Read the story again from the beginning till the end.
One thing though. I'm the same height as Buffy is and I also rode huge horses and I mean huge. I didn't need a bucket to mount it. Buffy as flexible she is doesn't need one either. My only complain.

Now about her eyes is there something wrong with them or is Buffy becoming a full Slayer and is her body adjusting to her improved ability's. It's not a strange thing to have some side affects. Being the Slayer for eleven years it's possible that her ability's will become much stronger.

No council I presume and where is Dakota didn't read about him much.

Hope you will update faster this time.

Again very good story and writing.

a really interesting story...
eagerly awaiting to read more ^_^

You are a high school student? Your language teachers must love you. If you aren't getting straight A's, there is something wrong with the modern education system.

I am really enjoying your story and look forward to reading more.

My name is* it currently says My name os Summers Buffy.

forgot to mention that kun and chan are also ways to indicate affection for a person. IE RomanticInterest-Chan/kun.

So, you changed the name, changed the personality, changed the entire setting, changed the history and kept the character's face...how precisely is this a crossover? That's not Buffy, that's an original character with a Buffy name label tacked on as an afterthought.

woooooooohoooo!!!!! loved new chap thought you left us.

I assume the M3A1 that Buffy uses is some Japanese issue or other service issue weapon. Now I know that in my experience the M3A1 is a .45 ACP caliber submachine gun made by the Gas Lamp Division of General Motors. When I was in the Army Guard in one of the units I was assigned to I was issued an M1911A1 (well two different ones: a) the first was made by Remington Rand and was a piece of junk b) the second was made by Ithaca and was a charmed defensive tool) and an M3A1 submachine gun. Yet from the description of Buffy's M3A1 I suspect that she is armed with some sort of long range sniper type rifle.

hmm..interesting update though its a it confusing how she got from the hospital to to the horse.

Well, that part was a flash back while this continues on with the main timeline for this story.

Glad you're not giving up on this!

How is this fit meant to be good? Every time they get near each other its drama and distraction, the meet deferred, again. I see that Buffy is going to be leading SG-1? I like that a lot.

Good chapter.

Excellent start...but I would have expected Mark to make at least a token attempt to convince Buffy to go to West Point.

Alright where is that school that teach writers how to be evil so I can find it and pummel those teachers. You are so evil.
First you ended chapter 3 with a mean cliffhanger next when I think yes an update. It doesn't involve a continue of that chapter but a flashback. That is so mean

Well even when it wasn't expected I totally love the way how you explained her gifts. again very refreshing and awesome.

can't wait what will come next. Oh and I can't wait how long she can keep her secret from her uncle, because he will notice with his background it would be strange if he wouldn't.

hmm..now thats interesting, though when I read big black dog I though it was a new HP crossover. lol

So, a very different approach to the Slayer line, with a more Native American(-ish), nature-oriented (associating the traits of the Slayer with animal, rather than demon, abilities) origin story than in canon, then?