I'll throw in with the others in wanting more of this. I always thought they were kinda lax in the explaining why Willow stayed, especially since the only class you ever see her in is a Psychology course. Weird choice for a computer expert and novice witch. Great start so far with some interesting ideas for other ways for her to go. I think she would make an interesting addition to the eclectic group that forms Alpha and Beta Flight. Would be an interesting little group Willow, Roger Bosch and Madison Jefferies.
Review By [jormunguard] • Date [19 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Like to see this expanded upon, where instead of canon, Willow takes one of the better offers - G.I. Joe, SGC, B.R.P.D., S.H.E.I.L.D. - and runs with it. Maybe returning to the Hellmouth in assignment for the first and last 2, while SGC starts looking into her hometown as part of the security process - something already done by the others, hence the offers - and gets really paranoid about Foothold situations...
Did I spark your Muse or not? C'mon, it'd be /fun/!!
Review By [trongod] • Date [19 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Oh Red, so many GOOD choices there! Heather Hudson reminds me of Alpha Flight, the Canadian attempt to create their version of the Avengers. Weapon X, all I have to say is, you don't want to end up being carved up by Wolverine, Sabertooth, or taken out by Deadpool. G.I. Joe would have been nice as well as SG1. NID I would have avoided, knowing Kinsley and Mayberry. The professor I did not know, so I can't comment on him. But it was a GREAT story!
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the professor was hellboy's old boss. Got to admit I'm getting a lot more reviews for this than expected.
Review By [Harry] • Date [19 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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