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Mithras Chronicles

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Review of chapter "Triple Trouble" from raxadian
Review:
Uh, the Hyena spirit?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [1 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Less Than Grateful" from DieselDriver
Review:
What a nutcase...
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [2 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "0.2" from demonichellfire
Review:
Why no Harmonica from "Once upon time in the West"?
Comments from author:
Because I had enough chars, my major regret was I didn't
get a Gary Cooper, a James Stewart, or a Clint Eastwood in,
just a John Wayne.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [demonichellfire] • Date [24 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Truth" from DieselDriver
Review:
"Travers smiled. But soon her and Mithras would be knelt at his feet, grovelling for mercy. Soon."

As soon as I read this line of Travers' I couldn't help but say to myself "hun uh! Ain't gonna happen".

Yeah, this is the Travers I've come to know and hate. He makes a good "hatee" because he's such a "hater".
Comments from author:
And he's such a snob.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [24 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DieselDriver
Review:
Cancer man can't develop it fast enough to suit me. It amazes me but there really are people that stupid. They want to control others and they can't even control themselves.
Comments from author:
Get your own organisation in order before you try and take over others...
Basic really.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [23 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mithras Chronicles Chapter 1" from DieselDriver
Review:
Travers is a very bad man. There's a pit of fire somewhere, where you cannot die (again) prepared special just for him.
Comments from author:
Yes he is.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [22 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "LA Style" from raxadian
Review:
The non-aggression spell doesn't work on humans, I guess the slayer is non human enough for it to work on her?
Comments from author:
Well that's where her power comes from.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [21 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mithras Chronicles Chapter 1" from raxadian
Review:
Oh, they are gonna need to keep on moving and using fake names,
Comments from author:
Gotta keep out of the way of their enemies.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [21 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "0.3" from demonichellfire
Review:
Just wondering about Faith and Xander. Do they have any memories of Dawn?

Also the "Boy" line classic horror good use of it.
Comments from author:
Nope, they weren't in Sunnydale at the time,
so the monks didn't require the spell to
affect them.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [demonichellfire] • Date [7 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "0.3" from wonderbee
Review:
Good to see faith saved from Baba Yaga and her plots, but will have to wonder if that old witch will start to obsess over catching faith, or if she might go after another convenient slayer, one that doesn't have Mithras watching their back. With that, and hopefully new allies that can help Mitras out in the Middle East, maybe some of the weight will be off Xander's shoulders.
Comments from author:
The Brotherhood continues to expand its operations
& gain more allies.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [wonderbee] • Date [7 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "0.3" from Traveler
Review:
Thank you for continuing the series. I enjoyed them when I first found the originals and continue to enjoy them here. Action, adventure, great evil, humor and add beautiful ladies, what's not to like with these stories. Thanks for sharing with us and please keep doing so.
Comments from author:
Thanks for a wonderful review.
Review By [Traveler] • Date [5 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "0.2" from demonichellfire
Review:
No Ash Williams yet you have the Necronomicon. What's up with that
Comments from author:
Necronomicon is a Lovecraft reference, pre-dating Ash Williams
by over fifty years.
Review By [demonichellfire] • Date [22 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Less Than Grateful" from draconis
Review:
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Quite enjoying the multiple crossovers. I can see this is building up to quite an event when the final battle takes place.

The fight scenes seem a bit formulaic so far, but I think the variety will improve as the story progresses. The relationships seem to be developing as well. I find the idea of Tara gaining self-confidence very appealing.

I do have a comment re the excommunication of Padre Richeur. I think it more likely the Church wouldn't have excommunicated him (Church Dogma would also require much worse charges for excommunication). The Church is much more politically intelligent than that and is much more careful with potential troublemakers. If the Church didn't execute him, then he would have been assigned to a mission in some third-world country where they could keep an eye on him, and bury him with assignments, reporting requirements, and so on. That way he'd also still be serving the Church, but in an out-of-the-way highly isolated place with slow communications where he could do much less harm. Some village deep in the Amazon jungle for example. Such an assignment also lets the Church keep a very close eye on him. Being excommunicated...the Church loses control and oversight and is much less likely to be able to prevent him causing further trouble for the Church.
Comments from author:
For the finale, yeah I have a location, an army, a foe, and an
enemy. Just gotta work out the battle now....

Yeah, Tara needed her time to shine. The trouble with the show
was that the spotlight was never really on her (lots of characters
post Season 3 never got it), so she never had chance to develop.

But now she's Doc Strange's apprentice.

As for the Padre. I'm aware of my fudging as regards excommunication,
but following closer to church dogma didn't really serve the story and
what I wanted to do with the character, so....

Thanks for the review.
Review By [draconis] • Date [21 Mar 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "0.2" from IUseAFakeName
Review:
Not knowing anything about Freelance Restorations, I don't know if you're just being faithful to the source material, but you should be aware that in modern usage, the term 'Chinaman' is at best pejorative, and at worst a full out racial slur.

Likewise, the term 'oriental' (much like the term occidental), are meant to describe objects, not people. It's use as descriptive of a person is seen as dehumanizing, and thus racist.

Aside from this (unintentional, I hope) bit of racism, I did enjoy this story arc. The only complaint I have is that you spend so much time and effort building up the villian, only for him to be taken down rather quickly.
Comments from author:
Black Jack Tarr is an old-fashioned racist, so yeah, he would talk like that.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [IUseAFakeName] • Date [21 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mithras Chronicles Chapter 1" from Difdi
Review:
> “Nerve gas.”

One of the things that makes modern nerve gases so deadly is they are absorbed through the skin, not just when inhaled. While a vampire almost certainly wouldn't get killed by such a gas, the fact that they can get drunk shows they're not completely immune to toxins. Depending on the gas, this should result in anything from a lack of coordination to unconsciousness -- not a total lack of effect.
Comments from author:
Interesting consideration.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Difdi] • Date [19 Mar 14] • Not Rated
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