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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
sounds like tony. sounds sort of like sixteen year old buffy. older buffy would be less likely to tell him much of anything.
Review By [(Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [26 Jul 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ShyBob
Review:
Cute story. I like the "when they were younger and much less jaded" aspect.
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [24 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from serenityselena
Review:
that`s one way of meeting new people ^_^
Comments from author:
Indeed! And saving someone's life = lifelong friend. Thanks for reading!

CT.
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [17 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from bradsan
Review:
Oh I really hope for more Buffy and Tony interaction. Will he make weapons for her so she can survive longer and make the kill easier. Will he recognize her when they talk longer. Will he be the friend she will have when her mom kicks her out of her home, when she died and came back and when they kicked her out of her home will he be the one she will gone call, just to vent her frustration.

Hope you will make more chapters out of this one.
Comments from author:
There are more Tony/Buffy interactions planned out. As for what he will and won't do and what she will and won't accept, well, not telling. Just remember, with the exception of one, each of the ficlets will take place at the end of each season. So infer from there. ^.^ Thanks for reading my stuff and liking it! I always look forward to hearing from you.

CT.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [11 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Great start. Looking forward to more of this friendship or pairing.
Comments from author:
I have at least six more planned. Thanks for reading!!!

CT.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AtotheM
Review:
I like the idea.

I think Tony is reacting very much in character, wanting to pick her brain etc. I think his dialogue probably could use more... zing? So you are half way to a good Tony characterization. He's reacting and thinking exactly as (I think) he should, but I would study how he speaks a bit more closely :)

I look forward to the next vignette. I think these two have a lot they can learn from each other.
Comments from author:
Thanks so much for picking at that for me! I'll watch the movies again (since it's based entirely off the movies, no comics whatsoever) before working on the next one.

Thanks for reviewing, too. Glad you're enjoying.

CT.
Review By [AtotheM] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Review:
Sounds like Tony might be taking something seriously a lot earlier in his life!
Comments from author:
Indeed! ^.^ Thanks for the review!

CT.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [6 Aug 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)KieriToews
Review:
I liked it lots. I can't tell you if you got Tony right, because I am not well-versed in the Marvel Universe either. However, I look forward to more Buffy/Tony action!
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it and thanks for the review! I also look forward to the interactions.

CT.
Review By [(Past Donor)KieriToews] • Date [6 Aug 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LadyHealer
Review:
Very nice!
Comments from author:
Thanks!

CT.
Review By [LadyHealer] • Date [6 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MarcusRowland
Review:
I assume he knows she's 16 at this point?

This could have some interesting implications for the whole Iron Man project - not to mention Buffy's weapons, and things like the fight with the Judge...
Comments from author:
Oh definitely! *IF* there is to be romantic interest, it would be when she's older and more mature. Right now, she's a fascination for him, and possibly a friend. Perhaps even a mentoring opportunity, or even a quid pro quo. It could be one of the things that ultimately helps him survive Afghanistan. There are so many ways this could go, and I do have plot basis for the next six seasons, though. Thanks for the review!!!

CT.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [6 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Cool how he knows that he needs different methods than Buffy.
Comments from author:
Indeed! Thanks for reading!

CT.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [6 Aug 12] • Not Rated
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