Dang you are on ah roll lol ...loved the 14 and 15 chapter (thumbs up) and why can't they (buffy&taka-ran) just merge completely and become one? Oh and my bad if I spelled the name wrong ...choww
Review By [ThePureOne] • Date [28 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
DANG! WHY would she have to give HER body up for good to a danged god? I mean I am glad that she helped Buffy to get rid (Even if it is Temporary!) of Firsty, but to tell Buff that to defeat him perm like she would have to give up her body perm!!!
Review By [Eureka] • Date [28 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Oh Fudge! Firsty DID say that he would kill them all except her, just to kill her by his hand! DANG! Sorry I missed getting to review the last chapter, but both were up when I got on here.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [27 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Walk in The Park" from ThePureOne
Review:
Great chapter this story keeps me young!...lol even tho I'm not old :) chowww.
Review By [ThePureOne] • Date [26 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Woah, what the hell is up with the Scoobies? Seriously though, I hope you don't bring them into this story. I do have to say that in the beginning there were many things I wished you hadn't brought into this story. But your writing was so honest that it took all my objections and flushed 'em down the loo. It really is amazing how you can do that. Normally I would have stopped reading the moment you introduced vampires to soul society but the way you made it play out was really good, and it only made me love the story more. I'm completely in love with Kensei now; because of you. So, I'm gonna say whatever you do now, I trust you to make it amazing, like you have been doing with every chapter so far.
Hmm finally decided to read this one...couldn't stop reading till I hit the last chapter here. Sooo one of the mini's found her after all. Thought you weren't going to bring them into this? Oh well Rukia can get rid of that annoying memory. Here's to updating soonish.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [25 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Ah-oh. Buffy's in trouble. I hope she'll manage to get out of it without too much difficulty. Then again, I'm not really worried with Rukia-The Memory-Eraser in close distance. I hope you update soon. I really love this story. Hanane
Very, very good. I like it a lot. The lemon was pretty hot too. I kinda thought it was funny Shinji wanted to get rid of the body and man the getaway senkaimon. It really shows how much he cares about Kensei. Anyway, I'm very excited to see what happens next. Buffy and Ichigo in the living world, awesome!! Update soon please? Hanane
What. The actual fuck. This was seriously unexpected. I knew it had to do something with Kensei but I didn't know he was going to kill her. Awesome!!! Good chapter. Wonder what happens next. Please update soon?
What timeline are you on? The vizards are not yet hollowfied, yet you mention in the context of the vice-captain, that 'Buffy has to meet Ichigo'. I don't mind strange timelines, but I can't figure out when you are putting the Soul Society at.
Loved this!! Toshiro Rocks!!!!!!! Sorry, had to get that out. I think you chose right when you decided to send Toshiro with Buffy and Grimmjaw. His little comments were hilarious. Although I have to say that I don't think he would give Buffy permission to call him Toshiro that fast (maybe after a couple of decades) I still like the way you wrote their first (real) meeting. Buffy's powers sound awesome, by the way. I hope she has what it takes to go up against the real First. It's a shame you won't be able to update until this weekend. I'll be waiting with bated breath until then. Hanane
