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Review of chapter "In the Beginning" from Blackguard
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Great start, looking forward to where this will go.
Review By [Blackguard] • Date [23 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In the Beginning" from MadHobbit
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good start,Buffy tends to slay first and ask after, I can see Xander needing someone to hold her back until things are explained. what the Xander may not be seeing ,is Giles first and foremost duty is to Buffy, and if Xander is a threat to her he will do what ever it takes to protect her.
Review By [MadHobbit] • Date [17 Aug 12] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In the Beginning" from (Recent Donor)Tanaxanth
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Very interesting... though I am curious as to why Xander feels Buffy would slay him?
Hyena has already taken place and she didn't do it when he was possessed, of course unless you plan on playing the hypocritical slayer card he shouldn't have much to worry about.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Tanaxanth] • Date [6 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In the Beginning" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [5 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In the Beginning" from Bluesnowman
Review:
interesting
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [5 Jul 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In the Beginning" from Oxnate
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A Witcher cross. Interesting. Hope to see more of this.

I'll reserve judgment until after the infodump. But I like the setup. One point: Buffy would not Slay Xander so long as he still looked like Xander. She wouldn't slay Angelus, she wouldn't slay Giles in Fayral form, she won't slay Xander.

Keep up the good work.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [5 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In the Beginning" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
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Hmm, interesting. I am completely unfamiliar with this cross but it seems to fit well with both Xanders character and will the Buffyverse. It will be interesting to see how long you can keep Buffy in the dark so to speak about Xanders new powers. I would recommend not too long, they need to deal with the issues raised by him getting powers earlier rather than later unless you are planning on breaking up the Scooby team.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [5 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In the Beginning" from willboon
Review:
great story keep it up
Review By [willboon] • Date [5 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In the Beginning" from xon
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You shouldn't have gone for the infodump.

Also, don't mention the extra books. By the time of the Halloween incident, there were only three that had been written and released.
Review By [xon] • Date [5 Jul 12] • Not Rated
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