Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from starwolf
well done, please continue.
Review By [starwolf
] • Date [2 Mar 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from leb
this is interesting, I hope to read more soon. I would really love to see how the fight with loki goes with a bunch of slayers added to it
Review By [leb
] • Date [26 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from ShyBob
Interesting premise with nice shifts in POV and characterization; you've got something going with this one. It's a little weird seeing Fury being all tip-toe-y around the slayers, but you've laid out good background as to why. Looking forward to the father/daughter chat between Tony and Faith...I've got high hopes for this!
Review By [ShyBob
] • Date [5 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BaronScrewtape
Good stuff. Keep writing! *cracks whip
Review By [BaronScrewtape
] • Date [29 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from garrycooper
great story and a good start. More please!
Review By [garrycooper
] • Date [25 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from nerfherder
Welp, the interest is there, if you write it, they will read it!
Review By [nerfherder
] • Date [13 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from dreameralways
Very interesting. I hope to read more soon.
Review By [dreameralways
] • Date [10 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Vashti
I'm sure I started reading this on lj. I'm ecstatic to see you've continued it! Having recently read a crossover where the voices and characterization were often hit-or-miss, I can honestly say you're doing a great job with everyone. I'm looking forward to seeing more Faith.
Review By [Vashti
] • Date [25 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from HebiR
I really like the way you are exploring these angles.
Review By [HebiR
] • Date [25 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from jedibuttercup
Interesting. Looking forward to seeing where you go with this.
Review By [jedibuttercup
] • Date [24 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from kittenpoker
I love the introduction between Stark and the Scoobies- it got so perfectly with their characters. Also, the meet between Barton and Buffy was wonderful! It will be interesting to see where you take the story, so please keep writing it! The Buffy and Faith dynamic was great as well!!
Review By [kittenpoker
] • Date [20 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Starfox
Nice one, details a lot about Buffy and Faith. Will there be some insight into Tony's feelings about the whole thing soon? I wonder whether he'll continue his flippant act, or if he'll go all protective about his daughter when he realizes both Fury and the military want her and her friends - as I remember he's not much a fan of the military after they tried to get him to fork over the armor, and doesn't like Fury manipulating his life either, even if it saved said life.
Review By [Starfox
] • Date [15 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from EmberQuill
Definitely one of the best Post-Chosen fics I've read in a while. Mostly because you're dealing with everybody's actions and emotions really well. I like that you'll be addressing "the Incident" too. And the portrayal of Shield and other government agencies trying to recruit Slayers was really good as well.
Review By [EmberQuill
] • Date [8 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from AllenPitt
yeah, they need to talk about 'the incident' (Buffy getting tossed out). It was a real trainwreck, and this time they couldn't blame it on Spike. Not sure if they can repair things at this point. Giles betrayed Buffy when he helped Robin attack Spike (and lied to her about it). That's tough to get past. Her actions seemed crazy to them at times ...
They probably do need to ally with some group at this point. For one thing there are slayers all over the world and if they don't act fast, other groups will recruit them before they can get to them. That can get real messy real quick...
Review By [AllenPitt
] • Date [5 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from bradsan
first let me tell you that you did a good job. I like it.
I really hope that Buffy won't make it easy on the Scoobies and Dawn. Let them work for it. Throwing Buffy out was a bad thing. I don't even go about who was right or wrong. But Dawn telling her that she couldn't stay and has to leave and the Scoobies agreeing with it. There was a whole town with evil beings running around and Buffy left with no weapons.
They could have shouted, Hey evil beings their is a slayer on the streets if you are hungry or want to kill her go for it. I never understood that Buffy didn't saw not one evil bad that night.
I still don't like Riley and I agree with Buffy. They have to leave or hide and get everything on track before they can be in the open again. Knowing them that won't take long. On the other hand what did the military think they did. You can't take a whole town down on your own. Oh wait it's marvel so you can.
I like Buffy and Faiths interaction. Those two need each other as friends I mean. They can show each other how to live again, because lets face it. Even Faith doesn't know how to live and enjoy it. She act's like she knows but she doesn't.
Well can't wait what comes next.
Review By [bradsan
] • Date [4 Jan 13] • Not Rated