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Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from mithrilandtj
Review:
I love this story!

BTW it is not "Woldram and Hart"
It's Wolfram and Hart (as in Wolf, Ram, & Hart)
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [28 Sep 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from FireFlash
Review:
For some reason, I only just found this story, despite it having been in progress for 2 years (and having you on author alerts). Must've missed the email or something.

But Yeah! Another Jezaeiri story! :) As usual, this one is shaping up to be excellent as well as epic. I look forward to the next installment. Soon-ish?

You know, if the site wasn't so HP-centric, I'd send a rec for you to be invited to Jeconais' web site. (You don't happen to have any HP fics do you?)
Review By [FireFlash] • Date [26 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from EKyuchi
Review:
This story is amazing. I love how original it is and how everyone stays in character. I can't wait to read more of this.

Also, I did some fanart for this. It's not very fancy but I hope you like it. http://www.tthfanfic.org/Story-30574/EKyuchi+New+Worlds.htm
Review By [EKyuchi] • Date [26 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from RocksandGlass
Review:
Still so awesome. Love the prelude to buffy stepping up on a business level, challenging Tony in an unexpected (non slayer) way.
Review By [RocksandGlass] • Date [24 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from terrence
Review:
I absolutely love it. Buffy and Pepper's relationship is wonderful and I can't wait o see them start ganging up on Tony. I like the idea of her paired with Steve, Thor could be fun also. Can't wait to see daddy stark's reaction to that!
Review By [terrence] • Date [24 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from (Current Donor)RngrThorne
Review:
I see Tony making this a lot worse before it gets better. Heh heh.
Review By [(Current Donor)RngrThorne] • Date [22 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
This is an excellent story, but I do have a nitpick. Admittedly, this is coming from a severely traumatized teenager, but she's also a professional warrior and I can't help put pick up some of Joss's knee-jerk "the military is inherently evil" vibe here:

"She stopped and just stared for a second. She was looking at the blueprints, she guessed, of a high tech missile. She was looking at something meant to kill people. In huge numbers. She looked at the other things hanging in the air, half of them were weapons. And for the second time in five minutes reality set in.

This is who Tony Stark was. He built things that killed people. This was who his father had been. This was what had been kept from her."

No country can expect to survive long-term without a strong military. And a strong, competent military needs to be wielding high-quality weapons. Someone has to build them, so I fail to see why Tony is inherently evil for doing so. Admittedly, this was a major nitpick I had with the first Iron Man film as well. "I shall stop making those bad, icky, evil weapons - and instead make a far more sophisticated weapon that I'll fly around in!"
Review By [(Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [22 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from tosca
Review:
Great chapter! I liked the realistic meeting and character conflict/incompatibility. Looking forward to seeing how that goes (and Stane getting his comeuppance).
Review By [tosca] • Date [22 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from raxadian
Review:
Yeah, Tony is a playboy, not a family type. Again, >I love this story, keep it up!
Review By [raxadian] • Date [22 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from randyzoopurple
Review:
yes buffy in power
Review By [randyzoopurple] • Date [22 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from macalaarmstrong
Review:
Hello,
I just wanted to drop a line to let you know how grateful I am that you are still writing this story even though from your notes you've had a hard time lately. I have limited vision so I don't review often, because it takes forever for me to, but I felt you deserved it. I don't know exactly what happened, but it sounded like you have had it hard, and for you to even think about writing for us is amazing. You are an amazing writer, and I have nejoyed the majority of your stories (there is a few that I haven't read I believe, but the ones I have read have rocked). This one Fortune Days and Watching Forever have been my favorites, and I wait eagerly for the updates for this one, and can't wait for the second installment of Watching Forever. So, I wait for your next update eagerly. Keep up teh great work, and have a nice day.

Smiles,
Macala A.
Review By [macalaarmstrong] • Date [22 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from JinaSolo
Review:
I think Buffy needs to get back at Pepper.

There was no real logical reason to put Buffy in the public eye. That was in the companies best interest, not Buffy's. That was manipulation at it's worst. And Buffy is not healing, she is hiding. Harder to let the mask crack after you have been pretending that you are fine... Buffy needs to heal and do what she needs to do, and not what Pepper wants. Pepper needs to accept that.

Now that Tony is back I think that Buffy needs to put her foot down: Pepper leaves her alone, or she is back in Sunnydale - Buffy is the Slayer... Also, lock Pepper put of the house for at least a month...
Review By [JinaSolo] • Date [22 Sep 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from aspifgnfu
Review:
Ok that was very believable. I absolutely love what you did with this chapter both Tony's interactions with Buffy and her response to the stock price dropping. Can't wait to see what you do next.
Review By [aspifgnfu] • Date [21 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from CindyB
Review:
Awesome'ness! I can't wait to see more Buffy and Tony interaction.
Review By [CindyB] • Date [21 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from LNR
Review:
WOO HOO!! Another Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

More please SOON!!!
Review By [LNR] • Date [21 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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