Review of chapter "Let slip the darkness of the soul." from sorawithans
Betcha Joyce was Beryl.
Review By [sorawithans
] • Date [22 Mar 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Let slip the darkness of the soul." from Spica
Hope you get around to continue this soon... ^_^
Review By [Spica
] • Date [20 Nov 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Let slip the darkness of the soul." from deathgeonous
I am still looking forward to this being continued at some point. Well, thanks for writing this, and bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous
] • Date [3 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Let slip the darkness of the soul." from Musicalife
Good chapter, I have a few questions/thoughts though.
1. Will Beryl/Joyce recreate the shitenou somehow and have them aid buffy?
2. Or better yet, Joyce looks at the mayor and decides that there can't be any other evils around besides her and Buffy/Hild and runs him out of town before dominating Synder and letting it be known that Sunnydale, if not Earth, is _hers_.
Review By [Musicalife
] • Date [30 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Let slip the darkness of the soul." from JoshuaRichardson
Uhhm, Loki is the son of jötunn (Frost Giants), the mortal enemies of the Asgard. He is the son of Helblindi and Býleistr, also jötunn. He is the blood brother (sworn brother, not actually related) of Odin, who swore an oath to that effect.
For more information on him, check out: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Loki
Review By [JoshuaRichardson
] • Date [26 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Let slip the darkness of the soul." from Robby
It's great to see this continued.
I look forward to seeing what happens next!!!
Review By [Robby
] • Date [25 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Let slip the darkness of the soul." from Jimbobob
Hmm, updated sooner on this site, which makes sense I guess considering what it is.
Yeah, I thought Beryl in regards to who Joyce was, but immediately thought "No, that's too obvious."
Still looking forward to more of this.
Review By [Jimbobob
] • Date [21 Apr 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Let slip the darkness of the soul." from Starfox
Very nicely done (Joyce as Queen Beryl from Sailor Moon?), I am looking Forward to the four heroes next steps.
Review By [Starfox
] • Date [17 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Let slip the darkness of the soul." from FairyQilan
I liked this story. I just can't help but wonder where you are going with this. They have nowhere to go but up and anyone that actually tries to harm them is screwed. So you have to make ridiculously powerful opponents. Which will get annoying. I'm not saying i'm not going to read, just that if you can pull this off plausibly i will bow down to your mad writing skills.
Review By [FairyQilan
] • Date [17 Apr 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Let slip the darkness of the soul." from HolyKnight
So Buffy has became the Daimakaichoko(The "Ko" suffix at the end of the Daimakaicho word turns the word itsef into "Child/son/daughter of the Daimakaicho)
The point its HOW much remains of her humanity to this point. . .certainly the Slayer essence that remained in her to this point it has been purged in its entirely. . .however i suspect that her humanity its less than a half. . possibly only a third. . .and a serious event that were to force her to remove the limiters that Hild left in her (the rings, earrings, and bangles in her hair are Limiters) it will have the consequence of purging whatever remains of her mortality for good.
Add that its a matter of time for Hild, if not ASAP, to arrive to the dimension. Regardless of her motivations and such, one thing that she always has been, it has been a LOVING mother, and the fact of gaining a second daughter would make her joyful. However you have to take on account that the Ultimate Force of OMG-verse likely its starting to work NOW, as due to balance, it can't exist a Class 1, Category 1 Demoness of Buffy's raw power without a designated opposing entity in the Doublet System. Depending of things, Kami-Sama may be in talks with D'Hoffryn, lord of the Vengance Demons, in order to "twist" the Wish or get it to happen sooner. . .and turn someone else of the Sunnydale area. . .or someone to come soon. . .into Buffy's Divine Counterpart in the Doublet System
Comments from author:
Ooh, wonderful points you've raised here. Lets start from the back. First, there is no Doublet system, as there is no Asgard and no Nifleheim in Buffy's reality. How else would she be able to kill all the various demons she does without reprecussions. Second, Odin, and by extension everyone else, have been locked out of the universe by the Powers that Be. There is a reason and special way they managed this, but that is for later on. So Hild will not show up physically - or metaphysically for that matter - for a very long time, if ever.
One thing to note, the dress she received from Whistler had no accessories with it. She wore a pair of her own earrings, but other than that, no other jewelry. Take that how you will. As for her humanity, that is something that will be dealt with during the course of the next couple chapters. I can confirm though, that the Slayer spirit has been completely annihilated in her body/soul due to the absolute-ness of Hild.
Review By [HolyKnight
] • Date [16 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Let slip the darkness of the soul." from SlayerandWereLeopard
great update, though I cannot guess the character other than saying the evil queen from sailor moon - though that is a very wild guess. Who will be the top evil person? Should be interesting.
Review By [SlayerandWereLeopard
] • Date [16 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Let slip the darkness of the soul." from Genuka
*bows in respect* I love your story.
Oh! Since you like Xander in such prediciments might I suggest my own Hellsing cross? He went as Alucard and the situation is just a total mess. *smirk* = http://tthf.me/Dlmu
Review By [Genuka
] • Date [15 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Let slip the darkness of the soul." from Aenea
So, Xander has a god slaying sword, willow and buffy have godly and demonic power, and Dawn is now the Childe of Alucard. Oh Dear the Mayor is screwed. Though the idea of Dawn eating Glory while Alucard laughs and cackles is nice and soothing. I'm surprised he can feel her across dimensional boundaries, but I guess that's the Key at work. Hehe an Alucard who now realizes how big the multiverse is and still ranks up there on the badass scale. It opens up so many 'challenges' for him; I can see Dawn quickly becoming his favorite Childe just for the ability to hit a new universe and have some...Fun. Though that's probably down the road after she establishes herself.
Hild/ Buffy - yeah as soon as she get's a hold on that power (does she have any power limiters on?) she's going to be a force to be reckoned with. Even before that though Hild's appeal was always the psychological. She has massive power, but she never really needs it. Just Mind Screws.
Xander/ Arthas - I wonder how long til he realizes he can Dominate Undead and starts going to town.
Willow/ The Morrigan - Hehe Goddess of Battle, Strife(chaos and bloodshed), and Sovereignty. That should just be fun to watch
Joyce/ ? - Queen Beryl I'm guessing. Though all the others except Dawn (maybe) vastly out power her. Hopefully she can shunt the villain who never read the Evil Overlord List to the side...Hild most likely wrote the list though so her dealing with Buffy is going to fun.
Comments from author:
Heh, yeah it does seem pretty fun doesn't it. As for the Mayor and Glory, they aren't even in the top five for the Big Bads I'm planning on unleashing. The Powers that Be aren't going to be happy with Hild showing up, and since they strive for Balance above all else, I'm going to be making it so that there are both Good, somewhat, and Evil Powers. One of the major Big Bads I have planned: Angra Mainyu.
As for Joyce, well, in the original series compared to the other's she would be under-powered. But that is after about fifteen thousand years of mental, physical, and meta-physical degradation from the corruption of Metallia. And even then she gave the Senshi a run for their money. (Good must defeat evil deus ex machina aside) The version I've picked here is just before she ever met Metallia, so not only is her skill much greater, even if her outright power is smaller, she still has full control over herself.
Review By [Aenea
] • Date [15 Apr 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Let slip the darkness of the soul." from tammin
Very nicely done. I shudder to think how the PTB's and the Senior Partners are going to handle having those three on the Hellmouth. The seers must have screamed bloody murder at the start of the Spell.
P.s. did you have to turn Joyce into Queen Beryl, and did see bring anyone with her?
Comments from author:
Thank you. The seers were all knocked unconscious due to the spontaneous unraveling and rewriting of the timeline.
Also, yes for the first part of your post script, and no for the second.
Review By [tammin
] • Date [15 Apr 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Let slip the darkness of the soul." from Selias
Oh, god. PLEASE tell me you're not turning Xander into a girl.
Comments from author:
Er.... I'm not.
p.s. Of course I may just be telling you this because you asked me too.
p.p.s And I may have said that I may have said that I was telling you because you asked me too.
p.p.p.s See above, add "And I may have said that". etc.
Review By [Selias
] • Date [15 Apr 13] • Not Rated