Epic work. I loved how Buffy said We will take everything! I would have done the same. Over all very sweet, and a wonderful read. I turly love anything with chocolate and slayers. Very sweet, warm and a nice read. I enjoyed my time reading this, much like I do eating chocolate. Epic time all around. ^^
Well...guess we know what reality the Slayers and Scoobies will be visiting regularly!
;P
Fantastic little tale...but I have to admit having Viviane's thoughts 95% translated was a slight awkward. If we're in her head, her descriptions of Buffy and Chao-Ahn would be either in French or English, so the English with French interspersed when she's not talking seems a tad strange. But that's just me!
Review By [BlueEyedBrigadier] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
And I'd bet good money that they get Willow to earmark that Reality for return trips later on...
Especially once the word gets out - and it will!! - of where they went and what they came back with...
And who said that the Reality they visit /has/ to follow the film perfectly? Thereby allowing others to pop in as the Chocolate Perfections start running low.. or the dark days of the month near - which I'm positive Xander, if no one else keeps extremely close track of... or birthdays near... or days ending in 'y' happen - Dawn's favorite!...