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Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from DieselDriver
Review:
I really really like this one. Hope you are writing or have written the sequel.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [31 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from DieselDriver
Review:
Xander's the Hero! Woo Hoo! They save him of course... Right?
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [31 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from DieselDriver
Review:
I really like this. Xander using the Hyena is cool!!!
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [31 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from DieselDriver
Review:
The only thing I know about "G.I. Joe" is a few comics I read to many decades ago. Are you going by a movie? The Comics? A book? Something else?

This is getting interesting and is fun to read.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [31 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from DieselDriver
Review:
Calling a Pollymorph "Polly" is just crackers. So to speak... What a cool ability though. Have to wonder how many shapes "Polly" can shift to or is there a limit? Is she like "Jimmy Trauger", who attends the "Whately Academy" where they teach High School to a bunch of teenage mutants? Jimmy T. can not only shift to any shape or virtually no shape, just a giant amoeba, to a 50 foot tall woman, like the one in the stupid movie. He's pretty cool. To kill him, you'd have to vaporize him.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [31 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from DieselDriver
Review:
Heh, my first thought when I read the name "Flagg" was Mash. Then to "Randall Flagg", AKA "the walking man".
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [31 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from DieselDriver
Review:
Seems Xander has more different adventures based on Halloween than I would have thought possible. This seems to be a good one. Accidentally dressing up as his own (real) father who was apparently part of a clandestine project is a cool idea.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [31 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Rubel
Review:
Neat. I especially like how Xander kept stumbling across Cobra schemes.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
I need to re-write this sometime to fix a lot of stuff I could have done better.
But thank you all the same for your review.
Review By [Rubel] • Date [8 Dec 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Dragonelf
Review:
You did a nice job with this story and I hope you will get inspired to write a sequel.

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Princess Cake::

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"I am Grey. I stand between the candle
and the star. We are Grey. We stand
between the darkness and the light."
- Delenn, Babylon 5
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Comments from author:
Thank you very much.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [2 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
Chapter Seven

rofl...the poor Joes :)

8.

now they met RedTree :)

9.

ouch poor Xander's thumb :)

10.

yeah I wonder what they want with the hotel as well.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review(s) :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [15 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from JediKnight
Review:
Very nice job on the story, I hope for a sequal.

-Are you familiar with "G.I. Joe: Renegades"?
Comments from author:
I'm familiar with it but didn't like the concept, it felt wrong.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [10 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
1.

nice enough start to check out chapter 2. And that dance? Should be a law to do for new lawyers :)

2.

nice retelling of the H. night

3.

ahh Willow in hacker mode and nice to see Faith.

4.

looks like some puzzle pieces are coming together for Xander

5.

ahh now someone wants to catch a Willow :)


6.
now Xander's dad is coming to LA
Comments from author:
Thank you for the reviews :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [5 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from lillyb
Review:
I have been tracking for a while but have only just started reading. very interesting so far my only problem is that you used the name Hector; I know you have resigns but I work with a guy named Hector and I have difficulty hearing or reading that name without having him come to mind... lets just say squee:p. I'll try to suck it up and get over it but I hope you appreciate my trama.
Comments from author:
Umm I'm sorry?
Glad you enjoyed the story otherwise.
Review By [lillyb] • Date [16 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Great story, I like the ending.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Have appreciated the reviews
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [31 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from FireWolfe
Review:
Normally I am not a fan of Xander centered fics. This one however works and I actually like the character of Xander in the fic. Well done. I do hope you consider a sequel it has a lot of potential as a series. It might make a good avenger cross as well maybe bringing in family for one of the other slayers or even a minor character. I would love to see GI Joe and SHIELD go at it over the slayers. It be a fun fight to watch. Anyway good fic.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review, sorry I missed it earlier
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [31 Jul 12] • Not Rated
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