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Review of chapter "The woods are silent dark and deep" from DieselDriver
Review:
That's a funny thought. Jacob and Buffy, sort of siblings.
Comments from author:
Sort of... Wonder who'll get grounded first? ;-)

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [1 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The woods are silent dark and deep" from (Current Donor)Cordyfan
Review:
Nice to see the former hyena crew getting their comeuppance. Really not very bright, are they? Looking forward to the treason trial.

Though he's out of favour with the others, I'm hoping that Giles realises that this could be a trap he's walking into.

I really like what you've done with the Dictatrix and her world. Though poor Buffy, with two mothers to keep her in line now...

Nice scene at the ball, even if Sam might be a bit embarrassed when the potion wears off. On the other hand, she might not be so bothered after all.

Always nice to see Anise being put in her place.

Great chapter, thanks for writing this.
Review By [(Current Donor)Cordyfan] • Date [25 Nov 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The woods are silent dark and deep" from (Current Donor)Truthmaker
Review:
Don't know how I missed this one before. Probably because Kennedy isn't one of my favorite characters and all I was going on was the description.

The bondmates idea seems pretty cool though, someone to anchor the slayers is always a good thing, whether or not sexytimes are included. I like the way you've developed Jen (also not one of my favorites) and Ken in this, you've made them into real characters.
Review By [(Current Donor)Truthmaker] • Date [24 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The woods are silent dark and deep" from starwolf
Review:
Anise was an great character, if an ass. I was sorry to see her killed off in the series. but the last couple of seasons they killed a lot of people off needlessly. great to see her spanked as it were. great chapter, thanks
Review By [starwolf] • Date [24 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The woods are silent dark and deep" from lunalurker
Review:
An update on one of my favorites, huzzah! With much nifty plot advancement too.
Time for a reread, I think. Thanks!
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [23 Nov 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The woods are silent dark and deep" from Grovtech
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This is a different take on Slayers with the bonding thing which is a major change. Giles being only tolerated instead of respected is a big change too. However I can't say the mistakes he made were little ones. There is also the question about this Cheryl. Is she the same one that is Nicole's friend and is leading Giles on into an obvious trap?

Good Stuff!
Review By [Grovtech] • Date [23 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The woods are silent dark and deep" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Lotsa fun.

I like it!!!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [22 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The woods are silent dark and deep" from arturusoriginal
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Okay so I'll admit I, a grown man nearly squealed when this update came through. I was not disappointed. Very nice chapter with more examples of your deft handling of both your and canon characters.

Kudos.
Review By [arturusoriginal] • Date [22 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter seven" from rafestark
Review:
"Free eats, love the slayer" Lol.

Great chapter, enjoyed seeing things back at base while the squad's offworld - also the strangely humanitarian Go'auld. Good to see people from every group getting their preconceptions challenged.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Challenging preconceptions - That's a little thing called life, isn't it? ;-)

Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Review By [rafestark] • Date [1 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter seven" from (Current Donor)Cordyfan
Review:
I'm looking forward to finding out exactly how Joyce found herself out there (and maybe some of the back-story as to how she became the Dictatrix). Hopefully the confusion will be settled soon.

Good to see that Jack quickly saw the error of his ways. If he'd jeopardised relations any further, even the normally tolerant Hammond might have busted him a rank or two.

Anise really needs to realise that there are things on Earth she can't comprehend - and the pathetic hyena pack are only the tip of the tooth, so to speak. Looking forward to seeing the latter getting what they deserve. I'm sure there's no shortage of capable volunteers.

Thanks for writing this.
Comments from author:
There will probably be a few explication of flashback scenes. If it is the Joyce they know...

Jack isn't stupid. Just worried.

Anise might get an introduction to Earth's night life, courtesy of Buffy & co and helped by Jack making her curious.

Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Review By [(Current Donor)Cordyfan] • Date [29 Jun 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter seven" from grd
Review:
Just found this series and really Rocks!!! Love the relations, action, and characters. Really intrigued with the Dictator/Joyce situation, wonder if their is hope for Janet to also get a happy.
Comments from author:
Glad you like it. It started out as an idea for a Day of Femme slash.

If this is Joyce, their Joyce, no doubt there will be a lot of explanation at some time in the future. ;-)

No doubt Janet can get a happy. With who, now there is a question...

Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Review By [grd] • Date [29 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter seven" from starwolf
Review:
formatting can always be fixed. the only thing wrong with this chapter was where you stopped. please more. love what your doing so far. most of the star gate stuff i really hate was stupid crap in seasons 9 & 10 that were poorly thought out and served no purpose. can't wait to see what you do next. thanks
Comments from author:
I really hope to find out why it is happening. I'm busily writing various things.

I found season 6&& of Buffy a bit disappointing, same with 9&10 of Stargate. (I'm not even going to think about the Buffy comic seasons...)

Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Review By [starwolf] • Date [28 Jun 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter seven" from (Current Donor)wizathogwarts
Review:
Great update. I didn't think you'd have Jack apologize and just keep the stress level going. So a bit of a surprise there. Big surprise, Joyce. We know Loki is involved and a tok'ra but how, taking into account the chain of events of Joyce's death, you're going to explain it is a real mystery. Good luck and hope to see more soon.
Comments from author:
Jack made a mistake because he's very worried. An a-typical Goa'uld is holding his friends and unadmitted beloved.

I hope to be able to explain it sufficiently. Working hard at some other stories I want to finish/catch up with first, I fear.

Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Review By [(Current Donor)wizathogwarts] • Date [28 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter six" from DieselDriver
Review:
Just as good as it was the first time through. Hope you continue.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Working hard on chapter 7

Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [28 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter six" from SilverWave
Review:
Well this is a gem of a story.

Thanks.

*Recommended*
Comments from author:
Thanks, glad you like it and for the rec!

Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Review By [SilverWave] • Date [10 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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