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Most Definitely NOT A Candy-Gram!

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Selonianth
Review:
Actually... thinking about it... you'd only need to use it once. On the primary Ori planet. Send that planet to hell and it doesn't matter how many worshipers there still are, the thing that converts their worship into energy for the Ori would be gone, that flame thingy.

Edit: This is true. But that'd also be true no matter how many planets you hit, possibly getting harder, and harder to get close enough as time went on.
Comments from author:
Good point. The main problem would be getting close enough to actually land Acathla.

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [Selonianth] • Date [25 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from theunixer
Review:
Just found and read this one.

Great, really great. I love it.

I do have an idea for putting in that quote (right after Acathla is ringed down):

'Right after, a quote is heard in the Odyssey's Ring Room from Xander, "Candygram for Mongo, Candygram for Mongo", followed by laughter.'
Comments from author:
While you're right about the place for a pun like that, there's not really anything very humorous about opening up a portal to a hell-equivalent dimension on an inhabited planet.

I doubt the crew of the Enola Gay made a lot of jokes when they dropped their payload, and this is the modern equivalent of that operation.
Review By [theunixer] • Date [8 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Morgomir
Review:
While smart its quite out of character for both groups. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Yes, it is, and that is pretty much what the President wanted to happen - shake both groups out of their usual mindset and come up with an idea neither one would normally come up with.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [17 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RobertLie
Review:
I have to admit, it was hilarious to have "An Admittedly Different Solution" to what happened to Acaltha with Xander's first attempt to hide the thing. Its even more hilarious that it was never FOUND until then, despite that choice of hiding.
Comments from author:
The Scoobies are *always* way behind on their paperwork. ;-)
Review By [RobertLie] • Date [9 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LordCorwin
Review:
Hmm, interesting premise. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks. But really tough on the real estate. ;-)
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [8 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Oxnate
Review:
Awesome. And ignore feynstrom. Your ring device worked exactly like it did on the show. You don't need a ring platform unless you're beyond visual range.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I pointed that out to him.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [8 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from feynstrom
Review:
Cute, but the plan fails due to the ring transporters not working as described here.
Comments from author:
Actually, nothing I read says that it wouldn't.
Review By [feynstrom] • Date [8 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RevDorothyL
Review:
ruthless, but inventive -- and it's not as though the Ori were going to stop at genocide, after all.
Comments from author:
Exactly. Just as ruthless as the Ori were intending to be with us.

I'd rather be a somewhat regretful winner than a completely honorable (dead) statistic.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Heavy solution.
Comments from author:
No question about it. Messy, but you're the one lamenting things afterward; not the one fertilizing the grass.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Review:
A reusable portable planetbusting portal! I hope they don't store that thing on Earth once they have finished using it :(
Slightly better than just exploding the Sun but only just! They should have just brought Glory back and beamed her down to battle the priors:)
Comments from author:
Well, it's still messy, but the other real estate in the area is still usable, if you use this idea. ;-)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from divaslayer
Review:
Awesome one shot, I loved it.

Dani
Comments from author:
Thanks. I appreciate hearing your feedback.
Review By [divaslayer] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from burmafrdnow
Review:
last part seemed a little rushed. Maybe fill it out a little more. But love the idea

More than that love the fact they forgot all about Acathla
Comments from author:
Yep. The Scoobies weren't all that good with paperwork, it seems. ;-)
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)RngrThorne
Review:
I'd bet the clown makeup was Xander's idea. Love the story.
Comments from author:
Yep. Re-read my "An Admittedly Different Solution' story. ;-)
Review By [(Current Donor)RngrThorne] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Frogsareevil
Review:
I can only hope that you never become a politician because your definition of collateral damage scares me.
Comments from author:
Sometimes, my mind scares *ME*! 0.0
Review By [Frogsareevil] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from cmdruhura
Review:
So you can RING in and out of a Hell dimension?
Comments from author:
According to what I could determine about the rings' operation, it's not impossible.
Review By [cmdruhura] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Not Rated
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