Once again, some really good premises, but hamstrung by proofreading issues. And pacing, which I think was a bigger issue -- everything happened so fast that I really didn't have time to enjoy it. I'd love to read more in this universe, but please, slow down the pacing.
Review By [Listener] • Date [5 Aug 12] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Good handling of things that work better when you mix magic and kryptonians. Buffy and Kara bonding over combat is just too perfect! Plus I love the idea of Kara and Xander dating, it even fits the "Xander can't date a normal human girl" meme.
Great chapter, thanks!
Review By [tchizek] • Date [2 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]