I think it would more accurate to portray Crows as Avatars of Vengeance (The force of nature). They're not demons so Anyanka's boss wouldn't have control over them.
Review By [eternalfox] • Date [29 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Just the thought of the remnants of the murder of crows lyin around make my head turn. The scoobs wouldend up a heck of a lot more practical and final in their executions. They would have a certain amount of foreknowledge. Heck, you just gotta know that it would be some funky interactions withe the two spirits, the primal and the slayer, and the massive magical gifts of Willow. Dude, y'all got one bodacious setup here! Follow thru with it! Happy New Year!
Comments from author:
Yeah they wouldn't have been so innocent afterwards and would likely have done a lot of more final answers to their problems.
Review By [nerfherder] • Date [10 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
So what happened to Angel, the last time he is mentioned is right before the fight in front of the costume shop but when you move on to the actual fight he seems to disappear from your story. Did he die immediately? Did he hold back hoping they would dust Spike?
I really hope you decide to continue it in some fashion. Just think of the carnage! And not just that. Imagine what would happen when the trio meet Anya or Hallie. Obviously the reason for vengeance wouldn't be Xander this time around, as he wouldn't let it happen again, but I'd love to see that meeting. And it would be very interesting to see if Ethan would dare to come back to town at all.
This story was awesome, but it has sparked a ton of what if questions. Here's hoping you get the urge to continue it one day. Regardless, thanks for an excellent read!
Comments from author:
not sure if I'll continue it but I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [uten] • Date [4 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Now this, THIS is the way the Halloween episode should have gone! Buffy, being a Slayer on a whole new level, with weapons that would make any demon or vamp turn tail and run, Xander as a marksmen beyond reproach, and Willow, THIS is a version of Willow I would LOVE to see more of! *Willow wants to play* EASY GIRL! *But I want to play {Talons come out}* I love the story and I am recommending it!
Comments from author:
glad you enjoyed it so much.
Review By [Harry] • Date [3 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Wow, very scary but very good. this has the potential to be a very dark AU if you do anything with more this.
Comments from author:
thanks, not sure I want to continue it but I'll consider it. It would have to be dark though think of all the people the group would likely kill that otherwise survived.
Review By [tchizek] • Date [3 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Very nice! Wonder what the after effects will be - since all three had a /very/ strong Crow possessing them, how much will they change in the coming days? At least Buffy should start getting over her necrophilia; can't really see Xander not getting darker; and willow may be the most changed of them all, considering her personality at this time...
Ya know, O Muses To Yon Author, this'd make a really neat multi chapter... o_o
Comments from author:
yeah it would be interesting to see where it would go from there. THe muses are unfortunately silent on a continuation at this time though.