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Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from Glumski
Review:
Darn, this is good! And kind of odd.
I really like the general idea, though it does create a slight problem. The character isn't exactly Buffy. I'm pretty sure you got the overall personality right but with a completely different childhood comes a very different person. She's still a very likable and vivid character, which is almost entirely your doing (and that's awesome).
Your style of writing is also very nice; it sounds almost professional. I have to admit that I didn't really get the last (eigth) chapter, probably because I wasn't exactly sure who was talking at what point of the dialogues. And that bone scene. No clue what happened there.
And of course the sudden appearance of Charlie was a little weird. I guess that's one of the bigger problems with changed backstories: In a 'normal' crossover the reader already knows pretty much everything about the characters. This isn't the case here. I just assume that everything went just like in the original series but then there suddenly are differences like Slayers getting some kind of spirit guides (Dakota), dead people still living (Charlie) or... um... Buffy being a vampire? That was Buffy with the canines and weird eyes in the last scene, right? Yeah, the last chapter is definitely confusing.
Well, I'd love to read more of this! I hope you're still writing! Especially since the introductions seem to be out of the way now.
Review By [Glumski] • Date [30 Jul 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from randyzoopurple
Review:
Wow great
Review By [randyzoopurple] • Date [11 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from lunalurker
Review:
Very, very confusing, this is.
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [27 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from serenityselena
Review:
interesting chapter ^_^

Merry Christmas!!!
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [24 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from Centaurious
Review:
The fact that you are a High School student shows in your writing. It is a disjointed mess and you are jamming a Mary Sue into the SG1 cast. There is nothing of Buffy Summers in this character, everything that makes up Buffy is missing save for the name. Putting a Corvette badge on a chevy hatchback won't make it a Corvette.
Review By [Centaurious] • Date [22 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from randyzoopurple
Review:
love i hope its a faith/ buffy parring
Review By [randyzoopurple] • Date [21 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from MarieKnight
Review:
Please keep updating!!! Like it a lot...
Review By [MarieKnight] • Date [13 Jun 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
Review:
lol, great update :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [27 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from bradsan
Review:
Hey no fair ending like this.

Very good again can't wait for the next update.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [27 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from serenityselena
Review:
a really interesting chapter...
eagerly awaiting for the next one ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [24 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Wise
Review:
... so how is this character 'Buffy', exactly?
I mean, what distinguishes her from an OC raised in Texas who became an airforce officer before (presumably) being called as a Slayer?
Review By [Wise] • Date [24 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Genuka
Review:
Wouldn't put it past Janet to kidnap SG-1 & Buffy and stuff them in a room together until they talk. *snicker*
Review By [Genuka] • Date [23 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from DarthTenebrus
Review:
From those of us who have risked life and limb in peace and in battle, you honor us with your story, and with this chapter in particular. We can never forget those who gave everything they had, to make this country what it was in the beginning, and to preserve what it still represents to this day for all who dream of freedom and a better life for their future generations.

All gave some....Some gave All.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [23 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from bradsan
Review:
Read the story again from the beginning till the end.
One thing though. I'm the same height as Buffy is and I also rode huge horses and I mean huge. I didn't need a bucket to mount it. Buffy as flexible she is doesn't need one either. My only complain.

Now about her eyes is there something wrong with them or is Buffy becoming a full Slayer and is her body adjusting to her improved ability's. It's not a strange thing to have some side affects. Being the Slayer for eleven years it's possible that her ability's will become much stronger.

No council I presume and where is Dakota didn't read about him much.

Hope you will update faster this time.

Again very good story and writing.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [17 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from serenityselena
Review:
a really interesting story...
eagerly awaiting to read more ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [17 Feb 13] • Not Rated
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