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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Deadpan
Review:
I think you forgot Abbie when Xander was handing out assignments.
Comments from author:
I have her assignment, it would just be given to her after Xander's final line of this chapter and so it got held for now because... well, that's an awesome way to end a chapter.
Review By [Deadpan] • Date [15 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Harry
Review:
Xander has it right when it comes to the Hulk. Just point the Big Green Guy in the right direction and LET HIM GO AT IT!
Comments from author:
Not much else you can do with this version of the Hulk.
Review By [Harry] • Date [15 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TharzZzDunN
Review:
Not too shabby!

Cheers~!
Review By [TharzZzDunN] • Date [27 Sep 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from dialNforNinja
Review:
Aww, but if you don't throw weird alien powerplant material around, where will Xavier's get more students from? Ordinary tech/chemical/magic based supers aren't cool enough to hang out with Homo Superior after all, let alone ordinary humans.

The reinforcements should be quite welcome at this point, to put a little tactical depth in place where any misstep could have ended in disaster originally.
Review By [dialNforNinja] • Date [22 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Selonianth
Review:
while amusing, I find the insults toward Tony to be... needless. Perhaps it is unwise to explode something that they don't know how it will handle exploding but seeing as he doesn't know they're there, it is pretty much his only option.

Also, Poison Ivy? You brought a DC girl to Marvel? Honestly I was expecting the 63'd version of the Avengers, Dream, She-hulk, ...Whatever the name of Hawkeye's counterpart would be, Tanya Stark, Thorette... and maybe a male widow but prolly not. 63 doesn't work in reverse afterall.
Comments from author:
It'd all make more sense if Chapter 2 was done and up. The title is a reference to Kate and Cassie, two of the first three the Avengers interact with, but the group in and of itself is the Great Lakes Avengers that's being developed in Trigamy. Since I have so much of that story outlined, I felt confident doing a future-verse ficlet using the characters, but this stalled because I was running off memories of the movie pre-DVD release and since the release, I've had other projects plus school and work.
Review By [Selonianth] • Date [8 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from solitare
Review:
Where is Xander in all this? It says "rule 63" so I was expecting a female Xander or at least Xander being somewhere.
Comments from author:
We're also missing a few of the Trigamy girls at present. Don't fret, he's there.
Review By [solitare] • Date [29 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
awesome
Comments from author:
Thanks. :)
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [11 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TinMan
Review:
.....
W.T.F.I.S!!!!!

Crack, I assume?.

In retrospect it's funny, but at the time I was blue screening.
Comments from author:
There's gonna be more, as soon as my muse gets away from doing Blue Belle-centric stuff. I meant to do a chapter a day of Rule 63, but... well, my muse said "nope".
Review By [TinMan] • Date [9 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
A great take on getting Cap to have a mental wtf.
Comments from author:
It's a really good point. You have an alien ship powered by God knows what, so you blow it the fuck up in the middle of New York City? Really?
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [4 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Studyofchaos
Review:
Okay, that was funny. More please!
Comments from author:
Already working on it.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [3 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Elleria
Review:
Love this.
Comments from author:
Thanks. More soon. :)
Review By [Elleria] • Date [3 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Meneldur
Review:
Looks fun. I assume these gals are from Trigamy? If so, are they exported, or is Trigamy ongoing in the same world as the Avengers is?
Anyway, it's not amazing (yet), but it certainly has potential and I think it's a cool idea. I especially liked their logical explanation for not blowing up the Chitauri vessel, and Cap's ending thought.
Comments from author:
Dawn in Trigamy has access to magic and dimensional transit before undergoing a change on Halloween. The story made it that far in the original version but not in the edit. So there will be some immense spoilers going in this story.
Review By [Meneldur] • Date [3 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from stonewar
Review:
now that's something I can get behind....keep going please.
Comments from author:
Girl power. ^_^
Review By [stonewar] • Date [3 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AonGealach
Review:
The only thing I can say is HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
Comments from author:
Common sense: ain't that a bitch?
Review By [AonGealach] • Date [3 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Stonewolff
Review:
This is great. I really enjoyed your American Dream, Trigamy and Dawn fics so even if I would prefer another chapter for either of those stories, this is the next best thing. Thank you very much, you just made my day. ^^
Comments from author:
Well, this has the best of all worlds. American Dream is Kate from Trigamy, then we have Cassie and Bekah and Pamela and two girls who've yet to appear in Trigamy canon, and even Dawn Frost-Summers...
Review By [Stonewolff] • Date [3 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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