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Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from texaswookie
Review:
Didn't realize that this had been updated.

That last line was pure and classic Jarvis. Loved it.
Review By [texaswookie] • Date [30 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from kittenpoker
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There were two chapters to read and I may have almost cried! I was definitely cheering when Happy and Pepper seemed fully ready to take on Tony for hurting Buffy, and I thought you trapped them together in the shop in a way that kept them true-er to form. The "planning a coup" comment made me die laughing, and I can't wait to see how that screws Obidiah's plans up! The failed!bonding was adorably hilarious as well, and it'll be great to see how that plays out. I did almost die of shock at the comment that you almost have the whole next chapter done, and I'm so excited!!! I hope we get to see more Declan and more SHIELD parts, because you blend those in beautifully. The helicopter training (and the not so subtle hint that it'll come in handy soon) has me ridiculously curious, so until next time! Thanks again for suh a great story
Review By [kittenpoker] • Date [23 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from kittenpoker
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You're back! I am so glad you're in one piece. As always, I re-read in order to fully appreciate the new, and it didn't disappoint. You threw so much at us in this chapter, which is so not a complaint because I freaking loved it. The not really a showdown showdown between pepper and buffy over school, someone whom I almost believe is Melinda May training her and hopefully getting her to see that the watchers council is a threat, Obidiah being super creepy, and the return of the prodigal father. It was fantastic. Tony reacted true to form, although the lack of emphasis on his new addition to his chest was a little strange. All in all, keep getting better and thank you for sticking with this story, it is greatly appreciated and loved
Review By [kittenpoker] • Date [23 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from Chan
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Be unfortunate if they discovered they only got on each others nerves when they start talking about deeper things if they ever get around to doing that of course.

Interesting approach she's taken to save some jobs for the shut down portion of Stark Industries although finding them things to do/make might make for some interesting shuffling if the financial cops don't rap her knuckles first.
Review By [Chan] • Date [18 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from arturusoriginal
Review:
Very nice, slow build up. You have a great story here and I'm really looking forward to seeing where you take this.
Review By [arturusoriginal] • Date [9 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from rpgwarrior
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Wow, Melanie was perfect. She came in with a story that Buffy can never confirm to forge a connection and then spun a nice little web to make sure Buffy would never trust the Council again. Don't worry Buffy, when things go wrong surely you can trust your teacher and SHIELD, they pointed out the villainy of the Council after all.
Review By [rpgwarrior] • Date [5 Oct 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from dajohu
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Freaking epic! Love this fic. Stark is one of my favorite characters (at least the movie version) and I love Buffy real family fics so this is perfect. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter. :D
-dajohu
Review By [dajohu] • Date [4 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from lunalurker
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And the long holding pattern of angst has broken, and we have progress, yay!
And Buffy and Tony meeting went about as utterly terribad as I guessed it would, for he is the Biggest Jackass.
Interested to see where this might lead, if it really does start catching up with the movies and shows. Thanks for writing.
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [1 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from Taisy
Review:
I have been remiss, I have been reading this from the first posting and have totally neglected to review. I have enjoyed the progress of Buffy from Buffy Summers to Buffy Stark; a very simple but necessary distinction. I'm excited to see Tony back and am looking forward to seeing what you do in this 'verse.

Thank you for the interesting read.
Review By [Taisy] • Date [1 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from mithrilandtj
Review:
I love this story!

BTW it is not "Woldram and Hart"
It's Wolfram and Hart (as in Wolf, Ram, & Hart)
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [28 Sep 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from FireFlash
Review:
For some reason, I only just found this story, despite it having been in progress for 2 years (and having you on author alerts). Must've missed the email or something.

But Yeah! Another Jezaeiri story! :) As usual, this one is shaping up to be excellent as well as epic. I look forward to the next installment. Soon-ish?

You know, if the site wasn't so HP-centric, I'd send a rec for you to be invited to Jeconais' web site. (You don't happen to have any HP fics do you?)
Review By [FireFlash] • Date [26 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from EKyuchi
Review:
This story is amazing. I love how original it is and how everyone stays in character. I can't wait to read more of this.

Also, I did some fanart for this. It's not very fancy but I hope you like it. http://www.tthfanfic.org/Story-30574/EKyuchi+New+Worlds.htm
Review By [EKyuchi] • Date [26 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from RocksandGlass
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Still so awesome. Love the prelude to buffy stepping up on a business level, challenging Tony in an unexpected (non slayer) way.
Review By [RocksandGlass] • Date [24 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from terrence
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I absolutely love it. Buffy and Pepper's relationship is wonderful and I can't wait o see them start ganging up on Tony. I like the idea of her paired with Steve, Thor could be fun also. Can't wait to see daddy stark's reaction to that!
Review By [terrence] • Date [24 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from (Current Donor)RngrThorne
Review:
I see Tony making this a lot worse before it gets better. Heh heh.
Review By [(Current Donor)RngrThorne] • Date [22 Sep 14] • Not Rated
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