Haha I loved the diary element very clever , I am wondering if dean plans on reading about the disaster that was season six so he can understand Buffy's reasoning. I REALLY love this story and hope you update sooinsh cause I was hooked when I read it the day you published the first chapter . Always a fan & Buffy/Dean forever. -Abby
Review By [AbigaelRose] • Date [28 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from AbigaelRose
Review:
Thank you, thank you, thank you for updating i am completely in love with this story and crave another update!
Review By [AbigaelRose] • Date [24 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Wow 2 chapters in one day and skanky drunk buffy?? You better be careful or I might start falling madly in love with you lol! No but really I like your characterizations and dialogue, you seem like an excellent writer that really helps me imagine the scene while I'm reading it. So of course I can't wait to read more! Keep up the awesome work :D
Review By [sarbear] • Date [24 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I am most intrigued about this story and where you're going to take it. I'm mostly interested in seeing the characterization. I loved some of Dean's snappy retorts and it was interesting seeing Buffy so, I don't know, S2-like! The timeline being right on is a great plus (as I myself tend to mess with them because I can lol). I hope to see more of their relationship and what kind of story this will become for the two of them.
I was shocked when Dean punched that poor guy in the face! And Buffy's backing down from Dean, what does it mean? Nice start, hope to see some more. :)
lovely begining! :) i feel so bad for dean....there really would be no excuse for not telling someone your alive that would be acceptable. cant wait to see what happens when he confronts buffy. update soon.
Review By [liveadream] • Date [23 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
There is an issue with the timeline in the story. When Buffy wakes from her dream she talks about Sunnydale being "five years ago last May" and Dean talks about how he saw her jump off Glory's tower four years ago. You may want to fix that. Other than that it is an interesting story.
Nice start, I'm liking where you're going with this so far! I hope you keep it going, looking forward to seeing what else you have in store ... :) Gracie
Review By [gracerealized] • Date [23 Jul 12] • Not Rated