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Review of chapter "EPILOGUE: G.K. Chesterton" from (Current Donor)deiticlast
Review:
I almost didn't read this, due to the fact that in your foreword, you mentioned there was material in this fic containing a combination of mayo and ketchup in conjunction with french fries, but I struggled through, lol. I liked this story so much I'm going to go back and read the first stories in this series. Good job, man.
Comments from author:
Thanks; I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and I look forward to hearing your opinion on the others.
Review By [(Current Donor)deiticlast] • Date [17 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "EPILOGUE: G.K. Chesterton" from tealruby
Review:
Another fine tale, and a nice use of the OUAT setting. Well done!
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading, and thanks for reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
Review By [tealruby] • Date [21 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "EPILOGUE: G.K. Chesterton" from Tempi
Review:
Great crossover between two excellent TV series. Your approach with using secondary characters as the main focus is very refreshing and I look forward to reading more from your hand.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I definitely enjoy taking a look at the world(s) through the non-main characters. Thanks for your continued readership and reviews.
Review By [Tempi] • Date [21 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "SIX: Alice Hoffman again" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Listener has written a craftily good story that has left me feeling a bit at a lost. As I thought that all the girls who got the power were going with Willow!
Comments from author:
Apparently that is not the case. And don't worry; you won't be lost once you read the ending.

Thanks for your continued readership and reviews.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [17 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "FIVE: Alice Hoffman" from AllenPitt
Review:
Things will get even more weird, if the spell breaks while Shannon is in there. Not sure if that lowers the barrier or not, of course. Willow & company are sure going to be surprised when they find out Story Brooke's ....story.
Comments from author:
On the timeline, this is a couple of weeks before the breaking of the spell, so with only two more chapters plus an epilogue, I don't think there's enough linear story time to tell that part the way you're expecting.

Thanks for your continued readership (and reviews).
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [13 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "FOUR: Susan Wiggs" from AllenPitt
Review:
If Shannon thinks things are weird now, wait until they all get their memories back & powers. I imagine you'd end up with a 3rd personality, kind of a mix of the two. Weird. Now the bears will know what it's like to be human...
Comments from author:
Well the problem is that, outside of a few minutes at the very end of last season's finale, we don't really KNOW how the producers and writers are going to handle the personality shifts. And if you think the bears knowing what it's like to be human will be weird, imagine how Jiminy Cricket is going to feel...

Thanks for reading, and thanks for reviewing.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [9 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "THREE: Paramore" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Please!! Let there be more to the story!!! I want to see what happens to all the girls and the bears!
Comments from author:
Seven chapters, plus a prologue and epilogue. Remember, just because I didn't post the whole thing all at once doesn't mean I haven't finished writing it.

Thanks for your continued readership and review-age.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "THREE: Paramore" from AllenPitt
Review:
And willow hasn't even seen the weird parts of Story Brooke yet...
Comments from author:
That's true. She hasn't.

Thanks for your continued readership and review-age.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [6 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "THREE: Paramore" from Gideon
Review:
Freedom is never easy and sometimes it costs more than you might expect :( I don't think the days are going to be getting much easier for Aurelia but at least she has the option of fighting back now. I hope she considers using non-lethal force next time.
Leah and Shannon are likely to be confused for some time too, at least Leah has people who can explain some of it. And I'm sure Willow can find some bears if she looks hard enough! 'Cause bears seem to be pretty awesome :)
Comments from author:
I think, in the heat of the moment, Aurelia didn't know her own strength. But as we know from the show and other fanfic, slayers really don't like to kill humans -- I mean, Aurelia wasn't very happy about it once she realized what she'd done, and if you think about it, even before, she wasn't much for fighting back when submitting and capitulating was an option. As for Leah and Shannon -- well, they both landed at the feet of people who can explain their new situations, and at least Shannon has been a slayer for eleven years and knows how to deal with new and strange situations.

Thanks for your continued readership and review-age.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [6 Aug 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "TWO: Terri Windling" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Definitely more, please! I so like this story!!
Comments from author:
Have I ever left you hanging on a WIP?

Thanks for your continued support (and reviews).
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [3 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "TWO: Terri Windling" from Gideon
Review:
I am looking forward to our heroines and their "changes" making an impact on their stories :) but does that mean that Willow and Amber are not main characters? Or just that she will not be changing?
Comments from author:
Willow and Amber remain important characters, but the three "main" protagonists are Shannon, Leah, and Aurelia. I tried not to use TOO many characters in this story, not after the last two.

Thanks for your continued readership and reviews.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [2 Aug 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "TWO: Terri Windling" from AllenPitt
Review:
Somebody is going to turn into a talking bear, is my guess.
Comments from author:
I already have two talking bears -- three, if you count Cub.

Thanks for reading, and thanks for reviewing.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [2 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "ONE: W.H. Auden" from theraceskong
Review:
Very interesting setup. I likes your take on what I'm assuming is Goldilocks and the Three Bears. And making the three bears gay? Funny, very funny. Keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. And, honestly, once I thought of how OUaT would handle characters called the "three bears", how could I _not_ make it three gay guys? (Although technically one of them doesn't turn out to be a bear -- not a spoiler.) As for more -- you only have to wait until tonight, because I post new chapters of this story Mondays and Thursdays when I get home from work.

Thanks for reading, and thanks for reviewing.
Review By [theraceskong] • Date [2 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "ONE: W.H. Auden" from AllenPitt
Review:
Ketchup AND Mayo? That is just against the laws of God and man. Otherwise, interesting story. Boy, Willow & company will be real surprised by Story Brooke. And it's almost at the 'magic comes back' level. Hm. the curse is more than just a barrier. Anyone of the inhabitants who try to leave, bad things happen. So the curse is involved, too. Willow will likely notice that...
Comments from author:
I first heard about the ketchup/mayo combo from my sister. I don't know where she got it from. It's not bad, really, although I prefer to mix my ketchup with hot sauce, just for that extra kick. And I'm not going to comment upon any of your other notes other than the fifth sentence, which is to say -- yes. I set it at that time period on purpose, as the epilogue will attest.

Thanks for your continued readership and reviews.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [31 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "ONE: W.H. Auden" from robertlisle
Review:
Another great start to an interesting story. I've enjoyed all of your stories so far and look forward to reading this one.
Comments from author:
I'm glad I've caught your attention. I hope it continues to hold your interest.

Thanks for reading, and thanks for reviewing.
Review By [robertlisle] • Date [31 Jul 12] • Not Rated
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