One thing bugs me. Buffy gets over Dawn basically dieing waaaaay too easily. Especially since the powers that be and whistler basically invalidated Buffy's sacrifice by doing so. I would see Buffy's attitude being "gee, thanks!" and then deboning him for killing her sister.
Review By [BaronScrewtape] • Date [22 Dec 12] • Rating [6 out of 10]
hey congratulation you have one review which isn't positive and he is reading your story. Are you good or are you good.
Sign I know that Buffy made mistakes but they weren't so bad that she let the Scoobies down. Well only when she had to kill Angel but can you blame her. I wouldn't know what to do if I ever have to kill or send my lover to hell. I would go mad I think. Nope she made mistakes but hey that's normal she is human after all but she never betrayed and told secrets she new about them to others and never expected more than they wanted or could give. They did that to her all the time. It's sad to have friends like that and she never blames them if they made a mistake not like they did with her. And boy the mistakes the Scoobies made are mostly made out of selfishness, ignorance and got more humans killed then you can count. A well you have Buffy lovers and Buffy haters and I like Buffy I couldn't live how she has to live and those friends I wouldn't take their attitude if they were mine. friends stick together and have each others back and won't be mad If you don't agree with them and very important they don't tell your secrets to others. They will never betray your trust no matter what.
Now about your writing. I love it You did good the meeting between Faith and Giles and the family. love reading it.
will you do Kennedy now or Hank. I would love to read what they did with Hank and Kennedy 10 years of abusing her powers she won't change so please try.
Hope you will write more soon. Good job.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [29 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Another great part in the continuing storyline. I have an idea.....could you have a chapter about the Scoobies (Xander & Willow/Kennedy) meeting Buffy? Maybe have Buffy beat up Kennedy?
Review By [MoonStar] • Date [29 Aug 12] • Not Rated
I love that you are continuing this story. It was great to see the rift with Giles healing. Plus Victoria and her family have now had their say. I do hope you continue with it!!
Review By [ScoobysRanger] • Date [29 Aug 12] • Not Rated
sorry, the "perfect Buffy" attitude has now killed all interest in this story. I get that the others made mistakes, but Buffy has more and worse mistakes to her name.
Review By [MattCauthon] • Date [29 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Coming in from the Cold" from SariLane
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I really liked this chapter. I hope we see more, and I hope Vicki and the others give Giles a chance. It's funny, I would think with Kennedy in the picture it would be Xander who would be ready to seek forgiveness before Willow. Seeing as what an influence Kennedy would be. But I think you're a great writer and I really enjoy these tales of yours.
Review By [SariLane] • Date [28 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Coming in from the Cold" from immortalsilence
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love it thanks so much more pretty please
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [28 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Coming in from the Cold" from bradsan
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short but got every emotion needed. good job. Don't know if I wrote that sentence right.
Please Kennedy now. Pleaaaaaaaase
love it
Review By [bradsan] • Date [28 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "For one night only" from ScoobysRanger
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I agree with everyone. I really love this series and wish you would continue as well. It would be great to see the other Buffy characters meet up with the Red group. I would bet Victoria has some choice words to say to several of them.
Review By [ScoobysRanger] • Date [26 Aug 12] • Not Rated
I really liked Buffy's character in this. Although I had never heard of the crossover, I was still able to enjoy the story. Good job. I especially love anything that pairs B with one of Karl Urban's characters, no matter which one. I can just picture them together. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [25 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]