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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AlecMcDowell
Review:
Still like this one a lot. There's a bunch of implications to what you've put here; Lex seems to have started his cloning much, much earlier than most canons if Xander was able to grow to adulthood naturally like this. And that's even assuming Xander IS actually Superboy. For all we know Lex was delayed enough that in the end 'Kon-El' comes around on schedule anyways! That could be an interesting twist that there are 2 Superboys out there. Or maybe even if this took place in the Young Justice universe the delay forced them down the genomorph route and Xander and Conner are different types of clones entirely. Really hope you plan to continue this and some of these questions could be answer.
Review By [AlecMcDowell] • Date [13 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from serenityselena
Review:
interesting story ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [24 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Genuka
Review:
interesting solution. Good one shot.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [25 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
quite nice and they all took those news rather well. A follow up to this would be great.
Comments from author:
There is one already being planned.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [30 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mechconstrictor
Review:
Great story. I hope that you will continue it.
Comments from author:
That hope is answered. There is a sequel to this story in the pipeline.
Review By [Mechconstrictor] • Date [29 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Blackguard
Review:
This was freaking awesome, any chance of a sequel?
Review By [Blackguard] • Date [27 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from hleach
Review:
nice hope you give us more
Review By [hleach] • Date [27 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JediKnight
Review:
Nice work. Any chance of a full-length sequal?
Comments from author:
It is a possibilty that I am giving some serious thought to.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [27 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Tjack
Review:
A nice start, hope to see more of your stuff.
Review By [Tjack] • Date [26 Jul 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
An interesting idea with a few good bits of drama and action.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Morgomir
Review:
Great idea. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [26 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Tanaxanth
Review:
Interesting idea.
Guessing by the mentions this is pre death of superman.
I could see this easily growing into a series of one shots if you don't have a story mapped out.
Review By [(Current Donor)Tanaxanth] • Date [26 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
This is very interesting and has the for follow on stories.

Xander as Conner, I like the concept, although having Jessica Harris be an ex-geneticist is a bit of a stretch. However for a good story I can suspend my disbelief for that little bit.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [26 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Rob
Review:
Nice, pity you're not continuing it.
Comments from author:
Glad you like it.

I might continue with this at some point or it might spawn a larger story. It certainly has potential though I will seriously have to think about it and how closely to mirror the events of the show.
Review By [Rob] • Date [26 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ChaosCarlos
Review:
So Xander is his universes Kon-El, I can just see Superman's reaction to not only having for all intents and purposes a son that's been kept hidden for 16 years but the pure unadultarated HORROR of his son/clone having a similar sense of humour to the Flash.

And when Lex Luthor finds out and he will find out, you can hide things from Lex but you can't keep them hidden forever (unless we're talking about Superman's secret identity, pretty sure Lex refuses to believe Supes has a civilian persona). He will go into a RAGE, when he realizes that his weapon against Superman has been raised to believe that Lex Luthor is as close as any mortal can get to being concidered the Devil himself.

This is a great story and I hope to see more soon, especially Superman and Luthors reactions!
Comments from author:
Glad you like it. And I can so imagine Supes reaction to finding out about Xander's existence as well as the fact that he has a sense of humor very similar to the one possessed by the Flash.

I probably am going to write a sequel to this at some point. It may yet become part of a series or a larger fic we'll have to wait and see.
Review By [ChaosCarlos] • Date [26 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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