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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Genuka
Review:
When are you going to update this? Its really good.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [7 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from nightshadowlife
Review:
I am in love with this story and cant wait to see the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [13 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from loretta
Review:
this is a good story, please update it soon
Review By [loretta] • Date [26 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from mwinter
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Awaiting more.
Review By [mwinter] • Date [7 Nov 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from JediKnight
Review:
Interesting job on the story, I hope to read more.

Why do you have Harry smoking when as far as I could tell from the books he hates that?
Comments from author:
thanks for the review.
to expalain why harry would start smoking, JKR wrote a very compelling kids book but in my opinion she made harry to much of a strait laced hero. the books never mention his opinion on smoking and for a boy raised in an abusive enviroment there are 2 ways he could have gone option 1 he would have become an intorvert and shyed away form everyone around him, he would have broken. option 2 he does what i did, he rebels and puts out an attitude that is begging for somone to attack him again, the smoking is part of that attitude.
im sorry if you dont like my reasoning but there it is.
again thanks for the review.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [16 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from MistofRainbows
Review:
I had been enjoying things until you mentioned Harry smoking... good luck on the fic or not. I find myself not really giving a damn now as you just ruined his character in your story. (at least for me) Considering his opinion on his cousin's gang that smokes later... it's more than a little out of character. Sad part is it was nice other than that ah well.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [13 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from ktweaver
Review:
Really like this!
Review By [ktweaver] • Date [12 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from trongod
Review:
Does harry have the materials to research how to do the Fire Whip? 'cause it seemed as if there was no instruction on how to do it and it isn't a spell I'd expect Harry to know already.

Like the amiable chat they had; also that Dumbledore seemed content to just know where Harry was and wasn't intent on dragging him back to England. Wonder if Minerva knows about Harry smoking; maybe it'll be an out for Dumbledore if she gets on his case for smoking...
Review By [trongod] • Date [19 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from michaelangelo
Review:
A very nice story, there are a few mistakes possibly cause by the spellchecker you use, it's Privet Drive BTW. I like how Harry isn't raving nor is Dumbledore conniving which is good.
Review By [michaelangelo] • Date [19 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from AnFan
Review:
Happy to see another chapter. I really hope that Harry can convince Buffy that she is worth his attentions. I have to say that one of the most 'creepafying' thing about the Buffyverse is her relationship with vampires. Specifically with the vampires of that canon story. There is a difference if the vampire is created from a human and has a soul and other traits of a living being. However, in the Buffyverse it is specifically stated that a vampire is a Dead Body that is prevented from decaying through the possession by a blood demon. That is just squiky when you think of someone having a intimate relationship with one. Eeewww!

Ok, I'm done going off on my feelings on that issue. I'll just say that I am always in favor of stories that keep her from making that mistake. And if she does have sex with Angel, I can not really get into a Buffy story after that unless it highlights another character. I wouldn't consider touching her with a 10' pole after that event.

Anyway, I'm liking your story. I look forward to finding out how things turn out in upcoming chapters.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review and dont worry he will dispite having some contractual issues that they will eventualy have to deal with... dont worry no vampires doing buffy if i can help it.
Review By [AnFan] • Date [19 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from AnFan
Review:
Looks like an interesting story. Are you going to have Harry help Buffy out with the take down of Lothos? That might prevent her from going into the loony bin, but it probably won't stop the divorce if you use that to have them move to Sunnydale still.

I'm wondering how Merrik will react to Harry.
Comments from author:
This is set after she went to the loony bin, and the divorce in my story has just finished before she meets harry. the way I'm writing this is that after she got out, Buffy keeped slaying while she was in L.A. and when she moves she starts to think that she can stop slaying. Sadly we know this isn't the case. My next chapter should clear that up some. Sadly Merrik is still gone.
Review By [AnFan] • Date [18 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from trongod
Review:
Very nice indeed - is this during Buffy's escape to L.A. after the Angelus incident, or after graduation? personally, I'd guess the former, but even I can be wrong.... so some say, anyway...

Hoping your Muse continues to inspire!
Comments from author:
this is set before Season One, just before her move to Sunnydale. Thank you for you review and keep them comming as i update. I know all authers like feedback.
Review By [trongod] • Date [17 Jul 12] • Not Rated
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