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Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from Chan
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Be unfortunate if they discovered they only got on each others nerves when they start talking about deeper things if they ever get around to doing that of course.

Interesting approach she's taken to save some jobs for the shut down portion of Stark Industries although finding them things to do/make might make for some interesting shuffling if the financial cops don't rap her knuckles first.
Review By [Chan] • Date [18 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from arturusoriginal
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Very nice, slow build up. You have a great story here and I'm really looking forward to seeing where you take this.
Review By [arturusoriginal] • Date [9 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from rpgwarrior
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Wow, Melanie was perfect. She came in with a story that Buffy can never confirm to forge a connection and then spun a nice little web to make sure Buffy would never trust the Council again. Don't worry Buffy, when things go wrong surely you can trust your teacher and SHIELD, they pointed out the villainy of the Council after all.
Review By [rpgwarrior] • Date [5 Oct 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from dajohu
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Freaking epic! Love this fic. Stark is one of my favorite characters (at least the movie version) and I love Buffy real family fics so this is perfect. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter. :D
-dajohu
Review By [dajohu] • Date [4 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from lunalurker
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And the long holding pattern of angst has broken, and we have progress, yay!
And Buffy and Tony meeting went about as utterly terribad as I guessed it would, for he is the Biggest Jackass.
Interested to see where this might lead, if it really does start catching up with the movies and shows. Thanks for writing.
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [1 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from Taisy
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I have been remiss, I have been reading this from the first posting and have totally neglected to review. I have enjoyed the progress of Buffy from Buffy Summers to Buffy Stark; a very simple but necessary distinction. I'm excited to see Tony back and am looking forward to seeing what you do in this 'verse.

Thank you for the interesting read.
Review By [Taisy] • Date [1 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from mithrilandtj
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I love this story!

BTW it is not "Woldram and Hart"
It's Wolfram and Hart (as in Wolf, Ram, & Hart)
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [28 Sep 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from FireFlash
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For some reason, I only just found this story, despite it having been in progress for 2 years (and having you on author alerts). Must've missed the email or something.

But Yeah! Another Jezaeiri story! :) As usual, this one is shaping up to be excellent as well as epic. I look forward to the next installment. Soon-ish?

You know, if the site wasn't so HP-centric, I'd send a rec for you to be invited to Jeconais' web site. (You don't happen to have any HP fics do you?)
Review By [FireFlash] • Date [26 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from EKyuchi
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This story is amazing. I love how original it is and how everyone stays in character. I can't wait to read more of this.

Also, I did some fanart for this. It's not very fancy but I hope you like it. http://www.tthfanfic.org/Story-30574/EKyuchi+New+Worlds.htm
Review By [EKyuchi] • Date [26 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from RocksandGlass
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Still so awesome. Love the prelude to buffy stepping up on a business level, challenging Tony in an unexpected (non slayer) way.
Review By [RocksandGlass] • Date [24 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from terrence
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I absolutely love it. Buffy and Pepper's relationship is wonderful and I can't wait o see them start ganging up on Tony. I like the idea of her paired with Steve, Thor could be fun also. Can't wait to see daddy stark's reaction to that!
Review By [terrence] • Date [24 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from (Current Donor)RngrThorne
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I see Tony making this a lot worse before it gets better. Heh heh.
Review By [(Current Donor)RngrThorne] • Date [22 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
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This is an excellent story, but I do have a nitpick. Admittedly, this is coming from a severely traumatized teenager, but she's also a professional warrior and I can't help put pick up some of Joss's knee-jerk "the military is inherently evil" vibe here:

"She stopped and just stared for a second. She was looking at the blueprints, she guessed, of a high tech missile. She was looking at something meant to kill people. In huge numbers. She looked at the other things hanging in the air, half of them were weapons. And for the second time in five minutes reality set in.

This is who Tony Stark was. He built things that killed people. This was who his father had been. This was what had been kept from her."

No country can expect to survive long-term without a strong military. And a strong, competent military needs to be wielding high-quality weapons. Someone has to build them, so I fail to see why Tony is inherently evil for doing so. Admittedly, this was a major nitpick I had with the first Iron Man film as well. "I shall stop making those bad, icky, evil weapons - and instead make a far more sophisticated weapon that I'll fly around in!"
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [22 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from tosca
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Great chapter! I liked the realistic meeting and character conflict/incompatibility. Looking forward to seeing how that goes (and Stane getting his comeuppance).
Review By [tosca] • Date [22 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from raxadian
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Yeah, Tony is a playboy, not a family type. Again, >I love this story, keep it up!
Review By [raxadian] • Date [22 Sep 14] • Not Rated
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