You did a nice job with this story and I hope you will get inspired to write a sequel.

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Princess Cake::

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"I am Grey. I stand between the candle
and the star. We are Grey. We stand
between the darkness and the light."
- Delenn, Babylon 5
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Thank you very much.

Chapter Seven

rofl...the poor Joes :)

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now they met RedTree :)

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ouch poor Xander's thumb :)

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yeah I wonder what they want with the hotel as well.

Thank you for the review(s) :)

Very nice job on the story, I hope for a sequal.

-Are you familiar with "G.I. Joe: Renegades"?

I'm familiar with it but didn't like the concept, it felt wrong.

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nice enough start to check out chapter 2. And that dance? Should be a law to do for new lawyers :)

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nice retelling of the H. night

3.

ahh Willow in hacker mode and nice to see Faith.

4.

looks like some puzzle pieces are coming together for Xander

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ahh now someone wants to catch a Willow :)


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now Xander's dad is coming to LA

Thank you for the reviews :)

I have been tracking for a while but have only just started reading. very interesting so far my only problem is that you used the name Hector; I know you have resigns but I work with a guy named Hector and I have difficulty hearing or reading that name without having him come to mind... lets just say squee:p. I'll try to suck it up and get over it but I hope you appreciate my trama.

Umm I'm sorry?
Glad you enjoyed the story otherwise.

Great story, I like the ending.

Thank you. Have appreciated the reviews

Normally I am not a fan of Xander centered fics. This one however works and I actually like the character of Xander in the fic. Well done. I do hope you consider a sequel it has a lot of potential as a series. It might make a good avenger cross as well maybe bringing in family for one of the other slayers or even a minor character. I would love to see GI Joe and SHIELD go at it over the slayers. It be a fun fight to watch. Anyway good fic.

Thank you for the review, sorry I missed it earlier

Normally I am not a fan of Xander centered fics. This one however works and I actually like the character of Xander in the fic. Well done. I do hope you consider a sequel it has a lot of potential as a series. It might make a good avenger cross as well maybe bringing in family for one of the other slayers or even a minor character. I would love to see GI Joe and SHIELD go at it over the slayers. It be a fun fight to watch. Anyway good fic.

Thank you...
If anything I MIGHT do some one shots, but I'm not sure about a full on fic.

Ah, Cobra. A world leader in Stupid Evil for thirty consecutive years... so incompetent at leadership that they had to build robot and synthoid troops, because the human ones aim ten feet to one side and surrender as soon as they have a plausible chance. Still hung up on the 'one strike, you're dead' motivational program, I see.>
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Are the Joes any better?

Hell no.

Pretty much the only reason they win is that Cobra couldn't be allowed to for plot reasons....

Go back and watch the original TV series from the 80's and you'll see what I mean. (Actually the live action movie is just as bad.)

Nothing better than a villian who is designed to lose, though IF, and that is a BIG IF, I write a sequel I think the Commander might be slightly better than he'd been portrayed.

What the frack???
This is Xander's story, you can't kill the main character! Plus Wills has enough witchy power that she can heal him!

I can't?? Are you sure??
And does she?

~grins evilly~

Ah, Cobra. A world leader in Stupid Evil for thirty consecutive years... so incompetent at leadership that they had to build robot and synthoid troops, because the human ones aim ten feet to one side and surrender as soon as they have a plausible chance. Still hung up on the 'one strike, you're dead' motivational program, I see.

I would call this more fumbling the ball in your own endzone type of penalty.
Thank you for the review.

I think I understand of not doing a joe and cobra fight part hard to tell what weapon they are using since this is base off the cartoon a helpful ideal would be to use Nerf n-strike guns or star wars the old republic guns.

Xander better not die because I got a feeling Hawk might give him,Faith,Williow an offer.

I spent the better part of a week trying to figure out a plausible fight with the Joes and kept failing.
Still not happy with my slayer fight either but wanted to get this posted.

Yes, yes you are a stinker.

A rather anti-climatic battle when Willow gets angry and ends it.

Combat is hard for me to write that is one thing I need assistance with in future stories.
Thank you for the review.

Bad, bad Tanaxanth, you leave us thinking you are killing off Xander!
Oh you evil author you, darn cliffhangers.

Anyway, that's out of the way.
Good fight scene, just a bit light on detail but enough to visualize it. Maybe a bit dramatic with Willows line there at the end, but since it is a GI Joe crossover that actually fits with their dialog.

Thanks for a good chapter!

Cliffies are fun especially that type.
I freely admit to being evil though, it's so much more fun.
Thank you for the review.

Very good

Thank you