Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from MarcusRowland
just re-read this, I'd really like to see more.
Review By [MarcusRowland
] • Date [2 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from fanreaderonetwo
I say again, More Please!!!
Review By [fanreaderonetwo
] • Date [1 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from etraytin
The story is great, I'd love to see more!
Review By [etraytin
] • Date [26 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from nerfherder
Yah, loved it! Nice idea, well executed. More?
Review By [nerfherder
] • Date [25 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Mistic
I fully admit that I keep an eye out for updates on this story but this must be the first time I review it, mostly because I'm so uncertain on just how you intend to draw all these elements together, I am also fully able to admit that I dislike OC's.
What you have in abstract is actually quite good fun to read even. It's only when you put the Stark world and therefore the Buffy world together you get conflicting stories and reports. Marvel just never seemed like an ideal or easy world to merge together with Whedon fantasy works. Don't get me wrong both are brilliant and I was especially fond of the Avengers movie it just doesn't seem to be going so well for you.
Questions range from, when in the Buffy verse has Buffy been taken from? Between what episodes and seasons? To if Buffy was the only Slayer out there that wouldn't stop the council from trying to kill her if she refused her duties regardless of how powerful or how much money someone had, they would just magic themselves impervious to whatever or erase the knowledge they held of the event.
Well good luck, I do look forward to future updates despite my gloomy outlook. Hope to see more from you soon. Bye!
Review By [Mistic
] • Date [17 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Kalliza
I still love this story, and very much hope you haven't abandoned it. I can't wait for Buffy to finally meet Tony!
Review By [Kalliza
] • Date [15 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Richardthrnnsx
Just reread this and its still a top story.
Any chance of more?
Review By [Richardthrnnsx
] • Date [2 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from atz
One of my favourite stories on the site. Some ideas to help feed your muse, so you can feed my appetite for more chapters:
Martial arts instructor recognising Buffy as a slayer
Pepper calling/visiting Giles for more information
Willow hacking far enough that SHIELD get involved; or Jarvis resorts to a boatload of snark in response
James Rhodes surprising Buffy and getting tossed on his rump in front of Pepper
Buffy and Pepper get attacked by a human during one of their activities, with Buffy breaking down after Pepper gets injured and she nearly kills the assailant while releasing some the darkness she now believes is in her
Pepper's response when Buffy reveals her plan to avoid high school
Keep up the good work!
Review By [atz
] • Date [21 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from bookworm
Just found this yesterday through ElzaCBoe's art, and I'm highly enjoying it! It's terrible what's happened to Buffy, but hopefully, Pepper, Declan and eventually Tony can continue to bring her out of it a little. Maybe even Willow at some point. I'm also guessing from your last clip of SHIELD that her martial arts master might know more about being the Slayer than she assumes... Here's hoping you have time and/or inspiration to write more of this sometime soonish. For now I guess I'll have to take a look at your other stories!
Review By [bookworm
] • Date [9 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from PowerCorrupts
This story is awesome, please update soon.
Review By [PowerCorrupts
] • Date [3 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from amortentiate
This has been one of the best crossovers I've ever read. It desperately needs a new chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [amortentiate
] • Date [24 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from fanreaderonetwo
Add another to the "request for updates" list, as I like this fic _a lot_.
Among other things, I keep imagining a _very_ egotistical martial arts
master meeting for their first lesson together. He discovers that she
knows more his martial art than he does, and could defeat him in combat
or a duel without working up a sweat. "Mistress, please take me on as your
More likely is Jarvis reporting to Pepper and/or Tony about what he has
observed about "Elizabeth". You know things like..... Reaction speed
far faster than the human upper end, physical strength _many_ times
greater than it should be possible for a human of her size and mass,
superhuman hearing, near superhuman vision incredibly fast healing.
Review By [fanreaderonetwo
] • Date [14 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from justapiranha
So it has been pointed out to me that your last update was March 21,2013. Now that we are at the end of 2013 do you think you could give us another one? I mean with almost 600 reviews you would think we deserve it as a Christmas present to all your loyal fans. How about we feed that muse of yours? I am currently making my holiday edition of chocolate covered popcorn.It is popcorn covered in white chocolate and holiday spice drops. or Would your muse be happy with a box of chocolate fudge? Tell us how to feed your muse and many of us will gladly feed her/him.
Review By [justapiranha
] • Date [10 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Anne
Was just rereading this! I still love it! Will you please, pleeeaaase update? :')
Review By [Anne
] • Date [1 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from randyzoopurple
Review By [randyzoopurple
] • Date [11 Nov 13] • Not Rated