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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from liveadream
Review:
lovely. it was awsome that even though buffy had moved onto a normal life she is still there for dean. i just loved this story...i could even see it turning into a longer story. but as is is still awsome. thanks for sharing and great job.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the amazing review! I'm glad you liked it and I must admit, writing one-shots are extremely hard because there is always so much more going on so thank you again! :) Considering my track record as of late, I might one day turn this into a longer story but who the heck knows. Thanks!
Review By [liveadream] • Date [23 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TheDana
Review:
Loved this, hun. The description was great, especially! The fact that she was married threw me and it was an interesting change from others I've read. Her reaction to Stu grabbing her arm makes me wonder...

The interaction with Dean was just brilliant and I loved how she could really picture him as he called her. The fact that he'd pulled away and she thought he was dead was just so sad :(

All in all, great work sweetie. Good going with taking a break from the big one :)
Comments from author:
I wanted to make it something she wanted for her normal life but something that she could easily throw away. She was happy, on the surface, but because she can't be herself, it's not true happiness. She's fooling herself and when Dean shows, hello! Out the door she goes. Poor Stu is a throw-away, lol. And thank you! The feedback from TEH DANA makes Bre a happy girl! :P
Review By [TheDana] • Date [3 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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