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Review of chapter ""Grab your gear."" from JediKnight
Review:
Interesting start.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [15 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter ""Grab your gear."" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [30 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter ""Grab your gear."" from PATM
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Dawn! Spot on dialog, throw in Dawn and the snark will hit the fan.
Review By [PATM] • Date [14 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter ""Grab your gear."" from serenityselena
Review:
that was a great start... an amusing one as well...
eagerly awaiting to read more ^_^
Comments from author:
I tried to follow the TV show's premises. Thanks for reading.
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [12 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter ""Grab your gear."" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Read and look forward to where you might be taking this.
Comments from author:
This one, the first 4-6 chapters are already outlined, so, should go up a little faster.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [12 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter ""Grab your gear."" from Gideon
Review:
Just in time! Tony will be pleased :)
Comments from author:
Wouldn't be as effective if it wasn't. Thanks for reading.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [12 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter ""Grab your gear."" from Sandi
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'We found a dead homeless person who once dated a person of military interest' would work too to get out of that training.

I get to watch mandatory ESD prevention classes. "Don't fry the sensitive electronic circuit boards." It's the one with the pink pig if you're in the business. So I totally understand.
Comments from author:
Wow, I didn't expect the cold start to be such an attention getter!

Thanks for reading.
Review By [Sandi] • Date [12 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter ""Grab your gear."" from AllenPitt
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I know how they feel. That's hours out of my life that I won't be getting back (last such video/seminar on sexual harassment we all had to take). And it didn't even teach us how to do it right, it was, like, against it! Who knew?
Comments from author:
Heh. Thankfully, no seminars, and the videos I've seen are only about 15 minutes, if that.

And the only time we see Ziva in one, she licked Tony [in the seminar!]! Plus, it felt like a good open, something we'd see before the credits on the show.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [12 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter ""Grab your gear."" from Ghostrider
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I myself have just finished re-watching all seasons of NCIS myself and it has strengthened my dislike of Very Special Agent Dinozzo as I watch his supposedly fun-filled taunts etc. towards McGee. So I'm hoping that in this story, he might get a bit of his own medicine. I adore the beginning, with the whole mandatory seminars and them looking frantically for a case to avoid going to them.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading! I'm currently in season 8, and he has actually mostly matured here. Or so I will show it. He may have a little trouble, but not that much. But, characters have gotten away from me before, so, we'll have to see!
Review By [Ghostrider] • Date [12 Jul 12] • Not Rated
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