Review of chapter "Matins" from GwynApNudd
Please tell me you had to write this as another necessary backstory to Bring Up Your Dead, or to one of your other stories. You have so many good starts (one or two chapters with a promising introduction, but not yet into the meat of the story) that I'm getting concerned for your juggling skills. If you have to drop the ball on some of your stories, let it not be Dead, Twilight, or this one.
Edited to add: I really enjoy everything you write. I never meant to make you feel I was making demands on you, but on re-reading this review I can see where I sort of did, and how annoying it would be, especially if you'd recently dealt with other similar reviews (or worse "reviews" that *were* meant to dictate terms). I humbly apologize for contributing to feedback that was more discouraging than encouraging. I'll just go sit in the corner now and take a time out.
Comments from author:
Please tell me you understand that authors are not obliged to write to your timetable. While I may have said in response to other reviews that I plan to do more with some stories, all the stories I post during the Fic A Day challenge are marked 'complete' for a reason- so I don't have reviewers harassing me about when the next chapter will be *if* there is to be a next chapter.
Review By [GwynApNudd
] • Date [14 Aug 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Matins" from JediKnight
Why leave off on a good idea there?
Review By [JediKnight
] • Date [14 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Matins" from liit
I just want you to know, I will try not to read your fanfic because I'm in the process of reading the 39 clues with my son. We've been reading 39 clues for a couple of years now (We are in book 11 now), so I don't want any spoiler...It's a great start so far and I will be reading your story eventually but not right now, coz you know...
good luck and have fun writing ;0
Comments from author:
Aw, thanks! (There are only a few spoilers, but you're probably ok to read it once you've read the first Cahills vs Vespers book. If you want to be on the safe side, wait until you're done Book 3 in Cahills vs Vespers.)
Review By [liit
] • Date [14 Aug 12] • Not Rated