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Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from nikki
Review:
so waiting on next chapter have reread this multiple times
Review By [nikki] • Date [27 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from LadyRyn
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I'm really enjoying this story! I think you're doing a very good job with it and the flow is pretty good. Few grammatical errors here and there but not enough to really interrupt the story too much. The only complaint I would have is the spacing between sections in a chapter. It's a title bit distracting. Besides that your characterization is good and I feel like you've stayed pretty true to the original characters. Please continue soon!
Review By [LadyRyn] • Date [25 Aug 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from aspifgnfu
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Love the story. And I definitely vote for Steve as her love interest. Are you going to bring the Scoobies back into the story before Tony comes home or are you going to have that later in the story? Also just an idea that may or may not be useful to you, but has been floating around my head: What if the first Scooby she contacts is Cordy? Cordelia wouldn't have any expectations of her like Willow and Xander would. Maybe she could contact her about getting photos of her mom and the gang or something? Just an idea.
Anyway great story can't wait to read more.
Review By [aspifgnfu] • Date [20 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from deathgeonous
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Ah, this is a great fic, and while you did not leave it off at a cliffhanger or anything, which I am supremely grateful for, you did leave this off at a... pivotal point, so, please, continue this as you are able to. Anyways, thanks for writing this, and goodbye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [15 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from ICEGIRLBRR
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I love this fic and can't wait for you to update and I like the idea of Buffy as and Bucky he'd relate to her more and no offense but Steve is just to perfect if you get it he has no scars or stuff in his background like Buffy hope you update soon
Review By [ICEGIRLBRR] • Date [10 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from niamh
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Love the story. Have you thought about Loki or Barnes or Wolverine?
Review By [niamh] • Date [7 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from (Current Donor)wizathogwarts
Review:
Really love this story, fourth time reading, and really looking forward to more.
Review By [(Current Donor)wizathogwarts] • Date [1 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from vivianleigh
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Love this story! In terms of pairings: I think that Steve/Buffy would work. They are both old souls, although in different ways, even at this point in Buffy's development, so a few years into the story timeline that would probably work really well. I am looking forward to Tony's return, though. I imagine that Tony and Buffy would have a rather wonderful battle of the snark, while they're getting used to each other. Keep up the good work!
Review By [vivianleigh] • Date [26 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Prtysmile
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Love this story!!! Love the idea of Buffy being Tony's long lost daughter,can't wait to read and find out how Tony reacts to Buffy being in his "space" lol. Please keep updating!!
Review By [Prtysmile] • Date [15 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from batzulger
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I'm still waiting for 'a story named 'Seven Devils' :)

"Seven Agate Devils' was a great Doc Savage supersaga.
Review By [batzulger] • Date [2 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from ChefJackButler
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I seriously hope you will continue this story. It is excellent.
Review By [ChefJackButler] • Date [1 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from lateVMlover
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This is an incredible story. I'm looking forward to seeing Tony return and interact with Buffy. Steve is too old for Buffy and would not be a good fit. I hope you're feeling better and recovered from your injuries.
Review By [lateVMlover] • Date [25 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from lateVMlover
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Your writing is fantastic. I'm really enjoying this story!
Review By [lateVMlover] • Date [24 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Oddshot
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I am enjoying your story greatly as I was rereading it the other day a thought came to me,

We have seen that Nick Fury is both aware of and helping Buffy and as he knows not to send agents following her but he would still wont someone close to her might I suggest that Agent Romanov be sent in as Buffy's new Martial Arts Teacher, she has the skills.

Fury might have her fake being a ex-potential that was dumped by her Watcher & the Council to help her bond with Buffy , Or maybe Romanov truly is a ex-potential.

{ I know the characters from the Movies more than from the comics }

Oddshot.
Review By [Oddshot] • Date [22 Jun 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from JinaSolo
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Does Buffy have a bond fire when she is 18 an burn all of the red-carpet and dressy shit?
Review By [JinaSolo] • Date [18 Jun 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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