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Chance Encounters In A Bar

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Review of chapter "Scene in a restaurant" from Groundshaker
Review:
“Hi, Daddy,”
That's perfect, I love it
Review By [Groundshaker] • Date [14 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Scene in a restaurant" from PATM
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That Stabler, whew. If a criminal can't be found drag Buffy to jail!
Review By [PATM] • Date [14 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scene in a restaurant" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
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Interesting idea, I hope you go through with it.

Thanks for writing,

DaveT.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [12 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scene in a restaurant" from Rich
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I thought Buffy was sharing too much information, but if Elliot's daughter is the new slayer it makes sense. Of course, it was kind of mean for her to withhold that until the end, but I guess that could be considered payback for his earlier attitude ( although he may not see it that way). Overall, a pretty good "starter fic" for a series.
Review By [Rich] • Date [11 Aug 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Scene in a restaurant" from (Current Donor)mmooch
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Ha! Loved how Buffy kept reminding them to imagine her with a tweedy accent. Poor Elliot; not only does he have his world thrown upside down, but now he finds out that his daughter has been dragged into it? Hope the other detectives can keep him from doing something stupid.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [11 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Denied Plausibility" from Rich
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For what it's worth, I agree with you about Elliot. His first instinct is to get control of the situation; that means he has to get control of any immediate threat, and Buffy certainly qualifies as a threat. Accusing her of causing the situation is unreasonable, but not OOC - both he and Olivia have used similar accusations when interrogating suspects in the past, in order to get them to talk. Of course, that won't work with Buffy, but he has no way to know that. I assume he'll change his opinion once he has time to think things through.
Review By [Rich] • Date [8 Aug 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Denied Plausibility" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
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There's none so blind as those who will not see!

I think Stabler is being way to pig headed in not believing the evidence of his own eyes.

Great update.

DaveT.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [8 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Denied Plausibility" from burmafrdnow
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I prefer Fanfiction to what is on TV because good fanfiction is usually better then what is on TV

However you are making Elliot look so stupid that the story is now taking on water and sinking
Comments from author:
I don't think Elliot is stupid but he does have a focused view on how things should be. He will redeem himself but has to go through the process of learning that the world is a much different place then he thought.

And his attitude of arrest first and sort it out later is not without precedence. He knows Buffy is involved and until he understands her place in all of it he will assume, not unreasonably, that she is not totally innocent.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Denied Plausibility" from cmdruhura
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Elliot should be aware that while falling back on what you know when things go wonky might be a normal reaction, it is not always the right reaction.
Review By [cmdruhura] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Denied Plausibility" from (Current Donor)mmooch
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Yay for Finn! (Wow, considering the Finn from BtVS, I never thought I'd say that.) Wonder how long Buffy will put up with Elliot before she just writes him off as being too much like a Sunnydale cop.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Denied Plausibility" from Valandar
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Come on, Elliot's not THIS much of a jerk. Still, interesting so far. :D
Review By [Valandar] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ill met by moonlight" from eriktheviking
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A well written brutal introduction for the SVU.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ill met by moonlight" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
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Great update, good fight.

DaveT.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ill met by moonlight" from WolfWriter
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Thats pretty much a big, fat, YES!

Excellent chapter.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ill met by moonlight" from (Current Donor)mmooch
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Little harsh of Buffy to do that the detectives, but it wasn't as if she let anything serious happen to them. So they have a few bruises; they also understand the Slayer 'myth' a little better now.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Not Rated
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