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Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from jebbypal
Review:
Very interesting concept and world building. Really enjoyed it
Review By [jebbypal] • Date [23 Mar 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from leb
Review:
this is a great story, I hope you write more soon
Review By [leb] • Date [19 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Markelo
Review:
I am so into this story. It is so funny.
Review By [Markelo] • Date [31 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from djhardim
Review:
Just a thought. Could a sarcophagus heal Jessica Harris' body?
Comments from author:
Maybe, but the damage is done - her *natural* state would not be sustainable. as a child it wouldn't have been kicked in enough. aka she'd be too strong for her own body to handle. muscle, without the bone/ligaments strengthened to sustain that, kind of thing. (aka she's fucked)

Xander, however, the sarcophagus probably would eliminate the lingering 'one-tenth dose' of anti-slayer juice in his system. but the sarcophagus wont enter into it.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [16 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
You have definitely got my interest! I like the Cordy interludes. They tie it all together. Keep up the good work!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [11 Apr 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from xman
Review:
Can you say getting a case of whiplash from doing double takes. Good story as I can't wait for what insanity well happen next.
Comments from author:
yeah, my neck hurt when I was writing it too.
Review By [xman] • Date [25 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Twillightfairy
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I love how you turned this into a PTB played around, changed things up and show/talk about the changes story. It's by far the best crossed-over/mixed up universe I have found, the fact that the PTBs don't always know what's happening or how something happened is awesome. I would love to see more of this crazy world that Cordelia helped design.
Comments from author:
thanks but I stalled a bit from doing that side too much. I got a lot of flack for the direction I was taking on the willow front (all good intentions aside) and making PTB Cordy out to be vindicative when she's not.
Review By [Twillightfairy] • Date [5 Aug 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Twillightfairy
Review:
I love how you turned this into a PTB played around, changed things up and show/talk about the changes. It's by far the best crossed-over/mixed up universe I have found, the fact that the PTBs don't always know what's happening or how something happened is awesome. I would love to see more of this crazy world that Cordelia helped design.
Comments from author:
eh, you're one of the few who likes the meta parts. I like them too but I think they distract from the story I was trying to write (which was the xander parts)
Review By [Twillightfairy] • Date [5 Aug 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from gaulty
Review:
good chapter, nice crossoveresque, keep up the good work, byes
Comments from author:
thanks,
Review By [gaulty] • Date [24 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Godogma
Review:
This is very interesting... I like it and would love to see it continued when your muse permits.
Comments from author:
yes, I do wonder when my muse will permit.
Review By [Godogma] • Date [23 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
HMM so Xander is the grandson of a slayer ok that explains much in your verse :)
Comments from author:
what's to explain? the bit that needs teh explaining I think would be the Jessica part - and her being the daughter of a slayer and so genetically inherited strength, *and the watchers removed that strength the exact why they would from a rogue slayer* and that then, you know, going too far past 'remove slayer strengt'h into 'strength' altogether would explain the lack of Mrs Harris. Part of the Harris side of things is yet unwritten, but I've got some stuff lined up there. or I had until the 'meta' parts started to overtake the story and then my muse disappeared.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [23 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Sanchan
Review:
Hi,

I like the combination of the Stargate verse and the Buffy verse, I also like the alteration, that the Council is actually calling every single slayer manually, that is an interesting twist of the original that I think is within what one may call writer's freedom.
What I don't like so much is the talk on the higher realm... I'd like to see more of Xander!!

So CU next chapter!

Bye Sanchan
Comments from author:
yeah the "Meta" sections got away from me a fair bit.
Review By [Sanchan] • Date [23 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Genuka
Review:
that's a wonderful explanation! I'd never have thought of that.
Comments from author:
which bit?
Review By [Genuka] • Date [23 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from spacey
Review:
Fascinating. And have i mentioned lately that i ahte the pbserver bits? Cause i really realy do. But the rest pf the stpry is wicked
Review By [spacey] • Date [22 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from striderramses
Review:
I thought I'd put this on tracking but somehow missed it. Upside? I got to read four new chapters at once so go me!

I have to agree with the earlier reviewer regarding the PTB 'explanations': Interesting and funny at first but quickly growing stale. I'd rather see more of what's going on in the merged 'verse than people standing around talking. There's a lot of that going on in the merged 'verse too but I'm hopeful you've gotten most of that out of the way now that SG-1 and the Harris's have met up.

I do like how you've merged the two universes together though. Curious to see where you take this, and how far you intend to take it. You don't intend to rewrite each episode do you? That would get old for the reader and author fairly quickly IMO.
Comments from author:
yeah I'm hoping to do an action chapter after work.

And no, not an episode-by-episode re-write, although... 'Angel' is the next episode for them to tangle with.

With... Sg-1 in town.

And some of Angel's backstory involves the DRI in canon, but the DRI doesn't exist in this fusion (replaced by STRF)... so... I dont even know how I'm going to take it, aside from Buffy getting massive doses of 'dont fall for a vampire, it's a corpse animated by a demon.'

You know, the stuff she wasn't told at all in canon. And with the trouble heading Willow's way, she might be a tad distracted to give Buffy the thumbs up.
Review By [striderramses] • Date [22 Jul 12] • Not Rated
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