... so how is this character 'Buffy', exactly? I mean, what distinguishes her from an OC raised in Texas who became an airforce officer before (presumably) being called as a Slayer?
From those of us who have risked life and limb in peace and in battle, you honor us with your story, and with this chapter in particular. We can never forget those who gave everything they had, to make this country what it was in the beginning, and to preserve what it still represents to this day for all who dream of freedom and a better life for their future generations.
All gave some....Some gave All.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [23 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Read the story again from the beginning till the end. One thing though. I'm the same height as Buffy is and I also rode huge horses and I mean huge. I didn't need a bucket to mount it. Buffy as flexible she is doesn't need one either. My only complain.
Now about her eyes is there something wrong with them or is Buffy becoming a full Slayer and is her body adjusting to her improved ability's. It's not a strange thing to have some side affects. Being the Slayer for eleven years it's possible that her ability's will become much stronger.
No council I presume and where is Dakota didn't read about him much.
Hope you will update faster this time.
Again very good story and writing.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [17 Feb 13] • Not Rated
You are a high school student? Your language teachers must love you. If you aren't getting straight A's, there is something wrong with the modern education system.
I am really enjoying your story and look forward to reading more.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [17 Feb 13] • Not Rated
So, you changed the name, changed the personality, changed the entire setting, changed the history and kept the character's face...how precisely is this a crossover? That's not Buffy, that's an original character with a Buffy name label tacked on as an afterthought.
Review By [Difdi] • Date [16 Feb 13] • Rating [1 out of 10]
I assume the M3A1 that Buffy uses is some Japanese issue or other service issue weapon. Now I know that in my experience the M3A1 is a .45 ACP caliber submachine gun made by the Gas Lamp Division of General Motors. When I was in the Army Guard in one of the units I was assigned to I was issued an M1911A1 (well two different ones: a) the first was made by Remington Rand and was a piece of junk b) the second was made by Ithaca and was a charmed defensive tool) and an M3A1 submachine gun. Yet from the description of Buffy's M3A1 I suspect that she is armed with some sort of long range sniper type rifle.
Review By [AndreaMaine] • Date [16 Feb 13] • Not Rated
SlayerandWereLeopard
