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Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from Lydia
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Well this is a pretty good and interesting story, but I hope its heading somewhere, while we can see that Buffy had gotten slowly over Joyce's death and now she is slowly getting into a relationship with her father, but it feels... too psychological... I find myself wishing for more action, or at least something happening that is more active, but yea its good, I hope to read more soon.
Review By [Lydia] • Date [20 Nov 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from norgco
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Does all the share purchasing Buffy is doing give her enough control to affect whatever evil plans Stane (Stain?) has for the company? She bought 300 million shares in her Charites name in this chapter on top of whatever she already had, is that 300 million out of 1,000 million total, or 300 million out of 1,000,000,000 million total?

If Buffy winds up owning enough shares so that she actually has some say in things it will be interresting. Particularly if Stane goes after her in his imitation Iron Man suit thinking she is the weak link. Nine Billion dollars in share purchases has to at least make her someone who can voice a complaint at a shareholder meeting and not be ignored.

Or does it?
Review By [norgco] • Date [20 Nov 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from terrence
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I loved this chapter. Lindsey was great and her odd relationship with Tony is just awesome. I can't wait for more!
Review By [terrence] • Date [19 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from Morgomir
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Great updates. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [19 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from aussiemel
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This is a brilliant fic. I love this. Keep up the great work. I can't wait to see more.
Review By [aussiemel] • Date [19 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from RocksandGlass
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Great story. I love coming back to read more about this Buffy and Tony is turning out spot on. I like that their relationship is moving on from initial strong hostilities and can't wait for more!
Review By [RocksandGlass] • Date [18 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
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hmm now I am wondering what Wolf ram and heart (or is it hart?) is up to with Buffy. So glad you updated. glad to see Buffy standing up for what Tony is doing. SO I am curious what this new Charity Jarvis designed for Buffy is going to do? and doesn't the fact that the money is now in a charity mean that it isn't her private funds anymore? a little confused but the part with the charity threw me off a little or maybe a bunch. lol so looking forward to more. did you ever decide on an eventual pairing with Buffy? very much looking forward to that as well.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [17 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from Lilkitsu
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Loving the story still. But would Buffy really just give in on not taking some lessons, after her deal with Pepper. Sure, she didn't want to do them in the first place, but still... It might upset Pepper.

After reading some comments about the stock thing... I say it's a tad tricky. But in Batman begins, Bruce Wayne essentially does the same thing. I really don't see anything illegal. Shady from a certain point of view, but the truth of the matter coming to light in an investigation wouldn't only clear that up, it would again make Buffy look good, having wanted to buy stock in a company to make sure she could protect jobs after her father bungled a retooling of the company. A retooling she agrees with. But I could see Lilac or Lindsey trying to work that angle. And have it blow up on them.

When Buffy figures out or finds out about Iron Man, I think she may get angry at him. She is an experienced superhero after all, and it burned her. If he gives his little "I should be dead speech"... That would be an intense conversation to read.
I look forward to seeing who you bring in and how. But, I do wonder, since you brought up that diner thing, I thought Buffy might still take a side trip to free some slaves. Still wondering what happened with that, or if it will be brought up at all. Mixing high tech Iron man with low tech supernatural seems like a pretty big challenge. But it has to mix eventually. Buffy is still the Slayer, after all. Anyway, still loving it.
Review By [Lilkitsu] • Date [17 Nov 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from cmdruhura
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Of course that still leaves the option of killing him when he's awake. So he should be worried.
Review By [cmdruhura] • Date [17 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from bradsan
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Wow Lindsey, He is yummy.

Knowing Lindsey he will keeps most stuff to himself and use it when he needs it.

Buffy can turn evil to 'good'. Wonder if she can do that to Lindsey.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [17 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from nightshift
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Their version of father/daughter bonding reminds me of the joke on how porcupines mate. They're doing it...but VERY carefully, and there's bound to be some pain along the way. You can see glimpses of the old Buffy still, but I prefer the more mature, somewhat darker Buffy.
Review By [nightshift] • Date [17 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from IronOx
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Lots of fun, thank you for posting. Buffy and Tony are bonding just fine; in their own Stark fashion. And having a lot of fun working out the physics on how steam can come out of Pepper's ears.

Re some previous comments, not seeing why the SEC would have a successful action re the stock purchase - no real evidence there IS any inside information or any deceptive public information here. And I can't see Jarvis so inept as not to properly set up the Joy Foundation in line with whatever purpose Buffy expressed.

I am wondering a bit how many types of expertise the Slayer spirit can help with. Buffy seems to be learning unusually quickly in all directions even for genius level.
Review By [IronOx] • Date [17 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from Maleficuslupus
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*shakes his head* I can't believe I forgot to check if this fic was updated for so long, gah! I can't wait for more. :)
Review By [Maleficuslupus] • Date [17 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from slmncpm
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i like the way buffy and tony are interacting. it seems a very good fit for the characters. i wish i had some good ideas for you. i would love to inspire, instead, have some scones to feed the muses. *hands you scones*
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [17 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from RevDorothyL
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Love it! Definite progress in the father-daughter relationship-building, even if it's as unconventional as both Buffy and Tony themselves.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [17 Nov 14] • Not Rated
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