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Review of chapter "Chapter seven" from rafestark
Review:
"Free eats, love the slayer" Lol.

Great chapter, enjoyed seeing things back at base while the squad's offworld - also the strangely humanitarian Go'auld. Good to see people from every group getting their preconceptions challenged.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Challenging preconceptions - That's a little thing called life, isn't it? ;-)

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Review By [rafestark] • Date [1 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter seven" from Cordyfan
Review:
I'm looking forward to finding out exactly how Joyce found herself out there (and maybe some of the back-story as to how she became the Dictatrix). Hopefully the confusion will be settled soon.

Good to see that Jack quickly saw the error of his ways. If he'd jeopardised relations any further, even the normally tolerant Hammond might have busted him a rank or two.

Anise really needs to realise that there are things on Earth she can't comprehend - and the pathetic hyena pack are only the tip of the tooth, so to speak. Looking forward to seeing the latter getting what they deserve. I'm sure there's no shortage of capable volunteers.

Thanks for writing this.
Comments from author:
There will probably be a few explication of flashback scenes. If it is the Joyce they know...

Jack isn't stupid. Just worried.

Anise might get an introduction to Earth's night life, courtesy of Buffy & co and helped by Jack making her curious.

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Review By [Cordyfan] • Date [29 Jun 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter seven" from grd
Review:
Just found this series and really Rocks!!! Love the relations, action, and characters. Really intrigued with the Dictator/Joyce situation, wonder if their is hope for Janet to also get a happy.
Comments from author:
Glad you like it. It started out as an idea for a Day of Femme slash.

If this is Joyce, their Joyce, no doubt there will be a lot of explanation at some time in the future. ;-)

No doubt Janet can get a happy. With who, now there is a question...

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Review By [grd] • Date [29 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter seven" from starwolf
Review:
formatting can always be fixed. the only thing wrong with this chapter was where you stopped. please more. love what your doing so far. most of the star gate stuff i really hate was stupid crap in seasons 9 & 10 that were poorly thought out and served no purpose. can't wait to see what you do next. thanks
Comments from author:
I really hope to find out why it is happening. I'm busily writing various things.

I found season 6&& of Buffy a bit disappointing, same with 9&10 of Stargate. (I'm not even going to think about the Buffy comic seasons...)

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Review By [starwolf] • Date [28 Jun 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter seven" from (Current Donor)wizathogwarts
Review:
Great update. I didn't think you'd have Jack apologize and just keep the stress level going. So a bit of a surprise there. Big surprise, Joyce. We know Loki is involved and a tok'ra but how, taking into account the chain of events of Joyce's death, you're going to explain it is a real mystery. Good luck and hope to see more soon.
Comments from author:
Jack made a mistake because he's very worried. An a-typical Goa'uld is holding his friends and unadmitted beloved.

I hope to be able to explain it sufficiently. Working hard at some other stories I want to finish/catch up with first, I fear.

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Review By [(Current Donor)wizathogwarts] • Date [28 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter six" from DieselDriver
Review:
Just as good as it was the first time through. Hope you continue.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Working hard on chapter 7

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Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [28 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter six" from SilverWave
Review:
Well this is a gem of a story.

Thanks.

*Recommended*
Comments from author:
Thanks, glad you like it and for the rec!

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Review By [SilverWave] • Date [10 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter six" from Cordyfan
Review:
Looking forward to seeing the Council or the SGC dealing with the Pack. Nasty little bullies before they were possessed and worse now that they have some power.

Looking forward to seeing how the situation with the Dictatrix plays out - Joyce, of all people!

Nice touch with Buffy scolding junior Slayers about their manners.

Thanks for writing this
Comments from author:
Both will be kicking some ass. And deservedly so.

It might be a look a like...

Someone has to do it. Also, hypcisy, thy name is Buffy. ;-)

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Review By [Cordyfan] • Date [23 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter six" from PATM
Review:
Buy the house with demon infestation? They're joking right? I may have to reread the story to get a line on why Giles is on the outs. The woman chatting giles up is to obviously an operative for the nid. Or am I paranoid? Oh yeah, Joyce? In a uniform and a renaissance woman!
Comments from author:
No, they're quite serious. Having killed the demon that lived there (which is a top predator) it should be clear of lesser demons.

Giles is on the outs because he cast several spells to interfere with the Slayer-Anchor bonds. that rather upset several people...

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Review By [PATM] • Date [21 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter six" from TroyGuffey
Review:
Hmmm, The Pack? Maybe Xander with Faith should be invited? He was the Alpha....

Really like The Empire.

Joyce?!?!? HOW?!?!?

And Unless the NID is pulling a double-scam, Nicole is going to be SO angry and disappointed at Cheryl. (Assuming it's the same one. (Reasonable assumption in fiction, but not in RL))
Comments from author:
We shall see...

I quite like it myself.

Some explanation will be given next chapter.

If this is that Cheryl, Nicole will be very upset...

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Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [20 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter six" from lunalurker
Review:
A very interesting world we have found here. Always love a good airship... Joyce?? But.. but... uhh... what? *boggles*
And Kennedy is being strangely quiet, especially for her.
And it's kind of nifty how all these Sunnydale cast-offs and survivors are popping up. The pack, if I'm getting the reference, seem to have not been cured nearly as well as Xander was. Long term side-effects indeed.
More please. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you. Every world is better with airships. And Joyce. ;-)

Kenney is a bit out of her depth. She's learning.

Kiss is meant to tie up a lot of loose ends. I hope to carry that off a bit swifter than in W&S...

Indeed.

Doing my best.

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Review By [lunalurker] • Date [20 Feb 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter six" from starwolf
Review:
even if he's out of favor, Giles is not stupid about an obvious recruitment spiel. I am very curious to see you explain Joyce on another planet for 22 years.
great chapter, thanks
Comments from author:
Oh, he'd know he was being recruited. But does he feel alienated enough to take them up on it...?

So am I. I know the mechanics...

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Review By [starwolf] • Date [19 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter six" from DofEire
Review:
*JOYCE?!* Holy moley! The cliffhanger of cliffhangers there, Vid.
Comments from author:
Snicker. And it's taking me a lot longer to get the next chapter written than I expected, sorry.

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Review By [DofEire] • Date [19 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter six" from SpacedCadet
Review:
"They’re sacred shitless of you.”

er...scared ?
Comments from author:
Yup. I'm not sure if I edited that yet...

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Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [19 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from DieselDriver
Review:
I sure hope that question mark after "the end" means that it's not the end. I need this story to be finished. Lot's of chapters. Long chapters. That's the ticket... Lots of long chapters and then many sequels. Yeah!
Comments from author:
There will be more chapters, one is up right now. Not sure about sequels however.

Glad you like the story so much.

Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [19 Feb 14] • Not Rated
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