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Review of chapter "At The Quidditch Match" from azulkan
Review:
Great chapter. Looking forward to more.
Review By [azulkan] • Date [29 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "At The Quidditch Match" from Starfox
Review:
Good chapter. I like the gossip and planning, and plotting in the green ranks.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [29 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "At The Quidditch Match" from (Past Donor)BuffyFan
Review:
Fantastic story.

I love the setting as a post deathly hollows story and you have the main charters spot on.

Looking forward to the next chapters.
Review By [(Past Donor)BuffyFan] • Date [28 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "At The Quidditch Match" from Grovtech
Review:
What a fun and entertaining story! I can only imagine how Buffy and the Scoobs would react to all of this match-making. :)

Grover
Review By [Grovtech] • Date [28 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "At The Quidditch Match" from Elleria
Review:
Love this.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [28 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "At The Quidditch Match" from Kalliza
Review:
I don't remember what happened to Lucius Malfoy in the books, but I'm stunned that he's not at the least in Azkaban. Draco, yeah, he ultimately helped Harry (I think--I've only read the books once, and that was years ago) but how did Lucius manage to stay a free man? It's the only thing that's bugging me about this story, that doesn't seem to fit.

Otherwise, this is absolutely fantastic! I hope you let Dawn's issues come up soon, too. I'm not sure what the rest of the school actually knows about what happened to her, but I'm doubting there are many details. Imagine how the other Slytherines will react when they find out she was in the trenches, fighting with a friggin sword, against ancient and powerful monsters! Really, thats so Gryffindor they'll probably twitch. Though they'll likely get doing so to help family, cause that's what she was basically doing.

Anyway, great job and I'm looking forward to reading what comes next! A bit more drama please! (Also, I like the idea of Dawn and Blaise, and I'm really curious as to where you're going with the Draco/Ginny flirtation, since you have Ginny with Harry currently. If they break up, who does Harry end up with? Maybe a Slayerette?)
Comments from author:
Thanks!

I don't think JKR addressed the fate of Lucius Malfoy in the books. She fast forwarded from the immediate aftermath of the Battle of Hogwarts, in which all 3 Malfoys are sort of awkwardly sitting around not sure what to do, to the Epilogue, where Draco and his wife are seeing their son off on the Hogwarts Express. I'm not sure whether or not I'll be showing at some point how I see the Malfoys' punishment/probation in the post-Voldemort wizarding world playing out, or just have Draco make some comments in passing. (Lucius certainly didn't get off scot-free.) I've got several idea I'm toying around with for what to do next.
Review By [Kalliza] • Date [28 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "At The Quidditch Match" from Harry
Review:
Dawn is impressing Draco. She is showing him, that he can STILL follow what his parents are saying about Quidditch and still enjoy the game. She is going to be a great assistant to Draco, who will be the team owner, when Draco does purchase a team.
Comments from author:
Dawn is a delightfully bad influence on Draco. On the bright side, she uses her powers for (mostly) good...
Review By [Harry] • Date [28 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "At The Quidditch Match" from OtteryLexa
Review:
They assume Dawn has a functional self-preservation instinct? They don't know her very well!
Comments from author:
You know what they say about assumptions!
Review By [OtteryLexa] • Date [28 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "At The Quidditch Match" from ChaosLady
Review:
*chuckles out loud*
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [28 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "At The Quidditch Match" from etraytin
Review:
I love this story so much! Dawn the Slytherin just makes me absurdly happy for some reason.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [etraytin] • Date [28 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Culture Shock II" from AngusH
Review:
I really enjoyed reading this.

Adding Dawn into the whole thing after the final battle seems to work really well.

The change from sudden death at every moment to worrying about social niceties is a huge one
and watching the changes is really great.

Funny too :-)

Plus you make feel sympathy for various characters who I was never sympathetic towards before.
Comments from author:
Thank you!

I thought Dawn would fit in with post-Battle Hogwarts- everyone's working through their own post-battle trauma. Dawn's is just slightly different than the other students'. And I felt like JKR skipped quite a bit in her jump to the Epilogue. After a civil war is over, people from both sides have to figure out how to function as a society again, and it's not as simple as waving a wand and declaring everything is ok.
Review By [AngusH] • Date [21 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Culture Shock II" from starwolf
Review:
its nice to see some of these people rounded out in to 3 dimensional characters. I very much look forward to your next chapter. thanks
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [starwolf] • Date [10 Aug 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Culture Shock II" from dreameralways
Review:
It's been so long. Need more.
Comments from author:
There is more.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [7 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Culture Shock II" from etraytin
Review:
I like this story a lot, it's not a perspective or storyline I've seen very often. I can definitely see Dawn as a Slytherin, though! I'd love to see more chapters of this.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I've got ideas for further chapters kicking around my head, so there will be more, it's just a question of when.
Review By [etraytin] • Date [22 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Culture Shock II" from (Current Donor)AshDawnSoulmates
Review:
Ok this had me cracking up! please update this again soon! and if you find a way to get poor Ginny out of the clutches of bloody Potter and into Draco's, I might squeal for joy! *cough*hate Potter*cough* lol. Plus, I like the direction of Blaise/Dawn, could totally see that working out!!!! Again, please update sooooon!!!!!!!
Comments from author:
I'm working on it. Ginny and Harry might both be the better for seeing other people. Throwing Dawn into Slytherin is bound to have some side effects...
Review By [(Current Donor)AshDawnSoulmates] • Date [27 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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