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Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen." from DNelson
Review:
I just saw the original "Cool Hand Luke". I like your version better.
Comments from author:
Well, thank-you very much. Its always nice to hear when someone thinks your version of something is better than the original.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [DNelson] • Date [26 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen." from PATM
Review:
Well its over, I found myself peeking around the corner of the doorway a few times while reading this one, just like the way I watched the original "The Thing From Outer Space". A great read too. I'm amending the name of the state to a county name where the prison is located. I suppose the guards were destroyed when the demon died?
Comments from author:
Died or got arrested, no don't they'll end up in Federal Prison...thought, funny if hey started ageing rapidly!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [PATM] • Date [8 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen." from BrownFinderth
Review:
Congrats to DaveTurner for a bit of a cliffhanger story!! The ending was good!
Comments from author:
Thanks muchly.
D.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [8 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen." from (Current Donor)Listener
Review:
I haven't seen Cool Hand Luke since I was 15, but this story seemed to fit it pretty well. You really made me care about Ace and Society, which is hard to do with OCs in a fic.

When the 47 new prisoners showed up, I totally expected them to be slayers. Ah well.

Overall this was up to your usual standards. I enjoyed it.
Comments from author:
Thank-you.

I had my concerns about this story, not so much from a writing pov but more about what it might say about me. Not only did I very nearly not post this but during the writing I very nearly abandoned it.

Oh well, people seem to have enjoyed it.

Cheers,
D.

PS; The idea about adding a few slayers at the end was a trick I missed and might have made for a less 'terminal' ending for some of the characters.
Review By [(Current Donor)Listener] • Date [8 Aug 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen." from Mcspender
Review:
Nice to see Boss Godfrey going down first, he really deserved, and the way that Faith killed the demon Lord was awesomee.
The thing about the ayes makes sense, I mean, the shortest way to the brain lies there, and with a demon of that size, it's a pretty good target, or at least blinding it for a few golden seconds.

So Dawn got a good life, cool. To bad Faith doesn't feel worthy of trying to have one for herself.

Cool fic dude, see ya!!!
Comments from author:
Thank-you, glad you liked it.
D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen." from (Current Donor)MaxGSandeman
Review:
The rewards for the guards seem to be a long life and satisfying their brutal natures.
They're easily pleased.
Dawn handles herself well, despite the situation.
Comments from author:
The entire tail has sorta been a hymn to the greatness that Dawn could be...sorta.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)MaxGSandeman] • Date [6 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen." from Mcspender
Review:
Damn, that was a veeery good fight or what?.
So, they got send to the Farm?. Why do I think that things are not gonna be the way the bad guys are expecting them to be?.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Something about plans never surviving contact with the enemy, perhaps?

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [6 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen." from maxthehobbit
Review:
This story just keeps getting better with each chapter. I'm waiting for Dawn and her friends to get a little revenge, especially whoever this 'Lord" is ... needs to be eviscerated.
Comments from author:
Thanks, we enter the final straight and hopefully head for a happy ending!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [5 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve." from Dragonelf
Review:
Thank you for the new chapters. :D Any chance that any of the new arrivals are slayers?

::Gives the plot bunny a Carrot Muffin::

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"I am Grey. I stand between the candle
and the star. We are Grey. We stand
between the darkness and the light."
- Delenn, Babylon 5
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Comments from author:
None what-so-ever...

Sorry...

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [4 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve." from Mcspender
Review:
So the demon thinks he has everything under controlm and Buffy's death was just a little thing... yeah rigth :P.
Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
Everyone has a right to be wrong...even demons!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [4 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve." from Hecatonchires
Review:
Drifting away from movie plot, into wierd conspiracy land. I like it.
Comments from author:
Oh yes indeed!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [3 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve." from ShalaDakiri
Review:
“Mostly teenagers this time, Captain,” Boss Paula told him from memory, “all from out of state plus a couple of foreigners.”



That sound like a few squads of new slayers to me. Just because the Bosses aren't aware of Buffy telling anyone about Dawn doesn't mean that she didn't or that others in the know haven't found out about the demon connection through other sources and Dawn is just a bonus.
Comments from author:
Oh if only... But there will be slayers sometime soon.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [3 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven." from (Current Donor)MaxGSandeman
Review:
I have to wonder what reward is in store for the guards who do well with their brutality.
Comments from author:
Only five chapters (well four after tonight) and most things will be revealed.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)MaxGSandeman] • Date [3 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven." from Mcspender
Review:
Wow... I'm speechless dude. This one of your most dramatic tales, congratulations =)!.
I really hope that Dawn can kill that damn demon lord and his cronies, because they deserve it, they really do.
Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
Well thank-you...dramatic eh? Wow!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [3 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven." from BrownFinderth
Review:
DaveTurner, tell me true, please. Are the girls going to really escape some time soon, or are you just going to let them perish at the hands of those nut jobs?
Comments from author:
I'll tell you this, in he next five chapters there will be a happy ending for at least some of our heroines!

Also there will be justice handed out to the guilty.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [2 Aug 12] • Not Rated
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