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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from raxadian
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Well, this will be interesting.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [21 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Cdog
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Now you've got me hungry for more. I will say this though, the timeline is starting to confuse even me now. I'm not entirely sure, but I think I'm starting to loose track of where we are and where we should be.
Review By [Cdog] • Date [24 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Morgomir
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Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [19 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mordare
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I love all your little spinoffs and the storyline is excellent. Glad to see you writing more in the series. Keep up the awesome job.
Review By [Mordare] • Date [9 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from theraceskong
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I enjoyed this story in this universe, but I did have one problem. wouldn't Andvari have identified himself as a Stellar Sentinel instead of a Green Lantern? Despite this i did enjoy this and that a second individual had survived the previous Corps.
Review By [theraceskong] • Date [6 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
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nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [5 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Letomo
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Interesting, there was a surviving GL, he just wasn't in our galaxy! And, I'm guessing the DW crossover was the temporal shielding? Though that was also mentioned in a ST:V episode.

I think that last phrase would have had more oomph if the words were spread out, not bunched.

There is so much more that opens up because of this. How will Andavari [sp?] react to the discovery that there are now, what, 4 more GLs? 5? And, how will he react to the presence of an old comrade of his, again wearing a ring? Will he be visiting Xander, and would that be main line story, or anothe side one? Is he going to be the new Kilowog?

How will he deal with the new Rings having the ability to reproduce? Is he going to get his ring reprogrammed? If his can't will he be giving up his old ring, that he is comfortable with, and has used for millenia, or just carry one of the new ones with to spawn copies from, while continueing to use his old one? Are there other differences?

As shown in the last few years of the GL comics, will there be a way to go through yellow with enough effort? Will Xander know of a way to harness the other lights, and will he want to?

This has been one of my favourite series on here, and I've reread it a few times. Glad you have come back, and I hope there is more to come!
Review By [Letomo] • Date [5 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from yog
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I have to ask - what makes Xander so special? Why hasn't been Andvari going around rebuilding the corps? Egeria was imprisoned, but he still has access to his ring and a power battery.

Unless these rings can't duplicate themselves (which us supported by Goa'uld boast of destroying all the rings and by Andvari's surprise at seeing another ring) and the facility they were produced in was unavailable (likely destroyed, as if it was just gene-locked to ancients, Asgards would have found someone trustworthy with an ATA gene). We already know that the corps are different (this one is a galaxy-wide organization, while the other spans the universe).

You should address this issue.
Review By [yog] • Date [5 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JonnyNapalm
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Fantastic! Love that you're working on Emerald Knights again... seriously it's one of my favorite series.
The brief look at Teal'c accepting the responsibility of the ring, and his oath were terrific. Fun to introduce another Lantern too.
And while Teal'c's imagination may be limited...I'd guess his memory for Earth popular culture would be prodigious. He'd likely use things he's seen from films and television as weapons. At least that's my thought. Could be fun to play with.
Review By [JonnyNapalm] • Date [5 Jul 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JoshuaRichardson
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Interesting, an other Green Lantern Corps? In a Galaxy far, far away? And don't think I missed the Marvel Refrence, 616 indeed. Thanks for (all) the updates, you have made my day!
Review By [JoshuaRichardson] • Date [5 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Tjin
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AAK! Now i have this terror Image of Mordin Solus with a Power Ring... thank you Sooo much for that nightmare,
Review By [Tjin] • Date [5 Jul 12] • Not Rated
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