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Review of chapter "Chapter 10: Supernatural" from locard
Review:
Just found this site and this is the second story I have read so far and I have to say that if the other stories are this good I am going to love this site.
Review By [locard] • Date [15 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: Supernatural" from Harry
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Nice way to take out a Wendigo without the usual spells as shown in X-Men #139 and 140 when Logan went to Canada. Now, as for what they just ran into, I would say a NightMare!
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: Supernatural" from lanned
Review:
I don't usually like massive fandom crossovers but you have me hooked! I can't wait for more!
Comments from author:
Thank you! I am glad you like the story. :-)
Review By [lanned] • Date [2 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9: Time Travel & Alternate Realities" from Harry
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When Red says that the dimensions are collapsing, that is BAD NEWS! I was sort of hoping we'd see another version of Vamp Willow, one who is working for the good guys, instead of being a Master Vampire in her world.
Comments from author:
Interesting idea about Vamp Willow. So far I hadn't planned to include anything like that, but I might in the future. I'll put it on my list with plans for the future. Maybe another ficlet in this Series can focus on an adventure in another alternate reality with a Vamp Willow. They might be looking for a way home for Dean & co anyway, so why not end up somewhere else. :-))

Thanks for commenting again. :-)
Review By [Harry] • Date [1 Dec 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Help" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
you are doing a very good job of merging the different characters into teams. fine read, thank you.
Comments from author:
Thank you, and you are very welcome. :-)
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [28 Nov 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Help" from Harry
Review:
*Starts singing* HANG ON! HELP IS ON THE WAY! Well, The Doctor may not have been able to answer the call for help, but Jack Harkness was able to. Now, lets clean the Wraiths out, get the flooding under control, and then start working on taking care of the lab and finding out who or what started the explosion!
Comments from author:
:-)) Thanks for commenting again. I am always looking forward to you comments. :-)

Chapter 9 is on its way... ;-)
Review By [Harry] • Date [28 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Help" from HMaxMarius
Review:
Hi, just wanted to let you know that I'm really enjoying this story. The artwork is really cool too (though I'm not sure you need to put quite so many at the end of every chapter).

One bit of semantics you might want to consider. I've noticed you use the word 'debriefing' a lot. Unfortunately, that word is not interchangeable with 'briefing'. A debriefing is when you tell others what you did. A briefing is when others tell you what you will be doing.

In this chapter, when Danny thinks back on being told about the Stargate program that morning, he is recalling a briefing. When he has to tell the people running Atlantis what happened when the Wraith attacked, that will be a debriefing.
Comments from author:
Thank you, I'm glad you like the story and artwork. :-) Yeah, I know I don't need to put so many book covers at the end of each chapter, but since I made so many in my excitement I thought I might as well use them. :-))

Thank you for clearing that up about briefing and debriefing. For some reason I thought they were the same. Guess its just one of the words I never learned in English class and just made the wrong assumptions about while hearing it on Stargate. I'll try to pay close attention to it in the future, so that I hopefully won't make the same mistake again. Thanks for letting me know.
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [27 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Help" from Dreamweaver
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Wonder what ol' Jacky-boy'll think when he finds out/realizes that he (and the rest of the people presently around him) are nowhere NEAR Earth. Hmmmm,....with as much travelling as the guy seems to do, wonder if he'd ever been in that particular neighborhool before?
Review By [Dreamweaver] • Date [27 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7: Unexpected Events" from Harry
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Sounds like Faith and Rachel are going to get along just fine. Now, lets get this show on the Road! There are things that need to be taken care of here at Atlantis and times a wasting!
Review By [Harry] • Date [26 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6: Tests" from Harry
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So, we not only have SG1, SGA, 50, UNIT, TORCHWOOD, now we have a Slayer! Bring on the action and bring on the enemy!
Review By [Harry] • Date [26 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: Recruiting" from Harry
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Things are starting to get interesting with all the new team members coming in. Now, lets get the tests over with and start the briefing!
Review By [Harry] • Date [26 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7: Unexpected Events" from Blackett
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Great update:)
Review By [Blackett] • Date [26 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6: Tests" from Thedruid
Review:
You know, the first story of this series was good, but now.... Just too much going on, and too many important charcters grabbing for the spotlight of the story. I'm afraid you've fallen into the trap of trying to do too much in one story. So much focus on 30+ charcters has caused the plot to be lost.

I would advise you break this up into many diffrent stories, each team getting pulled into the SG plot is it's own story. Then write yet another story that brings them together again, which focus on just a few charcters point of view.
Comments from author:
Thanks for your opinion, but at the moment I can't break the story up. The recruits tests are all happening at the same time and are influencing each other, so they need to be in one story. The whole point of this story is to bring all characters together and solve the Ba'al issue. Afterwards I am planning to have shorter stories that focus just on a few of the characters. But for now I'm afraid I am going to continue like this. Sorry that you don't like it.
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [25 Nov 12] • Rating [4 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Five-0" from qrm
Review:
Love what you've set up here it should prove to be epic.
This is the best scifi based multi cross on tth since buffaloes hunter knight series
Comments from author:
Awww, thank you! Now you made my day with your comment. :-))

I'm glad you like the story so much. The next chapter should be up tonight. Hope you'll like that one, too.
Review By [qrm] • Date [24 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Invitations" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
fantastic read, thank you.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [20 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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