BuffyKaibaHunt
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Brilliant! :) I like it, especially this part:

David was good company, albeit a little arrogant. Paul was a blast, and reminded him of Xander. Marko was the quiet one, but had a spark of mischief in him. Whereas Dwayne, he was the brooding one. Very quiet. He reminded him of Angel.

Paul and Dwayne were sort of like Xander and Angel personality-wise. :) Cool!
Review By [BuffyKaibaHunt] • Date [9 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from BuffyKaibaHunt
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Awesome! Very brilliant and creative. :)
Review By [BuffyKaibaHunt] • Date [9 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Werewolf Initiation" from BuffyKaibaHunt
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Awesome start so far! :)
Review By [BuffyKaibaHunt] • Date [9 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from BuffyKaibaHunt
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Very brilliant! :) I'm glad that, in this story, David, Dwayne, Paul and Marko were the good vampires, and destroyed their evil selves. That, in my view, was very noble and brave of them to do. I also like this part, too:

Oz closed his eyes, focusing on the light that flickered before him. There,it was there, light a small web connecting them all. And there he was, his aura joined with theirs. He opened his eyes, no longer feeling the loneliness, and he frowned. He no longer felt the beast within. Maybe because I am the beast now, Oz thought grimly.

He stood, silently thanking the help he received to steady himself. He looked at the boys, a smile growing on his lips. He felt like he belonged. He was the beast now, and he was controlled by no one.

He embraced them all, one by one, David last. "Welcome to the pack, Oz." Marko murmured, grinning at him. David slipped an arm around his shoulder, pulling his pack-brother closer.

"I think we need to get you a bike, Oz." Davis said, a true smile on his lips.
Oz grinned, his eyes flashing feral yellow.

"But first," he said with a grin, "I'll need a snack, I am a little hungry if you know what I mean."

Paul whooped and David's usual casual smirk was in place. He grinned, his eyes also flashing feral yellow. He turned to his lost boys, the newest one included, his grin widened as they all gave each other a knowing look.

"Okay boys, let’s go."

Very neat and well-written as well. I think there should be a sequel to this! :)
Keep up your super-cool and very phenomenal writing! :)
Review By [BuffyKaibaHunt] • Date [19 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Leahna
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Very good, well done, am waiting for next cahpter with baited breath
Review By [Leahna] • Date [13 Jan 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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