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Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Past Donor)Skyefather
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what the ^&*@% have you been smoking?...and can I have some?
Review By [(Past Donor)Skyefather] • Date [17 Dec 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from HarryMuto
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This was rather short but still quite good, but then I do so love a cliche. The jumping on the groin bit was perhaps unnecessary though
Review By [HarryMuto] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from BlueEyedBrigadier
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Well...I figured it would be something like this, but damn! You had to have Hermione curb stomp Harry's wedding tackle?! No wonder he ended up with Ginny...poor bugger prefers a fangirl over a tsundere!
Review By [BlueEyedBrigadier] • Date [20 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from trongod
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Whew! Except for poor Harry getting nearly castrated by Hermione, I liked the ending...
Review By [trongod] • Date [19 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Greywizard
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LMAO reading this - especially Hermione's reaction to Harry's comments. ;-)

Definitely a crack fic, man! ;-)
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [19 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
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Well, not quite a Scrooged scenario, but it seems to have had the same effect. :-)
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [19 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from slmncpm
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ok, the tiny tits and bun in the over about made me spit on my computer, good thing i wasn't drinking anything. *laughs* but damn, those people were ALWAYS screwing with everyone's minds, it is amazing that any one remembered their names, let alone that they had to win a damn war. i really don't like dumbles. ugh.
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [19 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from BlueEyedBrigadier
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Sweet Jeebus! This has to be a hallucination since even giving Ron some benefit of doubt, he would still be a berk about getting extra magical strength and intelligence until someone called him on it!
Review By [BlueEyedBrigadier] • Date [17 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Cutiepie
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So, by the look of things, the goblins' spell not only removed Harry's magic, "destiny", backbone AND wits, they gave all four to Ron in some sort of personality transplant (sans brooding and other emo-ness)? 'Cause that is the only explanation I can see for this whole thing. There is no way that the "real" Ron could have done any of the things he is credited with (certainly sounds like a conglomeration of a bunch of the Harry-Stu stories around), and Harry (once I stopped and thought about it a bit) actually seems to have reacted pretty much the way that I would expect that Ron would have if suddenly dropped into the Muggle world without magical knowledge, including continuing with the dietary habits that rewarded him with that super-plus sized body. I am increasingly suspicious of the fact that Harry also now has virtually no magic of his own, for some reason. So, while I am kind of feeling uncomfortable about parts of this story, I am looking forward to where you take things next.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [17 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from trongod
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Dear God, I hope this is all a freaking dream brought on by the spell...
Review By [trongod] • Date [17 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
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I'm going to have echo the Scrooged review below - that's exactly what I've assumed is happening as of this chapter. Again, no other explanation for "Bizarro Ron." And as the other reviewer pointed out, even if you doubled Ron's magical power, he still suffers the unfortunate ailment of being Ron - and there is no cure.
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [17 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Mcspender
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Bwaa hahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!.
Take that, ya self obsessed Dolt xD!!. Harry got it bad, and thanks to his brat side, he got it worse xD!.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [17 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from michaelangelo
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I think this is nothing more than a cunning plan, possibly by the Goblins or his own subconscious and Harry is being Scrooged. That's my thoughts on it and I'm sticking to em. There's no other explanation for Bizarro Ron, even with ten times his original power he'd still be Ron.
Review By [michaelangelo] • Date [17 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from dhampirkinfolk
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Ow. This makes my brain hurt. Bad you. No cookie.
Review By [dhampirkinfolk] • Date [17 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from trongod
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Harry's as good as dead...

But I guess we're seeing just one of the possible effects of the seldom used Goblin spell...

But even assuming events occurred close to canon, I'd suspect that Hermione had been raped, if not murdered before the end of the next school holiday after Harry left - whether it was by Slytherins or Ron is anybodies guess. Figure that Fudge and Dumbledore both suppressed his disappearance as long as they could for their own reasons, but that Umbridge still wound up in Hogwarts to keep Dumbledore down.

Whether Dumbledore scrambled the people after Harry disappeared from his tracking devices or not, I think he'd still tell the Ministry 6 not to communicate with Harry; rather bring any communications immediately to him so that he could return the poor, distraught and confused boy to the Hospital Wing for healing... As to whether or not any believed him depends on your take of the people...
Comments from author:
Things aren't going to turn out quite the way you seem to be expecting (check my previous stories if you don't mind, please). Anyway, I hope you won't be too disappointed.
Review By [trongod] • Date [15 Jul 12] • Not Rated
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