I liked the crossover but it wasn't entirely clear what it was Buffy was changing until I checked the review page. Your characterization however was spot on for both of them. A sequel would certainly be awesome since Buffy would refuse then have to handle the consequences of breaking her deal, the scoobies finding out and Rumple taking what he wants anyway. Especially if he has a good reason for wanting it like Belle is caught between words and he must save her. I look forward to seeing what you'll do next. -FG
Review By [FallenGods] • Date [31 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Very interesting idea! Buffy really had no idea what she was wishing for, did she? And I bet her new self would have kicked her old self's ass for considering doing anything like it.
I'm not all that familiar with the other fandom, but I'm curious about whether the man actually got what he wanted: Dawn's blood *is* a very powerful tool, but Buffy was a remarkable power for good for a very, very long time, as Slayers go. Also, he might run into trouble making Buffy give up Dawn, and even if she does -- Buffy may have to power to steal her sister's blood, but Dawn's really the only one with actual rightful ownership of her blood. Anyway, extremely intriguing fic. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks! That is a really good question... It might need a follow up fic ;) I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for commenting =]
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [8 Aug 12] • Not Rated
But unless I've got the wrong end of the stick, you're saying that the reason Buffy is the Slayer was that she 'wished' to be strong and wished the Buffyverse into being.
Interesting concept, wish I'd thought of it...ooops!
Well done, DaveT.
Comments from author:
Yeah, pretty much =) I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [DaveTurner] • Date [8 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Very cool, but I'm not positive that I understood exactly what happened. Was Willow the Slayer and Buffy wished she could take that burden from her?
Comments from author:
Pretty much =) More Buffy wanted to be the Slayer and she was trying to make herself feel better about taking the powers from Willow =) Maybe I should fix it... Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [WildMartin] • Date [8 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]