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Buffy AVP: Hive

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Review of chapter "chapter 18" from DarthTenebrus
Review:
This series was way better than the AVP films that they put out, Well Done!
Comments from author:
Thanks! That's high praise. I think I may make it a trilogy.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [29 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 18" from Iceflame
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Interesting. Weird as hell in places, but interesting >:).
Comments from author:
"Weird as hell" is where I live. Thanks! I glad you liked it. : )
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [27 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 18" from eriktheviking
Review:
A great story with well written action and a nice touch at the end reminiscent of the AvP movie.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I think I may be able to squeeze one more story out of this.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [27 Sep 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 18" from Mcspender
Review:
I hope the alien skull Mortok gve to Buffy is the one of Ilirya. It could be a fitting her for her :P.
Nice to see good ol boy Motry giving the Dog, the Goat and the Venizon a fitting end, hell yeah!... too bad that won't mean the end of troubles.

Cool series dude, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Nope. Ilirya is hunting with the Queen of Queens. But in the first draft it was Ilirya 's head in the box. A super powered Alien is just too cool to kill.
There may be a part three.

See ya!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [27 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 18" from Xovervore
Review:
This, and its prequel, are delicious stories. I like how Buffy says:
“LEAVE THIS PLANET!!” Shouted Hive to the Predator fleet. “Never return in force again!”
thus leaving it open for hunters to still come to Earth.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I had to phrase that just right. Hive knows how much the Yautja like to hunt. Gotta keep those scores high .
I'm glad you liked the stories. : )
Review By [Xovervore] • Date [26 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 17" from Mcspender
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Yup, the First is toasted, thanks to the yaujta girl with a country name, the king of the planets and of course: a Biiig Boom. BOOM FOR THE BOOOM GOOOD!!!!xD!.
Yes Xander, the day is not gonna get any better; it's not gonna get any worse either, so ya gotta cout yer blessings kid :P. Good trick using Uncle Dracula blood to snap Buffy out of her trance.
And the final match is set: Ili, Hive and Mortok. Personally, I wanna see the Dog, The Goat and the Venison getting their tails veeery kicked.
ETA: I remembered the ending of 2010, both the movie and the book, and I think the Preds has solved permanently the vampire problem. I mean, it's kinda small, but a second sun is gonna ruin their nights foreeever xD.

Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
Alas Jupiter, I knew thee well.
The BIG boom is still on the way. The question now for Hive/Buffy is this: Who do I kill first?

Next chapter soon.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [21 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 16" from Mcspender
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Andorra is going for the biiig gun, let's see if she can make it. And yeah, Faith is not gonna be the only unhappy one with Willow's plan. I hope uncle Drac and Giles can do something about it.
Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
Yep. things are going to heat up soon.

Next chapter soon.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [19 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 15" from Mcspender
Review:
Ya know something Hive?. When the guy who fought the Ottoman empire at its prime to a standstill, tells you to stop doing something, you listen.
Boy, General Buffy is at stubborn self again :P.
Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
Hey, this is little miss "I am the Law." Don't cha just love the rigid use of power?
Up next, more violence.

See ya!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [15 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 15" from eriktheviking
Review:
An unusual and interesting point of view with the Alien Queen and the Park Ranger fit in with the AvP: Requiem movie. Well done.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I was thinking that if there was an Alien Home world whoever was in charge simply wouldn't just let Hive siphon off drones.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [15 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from Mcspender
Review:
I like girls whose name is the same of a country, they're awesome like that. Good luck hunting the First Andorra xD!!!.
Wow, those shields were damn powerful, too bad of the thousands innocent civilians. I hope Mortok can kill the Dog, the Goat and the Venison =(.
Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
Andorra's a perky kid. If she survived her four brothers, the four kings, she'll be alright. So technically, it's four kings and one queen. I almost,almost feel sorry for the First.
Hey, it's not Mortok's fault Earth just leaves the sky wide open so that any punk with antimatter weapons can fly down and blow up your cities.

Whatever Mortok is gonna do, he better do it fast cuz there's a hypercharged alien on his tail.

Next chapter soon.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [12 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from eriktheviking
Review:
Now that is a nasty shock for the Yautja.
Comments from author:
Nobody expects a horde of Aliens to pop out of nowhere. : ) The things a girl will do to keep her Hive safe.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [12 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from Mcspender
Review:
No half breed vamps on a quest for redemption, just one very good, and very determined Yaujta commander kicking the smurf of death can, Hell yeah. Mortok Null is awesome xD.
Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
The "Smurf of Death" can. Ha Ha That's funny. : )
It's in the air buddy. It's gonna hit the fan soon.

See Ya!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [11 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from Mcspender
Review:
And here's the one and only Vladislaus Dracul III, voivoda of Valaquia, also known as Dracula people. Now you're gonna see how a war is fought... with style, wealth and taste.
Shooby dooby doo, Shooby dooby doo, Doo-doo.
Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
go back and watch BTVS S05E01 "Buffy vs Dracula" Check out the conversation between Buffy and Dracula in the castle. Also, never teleport without a globe!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [9 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Mcspender
Review:
Bad First Evil, no electronic fraud or identity theft for you :P!!!.
Nice to see that both the Yaujta and the First are subscribers of the theory of There's No Kill like Overkill. the Pred and their giga big mass accelerator and the First, with his Io laser.
Boom for the Boom god. Dakka Fer the Dakka Throne xD!!!!!!!!!11.

Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Yeah, there are a lot of cool toys in the Big Playground. Next Chapter Soon.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [5 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 10" from Mcspender
Review:
So The First is using Buffy's new powers to help himself?. It's good to have a bad guy who knows about reaching out for help.
Spike vs Robin, Coool fight, cool =D!. Spike won for one single thing: toys are cool, but luck, and a mean right cross is better xD.
And Faith is on a roll, hell yeah!!.
Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
I've spent the last day or so viewing the entire season 7 of BTVS. I'm starting to think that the "demon" they used to create the slayer line now calls itself the First. The First was able to manifest after Buffy was killed by the master and even stronger after Willow brought her back a second time. The First spent two years getting stronger. It get's stronger every time Buffy comes back else it would have just gotten the Bringers to kill Angel. Now that she's running the joining spell 24/7 it's an all you can eat buffet that is if you can keep the Predators from blowing up the Earth. On other things...

Faith is now the woman of the house and the Alien is the world's scariest newspaper.

Next chapter soon.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [2 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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