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Review of chapter "3" from agnar
Review:
Sorry but unless Xander knows about his kids via Faith, knows she gave them up for adoption and never told him, then he would NEVER treat her this badly, worse than ALL the others. It's bullshit. All the shit that Buffy, Willow and Giles pulled that risked lives, the whole fucking WORLD, and Xander forgave them right fucking away.

But Faith chokes Xander and you have him treating her like she's Angelus for years after? It just comes off as artificial angst, badly out of character.
Comments from author:
I refer you to my last reply to your 'reviews'.

Come back when you've got the stones to
publish something.
Review By [agnar] • Date [20 Mar 14] • Rating [2 out of 10]
Review of chapter "19" from iChaos
Review:
Great story. I haven't read one quite like this before, that's for sure, and really liked the whole 'Beatrix Kiddo' angle on the plot.
Comments from author:
I always thought Xander\Faith in the motel room should have consequences of some sort.

And the most obvious consequence was pregnancy. And if active Slayers very rarely gave
birth, it made sense that such a child(ren) could be highly prized both as leverage and in
themselves in supernatural circles.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [iChaos] • Date [22 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "19" from jakedaman
Review:
I laughed, I cried, it became a part of me!

Seriously, very well done! Bravo!!
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [jakedaman] • Date [6 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "19" from Obsidian
Review:
Bravo! (clapping) Loved it! thanks.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [23 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "19" from DebraN
Review:
You wrote a very sweet romantic ending for us. Thanks for sharing your story.
Comments from author:
It was soppy wasn't it??? :D

Thanks for the review.
Review By [DebraN] • Date [11 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "19" from MMWillow
Review:
perfect!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review!
Review By [MMWillow] • Date [25 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "19" from DesitaniaF
Review:
WOOO!!! Excellent story! I would love a few chapters of domestic fluff if you feel like writing it, my favorite stories are ones where nothing bad happens.
Comments from author:
You have to have the bad to make the good special.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [DesitaniaF] • Date [25 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "19" from banditdoz
Review:
wow excelent I just have one question what does this mean?

“FINE!” he could tell from the look in Buffy’s eyes she was far from happy. He was suddenly very happy she was still cookie dough.

Still cookie dough????????

EDIT: Just watched it hahaha thanks :D
Comments from author:
Don't you remember? That blithering nonsense in the Buffy finale where Buffy is talking to Angel and she compares herself to cookie dough?

Thanks for the review.
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [24 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "19" from DrDamage
Review:
awwwwwwww :) good fic maaaaan
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review!
Review By [DrDamage] • Date [23 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "19" from darkcarnage
Review:
Still a great story and one of my favorite.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [darkcarnage] • Date [22 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "19" from Morgomir
Review:
Great ending. Keep up the good work, whatever it may be.
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [22 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "19" from OlBear
Review:
An excellent story. Thank you for sharing.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review!
Review By [OlBear] • Date [22 Jan 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "18" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
fine read, thank you. the chapter ending is very entertaining.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [20 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "18" from DebraN
Review:
I liked that Faith was honest with Xander but didn’t sugar coat the past. Buffy and Willow’s visit to Wolfram & Hart was too much fun. While Giles’ suggestion that Wesley become the head of Watcher West and run it with Angel out of LA was a nice twist. Oh, and the Connor/Dawn connection should be very entertaining, especially once Buffy finds out.

Thanks for sharing,
Debra
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review.
Review By [DebraN] • Date [14 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "18" from Ghostrider
Review:
The humor in this latest chapter had me laughing out loud. The talk between Xander and Faith was heartwarming. And Buffy and Willow's raid into W&H was nicely done. Sad to know that Vi and Rona are gone, though. Of all the other Slayers, they were my favorites.
Comments from author:
I have a preference for Kennedy and Dana...

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Ghostrider] • Date [14 Jan 13] • Not Rated
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