Interesting idea. Guessing by the mentions this is pre death of superman. I could see this easily growing into a series of one shots if you don't have a story mapped out.
Review By [Tanaxanth] • Date [26 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
This is very interesting and has the for follow on stories.
Xander as Conner, I like the concept, although having Jessica Harris be an ex-geneticist is a bit of a stretch. However for a good story I can suspend my disbelief for that little bit.
Review By [tchizek] • Date [26 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I might continue with this at some point or it might spawn a larger story. It certainly has potential though I will seriously have to think about it and how closely to mirror the events of the show.
Review By [Rob] • Date [26 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
So Xander is his universes Kon-El, I can just see Superman's reaction to not only having for all intents and purposes a son that's been kept hidden for 16 years but the pure unadultarated HORROR of his son/clone having a similar sense of humour to the Flash.
And when Lex Luthor finds out and he will find out, you can hide things from Lex but you can't keep them hidden forever (unless we're talking about Superman's secret identity, pretty sure Lex refuses to believe Supes has a civilian persona). He will go into a RAGE, when he realizes that his weapon against Superman has been raised to believe that Lex Luthor is as close as any mortal can get to being concidered the Devil himself.
This is a great story and I hope to see more soon, especially Superman and Luthors reactions!
Comments from author:
Glad you like it. And I can so imagine Supes reaction to finding out about Xander's existence as well as the fact that he has a sense of humor very similar to the one possessed by the Flash.
I probably am going to write a sequel to this at some point. It may yet become part of a series or a larger fic we'll have to wait and see.
Review By [ChaosCarlos] • Date [26 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]