Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
tomstReview:
i like where this is going great idea
Review By [
tomst] • Date [25 Jul 12] • Not Rated
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JerriReview:
Okay, I like this premise a lot and would like to see you expand on it. I can see all sorts of interesting blowups coming. Well done.
Review By [
Jerri] • Date [19 Jul 12] • Not Rated
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JediKnightReview:
Nice plot, but the chapter was way too short.
Review By [
JediKnight] • Date [19 Jul 12] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
GideonReview:
HAHAHA! At least these two both know that this is an accident waiting to happen, they just don't know how big it will be :) Oh Well, at least if Jack shoots Angel or Spike there will be no permanent harm done.
Review By [
Gideon] • Date [18 Jul 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
