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Gluttony Can Be Hazardous To Your Health

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from loretta
Review:
this was a good one shot, i would love to read more and find out the repercussions of the fight and animal totems
Comments from author:
Yes, thsi would make for a very interesting AU version of Season Seven Sunnydale, wouldn't it? ;-)
Review By [loretta] • Date [11 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JasonBarnett
Review:
Morlun may have been portrayed like that once in Marvel, but from what I know of the character it's pretty unlikely he ever will be again. Seriously, he's one of those guys destined to be used to make other villains look good if he's ever actually seen again.
Comments from author:
True.

Judging from the few occasions he'd been seen since his initial appearance, and the way they killed him off and then brought him back, Morlun is going to end up as the character who only shows up to let his opponent demonstrate just how uber-badass they've become.
Review By [JasonBarnett] • Date [13 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Cateagle
Review:
Yes, sometimes you have to be real choosy about what you try and absorb. Shame he chose poorly.
Comments from author:
All it takes is that *one* mistake, and then you're toast. ;-)
Review By [Cateagle] • Date [11 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from burmafrdnow
Review:
did not think much of it. Typical crossover where the one coming in is so dominant

you made him into a Gary Stu

But hey if that is what floats your boat.
Comments from author:
I don't make Morlun a Gary Stu. He is portrayed that way in the canon Marvel universe.

And if you're referring to Xander, that was part of the original challenge's points to include.

And why is it okay to super-up all of the other characters, but not Xander? Willow started out as a run of the mill hacker adn became almost the embodiment of the Earth Mother, power-wise. Buffy got her ass kicked in when she first went up against a Turok-Han, then later wasted them easily and repeatedly. I won't even bother mentioning the way Spike was deified in the series.

Why is is only when Xander is powered up, and is powered up while staying in canon compliance of the established universe, that someone complains?

Smacks of hypocrisy to me.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [9 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from winddancer
Review:
I have always liked stories about Xander, heroic Xander being the best, and this certainly was unexpected. The characters were very much in keeping with canon and this story was right up with Gray wizard's others, top notch. Thanks for a great read.
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed the story. It was definitely fun to write. ;-)
Review By [winddancer] • Date [9 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from dawnkey
Review:
Raven and a Fox they are the perfect totems for Dawn to merge with as they match her cunning and intelligence
Comments from author:
The totems also indicate a great deal more. Check the link.
Review By [dawnkey] • Date [9 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dmitri
Review:
Nice story, and Wesley's totem is an ant? Really?
Comments from author:
Yes. Check the link for totems and see if you don't agree that it's appropriate.
Review By [Dmitri] • Date [9 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Shame these are one shots.
Comments from author:
As Ive indicated, anything more is up to my muse.

If you're inspired to use them for anything more, feel free to do so. ;-)
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [9 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LFW
Review:
Good read; one of my favorite parts is the mink joining Anya.
And the moth going to Willow . . . so is her new code name Mothra?
It is a good place to stop, but you could add more to this too.
Thanks
Comments from author:
That could be her new nickname, but *I'm* not telling her that. ;-)

Anything more is up to my muse.
Review By [LFW] • Date [9 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Very good story, I like it!
Comments from author:
Thanks. ;-)
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [9 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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