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Review of chapter "Chapter six" from Cordyfan
Review:
Looking forward to seeing the Council or the SGC dealing with the Pack. Nasty little bullies before they were possessed and worse now that they have some power.

Looking forward to seeing how the situation with the Dictatrix plays out - Joyce, of all people!

Nice touch with Buffy scolding junior Slayers about their manners.

Thanks for writing this
Review By [Cordyfan] • Date [23 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter six" from PATM
Review:
Buy the house with demon infestation? They're joking right? I may have to reread the story to get a line on why Giles is on the outs. The woman chatting giles up is to obviously an operative for the nid. Or am I paranoid? Oh yeah, Joyce? In a uniform and a renaissance woman!
Review By [PATM] • Date [21 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter six" from TroyGuffey
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Hmmm, The Pack? Maybe Xander with Faith should be invited? He was the Alpha....

Really like The Empire.

Joyce?!?!? HOW?!?!?

And Unless the NID is pulling a double-scam, Nicole is going to be SO angry and disappointed at Cheryl. (Assuming it's the same one. (Reasonable assumption in fiction, but not in RL))
Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [20 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter six" from lunalurker
Review:
A very interesting world we have found here. Always love a good airship... Joyce?? But.. but... uhh... what? *boggles*
And Kennedy is being strangely quiet, especially for her.
And it's kind of nifty how all these Sunnydale cast-offs and survivors are popping up. The pack, if I'm getting the reference, seem to have not been cured nearly as well as Xander was. Long term side-effects indeed.
More please. :)
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [20 Feb 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter six" from starwolf
Review:
even if he's out of favor, Giles is not stupid about an obvious recruitment spiel. I am very curious to see you explain Joyce on another planet for 22 years.
great chapter, thanks
Review By [starwolf] • Date [19 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter six" from DofEire
Review:
*JOYCE?!* Holy moley! The cliffhanger of cliffhangers there, Vid.
Review By [DofEire] • Date [19 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter six" from SpacedCadet
Review:
"They’re sacred shitless of you.”

er...scared ?
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [19 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from DieselDriver
Review:
I sure hope that question mark after "the end" means that it's not the end. I need this story to be finished. Lot's of chapters. Long chapters. That's the ticket... Lots of long chapters and then many sequels. Yeah!
Comments from author:
There will be more chapters, one is up right now. Not sure about sequels however.

Glad you like the story so much.

Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [19 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from DieselDriver
Review:
I can certainly understand an attraction to houses and such because I'm trying to buy one right now. Heh, Tucker Wells huh? LOL. I hope they kick his can all the way to the stockade.
Comments from author:
I bought one fairly recently. Also, houses are cool.

Hope you weren't too disappointed that Tucker wasn't kicked?

Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [19 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from DieselDriver
Review:
Damn! I should have reviewed before this but I simply did not want to stop reading. This is awesome, well written and a great story so far. I'll probably make an exception to my normal policy of not recommending till I get to the end but this is more than worthy so far. I think my standards are pretty high too. I'd spend money to get this good of a story if it wasn't on this site and the copyrights didn't interfere. You certainly are a master storyteller.
Comments from author:
Thank you, reviews and recommendations are always very welcome. I hope you enjoyed the rest of it as much and will continue to enjoy it.

Ah, copyrights... pesky things.

Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [18 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from MarcusSLazarus
Review:
Seemingly simple start but very intriguing plot; nice job.

The idea of the Watcher’s Council going after the Unas is a classic example of an idea so brilliantly simple that nobody’s thought of it before now- the Goa’uld could just be mistaken for spirits, but the Unas are definitely an enemy that could easily be mistaken for demons- and while I’m so-so about Buffy/Willow as a pairing, you actually did an interesting job with Kennedy, starting with her first contact with Hailey and progressing from there to explore the consequences of a Slayer in a government facility that knows all about the weird.

I was so-so about the ‘bonding’ idea as a ‘necessity’ of the Slayers- it just makes the Council seem a bit TOO warped, particularly when Giles showed more than once that he cared about Buffy’s life more than the Council’s rules- but the implication of Daniel having a Bond with a Slayer should be interesting to see- I vote for Vi as a possible candidate since I like her best of the Sunnydale Slayers who haven’t appeared yet- and I definitely look forward to learning more about this conspiracy to undermine ties between the Slayers and the SGC…

Keep up the good work; can’t wait for more!
Comments from author:
Thanks. Unas do look nicely demonic and I wanted to use that. And they might even be demonic. I shall expand on the Bonding idea later and give explanations for how the Council handled it. It all started quite rationally…

As for Daniel’s bond, it isn’t quite typical. And the conspiracy, ah the conspiracy...

Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [4 Jan 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Eureka
Review:
So when we gonna get more?
Tucker and Andrew Wells= good guys now... Gen West = good guy...Phelps...BAD GUY! Loved Ken's moves on that!
Comments from author:
Yes, there will be more, but I want to get the next LS out of the way first. Yup, Tucker and Adnrew are good guys. And Buffy can coo over Andrea Wells.

Yes, Kennedy can be a mite confrontational, can't she?

Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Review By [Eureka] • Date [1 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Great chapter. Glad to see West wasn't involved, that had me worried.

Tom.
Comments from author:
I liked him too much in the movie to do that. Would have been a nasty twist thouhg...

Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [26 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from zonianx
Review:
Excellent chapter. I am glad General West is a good guy or I suppose he seems to be at least. I am hoping that the NID are fairly intelligent as opponents and that the team is someone we know from Sunnydll. I am looking forward to the next installment.
Comments from author:
Thanks. West seemed to be too good a guy to make an evil bastard. The NID are fairly competent. We sahll see if you recognise them...

Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Review By [zonianx] • Date [23 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Cordyfan
Review:
Another great chapter.

Surprised that Tucker's turned over a new leaf - he didn't seem the sort.

Good to see that General West is on the side of the angels after all (though I still always preferred Hammond to either him or Landry as SGC CO).

Hailey should perhaps back off Kennedy a little (and I can't believe I'm taking Kennedy's side). From the Slayers' point of view, that was a damning document and they couldn't be sure anyone in the Air Force wasn't implicated, wittingly or not. At least its another nail in the NID's coffin - always a good thing.

Thanks for writing this.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Tucker joined the Marines and met the right woman and well... I might acutally write that one day. When I have time >_
Review By [Cordyfan] • Date [22 Nov 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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