Review of chapter "Chapter One" from bradsan
oh Dean. You have to grow up.
He has to learn nothing is black or white/good or evil. There are grey area's also and those three together makes the world interesting to live in. Also it's the choice you made. Angel with a soul is not Angelus. Oz in human form is not the werewolf and they didn't had a choice. Buffy already learned about all those area's and choices by living on the Hellmouth and LA. She even works with several species when necessary. He can't judge her for what she did and walking away wasn't the right thing to do. How can Buffy trust him not doing it again. So I understand what Buffy did, sometimes love isn't enough.
Love what you did at the end. Hope they will make it this time around.
Comments from author:
Thank you for this wonderful feedback. I so completely agree about Dean - he's very much so in the "black and white" realm where he doesn't understand what it means to be in the shades of grey and I really think that's what makes his relationship with Buffy so interesting because of her Slayer origins and her methods. It's a wonderful balance and a wonderful recipe for disaster at the same time. :P
Thank you again! They needed that happy ending! Dana (who made the video this was based on) didn't fill that part in and I hated it! So I threw in some fluff, even if it was just hinted at.
Thank you for the amazing feedback!! It means so much that you leave it, thank you! :)
Review By [bradsan
] • Date [7 Dec 12] • Not Rated