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Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from deathgeonous
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Tony hasn't even officially met Buffy, and he's already screwing things up. Typical. Hehe, this was a great chapter, so, thanks for writing this, and bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [17 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from RocksandGlass
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Still absolutely love this story. Your Buffy is the stand-out achievement, but I'm really enjoying Pepper as well. Love love love that you're planning so far ahead. Can't wait to see where the whole thing goes, but particularly the up-coming full-time Tony addition.
Review By [RocksandGlass] • Date [16 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from lmarie
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Please tell me that the next chapter is coming soon!!!!!!!
Review By [lmarie] • Date [15 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from NutsContract
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Omg! So heartbreaking, poor Buffy!! Thank you so much for updating. I love everything about your story!
Review By [NutsContract] • Date [14 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from FireFlyFan
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This is a very good story and I am glad to hear that you are feeling better enough to continue. The dynamic has just changed dramatically it seems and where it goes from I can't wait to see.
Review By [FireFlyFan] • Date [14 Sep 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from (Past Donor)mpop
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It'll be interesting to see how Tony and Buffy will interact with each other.
Especially after that rather disastrous first meeting.

Hopefully we won't have to wait another year for the next chapter(though I probably will if I have to).
Review By [(Past Donor)mpop] • Date [13 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from Linauri
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Wonderful as always! I hope you're doing well, because I can't wait to read more! As for Melanie... that's not her 'real' name, is it? I actually googled her before I realized you probably changed May's name for your story. Great choice in trainer if that's who it is. I loved May's character. Yeah, she seems cold, but when she's on your side... well, it's almost enough to make you feel sorry for the bad guys. *Almost* :D Definitely a good fit for where Buffy's head is at in your story. Keep up the good work, both on the page and off.

Almost forgot my vote for romance. I love the Buffy/Steve pairing, but I really can't see it working with the personality you've created for Buffy in this story. If you've got her to a more "normal" state of mind by the time they meet, perhaps after spending time at university and working her way out of this social shell she's in, they'd probably be great together. Considering her personality now, though, I would recommend either Clint or Banner. Clint would definitely appeal as a kindred warrior spirit with dark days in his past that she could relate to, but Banner would have that tortured man fighting the beast within thing that drew her to Angel in the first place. The fact that Banner has actually embraced the beast (read: "I'm always angry" - Avenger's movie) and still seems to be a kind and relatively happy man might even set him apart enough from Angel to mitigate the painful similarities. I can see him being a good balance for the personality she displays now, too. Understanding enough of her 'darkness' not to be put off, but similar enough to Steve in the 'good man' department to prevent their relationship from being stuck in the dark and 'broody' place I can see a relationship with Clint ending up. So I guess there's my vote: Bruce Banner. It doesn't hurt that he's a scientist on a level to keep up with Tony, and therefore our newly revealed genius slayer.
Review By [Linauri] • Date [13 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from DarthTenebrus
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He didn't know Joyce was dead. That might be his only defense for his words, the lousy git. A rather pathetic defense, but the only one he had.

And now the repercussions...
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [12 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from DarthTenebrus
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So Lilah Morgan outed our billion dollar Slayer to the press, did she? Hope that backfires right in her face, the incompetent cunt (and I use the British meaning of the word, which is idiot, so there's no confusion as to the context)...

And there was definitely something fishy-smelling about Obadiah Stain...and ERS (Elizabeth Reynolds Stark) aka the Slayer could smell it straight away, good on her.

Later she's trying to design a Kevlar riding jacket for her motorcycle riding. ..then working on her private pilot's license. ..after which she'll need some other distractions, as Jarvis put it. ..she loves speed, loves flying, and she's a supernaturally-empowered warrior with sick martial arts skills. ..

Daddy may have an ARC reactor implanted in his chest, but I think Buffy is soon to become Iron Woman
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [12 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from Bluejello
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I love that we're up to the return of Tony and the new changes/dynamics that will bring.
But I have to say, really, Pepper? It never occurred to her to warn Tony that his daughter was here BEFORE they were in a room together?
Review By [Bluejello] • Date [12 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from dreameralways
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Still loving this story. Stupid Tony, putting his foot in his mouth, but then again, we in the audience know that he has plans and those plans didn't include Buffy. I wonder how long she can keep her secret. If she holds it all the way until the invasion of New York that could lead to some serious bits of interesting. I look forward to more.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [11 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Grovtech
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I can see her doing just that. Going back to her mother. Riding at lunatic speeds back to Sunnydale and to the graveyard. Just maybe now she is over some of her numbness she'll be able to grieve.

However, it'll be Sunnydale in a graveyard and more than likely after dark.

Then again I could be wrong. :)
Review By [Grovtech] • Date [11 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from Duquette
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Take your time, recovery form something like that is no joke, and besides anytime you take to write this is a gift.

Frankly seeing this update was the highlight of my month, that was an evil cliffhanger though.
Review By [Duquette] • Date [11 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from Sandi
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And Tony's last comment is why I don't like Tony Stark. It's totally in character for him for most of his life. Luckily for Buffy he is obscenely rich so she can take a huge chunk and do her own thing.
Review By [Sandi] • Date [11 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from bradsan
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Well that was rude. Wonder what Tony will do. Will he go after Buffy or will he let her go. If he goes after her he can set some things straight right away. If he let her go and do his things first. He will need some very good excuses/reasons because in this state of mind you don't know what she will do.

Wonder how he is gone make this right. Buffy needs her father and all the love she can get.

Wonder if Tony suspect who did this to him and if so I can't wait for what he is gone do about it. Well Buffy already don't trust this person which is good because she will keep her eye on him.

Buffy's gone be the best trained Slayer there is and she already was one of the best. The watcher Council won't stand a change.

Can't wait for some Daddy and daughter moments. Fireworks at first I think.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [11 Sep 14] • Not Rated
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