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TwistedSlinkyReview:
LOL, one day Willow will learn to quit abusing magic--or at least learn to "pay the goddess upfront" for it. :D Nicely done!
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TwistedSlinky] • Date [23 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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JanessaRavenwoodReview:
I'm honestly uncertain what the purpose of this story was.
Though it just goes to show, just like the separation of church and state, the separation of religion and magic is also a good thing.
I've always preferred playing post-modern, purely secular hermetic wizards myself...
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JanessaRavenwood] • Date [10 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
VillageOrchidReview:
An interesting idea that would be better with some context in terms of any long or more short term effects on Willow.
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VillageOrchid] • Date [10 Aug 12] • Not Rated
