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Review of chapter "Culture Shock II" from AngusH
Review:
I really enjoyed reading this.

Adding Dawn into the whole thing after the final battle seems to work really well.

The change from sudden death at every moment to worrying about social niceties is a huge one
and watching the changes is really great.

Funny too :-)

Plus you make feel sympathy for various characters who I was never sympathetic towards before.
Comments from author:
Thank you!

I thought Dawn would fit in with post-Battle Hogwarts- everyone's working through their own post-battle trauma. Dawn's is just slightly different than the other students'. And I felt like JKR skipped quite a bit in her jump to the Epilogue. After a civil war is over, people from both sides have to figure out how to function as a society again, and it's not as simple as waving a wand and declaring everything is ok.
Review By [AngusH] • Date [21 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Culture Shock II" from starwolf
Review:
its nice to see some of these people rounded out in to 3 dimensional characters. I very much look forward to your next chapter. thanks
Review By [starwolf] • Date [10 Aug 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Culture Shock II" from dreameralways
Review:
It's been so long. Need more.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [7 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Culture Shock II" from etraytin
Review:
I like this story a lot, it's not a perspective or storyline I've seen very often. I can definitely see Dawn as a Slytherin, though! I'd love to see more chapters of this.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I've got ideas for further chapters kicking around my head, so there will be more, it's just a question of when.
Review By [etraytin] • Date [22 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Culture Shock II" from (Current Donor)AshDawnSoulmates
Review:
Ok this had me cracking up! please update this again soon! and if you find a way to get poor Ginny out of the clutches of bloody Potter and into Draco's, I might squeal for joy! *cough*hate Potter*cough* lol. Plus, I like the direction of Blaise/Dawn, could totally see that working out!!!! Again, please update sooooon!!!!!!!
Comments from author:
I'm working on it. Ginny and Harry might both be the better for seeing other people. Throwing Dawn into Slytherin is bound to have some side effects...
Review By [(Current Donor)AshDawnSoulmates] • Date [27 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Culture Shock II" from fanrei
Review:
just found this story. it's great. thanks you for sharing. love to the snake house.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [fanrei] • Date [10 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Culture Shock II" from MBB
Review:
You are pretty good at starting (HP) crossover fic(let)s. I hope this is one that you continue at least a few more chapters. (not that I would mind if you continued with Her Mother's Daughter..).
While big-bad fics are great I think we've seen most variations, but your ficlets focussing on social dinamycs are a nice treat. It's a surprise how you still find new angles.
I like how many humourous sides of the 'looking to marry' game you are able to show without being repetative; the Ron-Harry (not) explaining, the girls joking, Draco serious, etc. (although I don't think the story should get stuck there)

You are able to make Malfoy and the other slytherins come off as decent interesting characters, and (although there should I think at least be a few that are not happy with the new ways)
Comments from author:
Thanks- and don't worry, I have ideas for more on both this and Her Mother's Daughter. There's still plenty to explore in wizarding society post-Voldemort. (The only thing holding me back is budgeting the limited writing time I have.)
Review By [MBB] • Date [23 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Culture Shock II" from AllenPitt
Review:
Buffy should definitely visit for a match. Can you picture a group of thestrals all reacting to seeing her? Meantime, yes, I'm surprised Potter isn't besieged by marriage proposals by this point. (And I've never understood the whole Ron/Hermione thing. That would never work).
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [19 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Culture Shock II" from TrueRedRose
Review:
Really enjoying this story. Dawn in Slytherin House makes perfect sense to me. Looking forward to the next update.
Review By [TrueRedRose] • Date [4 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Culture Shock II" from Bunney
Review:
Love love love this fic!!! I am crazy glad to read new chapters are up :)
Review By [Bunney] • Date [29 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Culture Shock II" from Elleria
Review:
Love this!
Review By [Elleria] • Date [20 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Culture Shock II" from MBB
Review:
ah, the griffindork, how the muggle-isms spread
A funny and original fic
Review By [MBB] • Date [19 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Culture Shock II" from ChaosLady
Review:
Amusing, as usual.
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [18 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Culture Shock II" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
One of the best stories I've read of this type - well done!

You've managed to keep me highly entertained particularly since you aren't re-hashing the books and I'm really looking forward to (hopefully) a lot more. I am particularly enjoying the way you're addressing the underlying culture of wizarding society.

~ Jewel
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [18 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Culture Shock II" from (Recent Donor)ElzaCBoe
Review:
I want to see the 'Dawn meets the vultures' now... I can just imagine all the tempers mashing together.... Dawn's wickedness, Draco's temper, Blais's overprotectedness... It's gona be awesome!
Review By [(Recent Donor)ElzaCBoe] • Date [18 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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