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Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Two" from Tawnilynani
Really enjoyed reading this story. I look forward to reading future chapters and other stories that you have written.
Comments from author:
I'm SO glad you enjoyed reading this story! It was my first venture into Buffy/Dean land, so this feedback is amazing. There is a sequel that is turning into something much darker and heavier than this story, and if you do read it, I hope it doesn't disappoint. Thank you for taking time to leave me feedback on this story - it really makes my day! :)
Review By [Tawnilynani] • Date [11 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Two" from Angelsgirl
Okay so please tell me there is going to be another story!!
Comments from author:
Yes! There is a sequel being worked on right now! Thank you so much for taking the time to ask, lol, I'm so happy you want to continue reading in this 'verse! :D
Review By [Angelsgirl] • Date [25 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Two" from TikiPrincess
I read this over on and loved it!

It was such an interesting concept and very well done.

Kudos to you for having distinctly different personalities for Slayer!Buffy, Hunter!Buffy, Past!Dean, and Future!Dean. It would have given me a headache trying to keep them straight, but you did a great job, and it was usually clear which character was speaking or narrating.

I absolutely loved the drunken conversation. Words can't describe how awesomely hilarious that scene was.

Good pacing and flow. Kept me interested to the very end (although it made me sad at his ultimate decision).
Comments from author:
Thank you! Both for the amazing review and the rec on the story, it means so much that you liked it that much! And - as I said on - I'm so glad it came across okay, lol. I swear, my brain was just trying to find ways to make the damn story more complicated, so why not throw in future Buffy and future Dean? Haha. Thank you for the continued reviews!

And thank you about the drunken conversations! LOL - I love writing those, they are so much fun because you can literally say anything haha. And yes, Dean's ultimate decision - it's why I love writing him, he's so intensely masochistic in so many ways. In the sequel, there will be more of this but in the final installment, he'll finally start making some healthier decisions for himself, lol.

Thank you again for the review(s) and the support! I really, REALLY appreciate it! :D
Review By [TikiPrincess] • Date [22 Sep 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Two" from (Past Donor)Nuala
Ok, first off - great story! How could you end it there!!!! Grrr, Arghh. Seriously, I really enjoyed the characterizations and the way you brought the Buffy's together. Can't wait for the sequel. Thanks so much for writing.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it - especially the blending and the characterization since Buffy got a little morphin' action happening. Thank you so much and thank you, thank you for taking the time to review! It means so much! But you have to admit it would be the perfect ending, lol, if I left it there - but damn it, I must torture them some more! :P Thank you again!
Review By [(Past Donor)Nuala] • Date [14 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Two" from motleycrue
So I am not one to normally review a story. In fact, this is the first review I have ever written and I have been reading fanfiction for a little over 12 years. However, I felt that a story this awesome deserved a review. In short... I loved this story, I checked daily for updates, and I cannot wait for the sequel! Your writing of Buffy/ Dean is so real that I honestly wish this was how it played out in the series.

I will be watching for the sequel!

Comments from author:
This is probably the best review I could ever ask for - thank you so much! That my story made you want to review and share how much you liked the story is SO amazing, and I'm honored and so appreciative that you did review and that you liked the story. Thank you, thank you!

But honestly, a better compliment is that Buffy and Dean came across so well - that is HUGE of you to say, thank you for that! :)

The sequel shall be coming soon - thank you for sticking with me! This review means so much to me, I don't even have words. Thank you!
Review By [motleycrue] • Date [13 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Two" from Katt
OK seriously? That was mean roflmao.. I hope you have a sequel planned, but if not it was still a great story so... keep it up!!!

Comments from author:
I know! Haha - it's such an evil way to end the story although it was perfect for the ending of the actual episode... :P But yes! I am working on the sequel right now and will hopefully have the first part posted very soon. Won't be updated nearly as often as this since I'll be writing it as I go along but sequel there will be! :P

Thank you SO much for the awesome review (and thank you for taking the time to review - it means a lot!). I'm so pleased you liked the story and I hope you like where the characters go next... :D!
Review By [Katt] • Date [13 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Two" from yuiop
Nice is she going to find her way across worlds and find Dean maybe?
Comments from author:
Maybe she will - maybe she won't! I can't say! :P I can say they will meet again lol. Thank you for taking the time to leave a review! I'm so glad you're interested in where the characters go. :D!
Review By [yuiop] • Date [12 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Two" from Angelinasway
O.M.G, you can not leave me hanging like this. LMFAO!!!!!!

No seriously, even if you don't get around to writing the sequel, its a perfect ending. I haven't felt that type of anxiety since I read Niahm's Origin series, and let me tell you, that is one of my fav Spuffy fics. By chapter ten your wound so tight reading it you think you cant breath, because you're reading Buffy dig herself out of her own grave. It's so 'guh' I cant even describe it. So you did an amazing job Hun. Just amazing. It was dead on with how Dean would feel right then, and I can't agree more. As for Chapter 21 it was just so devastatingly amazing. I cried when Dean felt how his future self felt. I can not express my emotion! Just perfect. I love it! I simply just love it! Thank you so much for this! I can not express the ways.

Okay, now I'm going to give you great Spuffy fic with very minimal Angel Bashing. Its on this site, and I think you will like it because any great Author can appreciate another. Unfortunately, she is published now, so I highly doubt the sequel will be finished, but both are worth the read regardless. It's a Spuffy crossover with West Wing, but even if you have never seen WW, you don't need to, to read this fic. Her characterization is spot on and trust me you will thank me after you finish it. Holly, apparently, used to be Bangle until her friend swayed her over to the Dark Side. (LMFAO) She's been writing FanFic since she was in High School and well just see for yourself. After Chapter 1 if you don't already love it, well then read to Chapter 5, by then there's no way you won't.

Grey Gardens Of Shadow Rapture:

Trust me you will love it!!!!

Gardens of Crimson Roses, Sequel:
Comments from author:
Isn't it just?! I KNOW! Lol - the ending really was just a great cap on what that episode could have been and it felt so perfect ending it that way! But damn it, I can't just leave it! Actually, this story kind of shaped itself into a trilogy although I might change that as I'm having Idea Overload. :P

THANK YOU. Thank you thank you thank you! I'm so happy Dean's pain came across, Zachariah is really just a right bastard! Thank you for this awesome feedback, especially about the ending and definitely about Chapter 21 as far as getting everything tied up and cleaned up. So thank you! I'm so, so, so happy you like it! To read how you were going through and what you were feeling, it's making me have all this Writer's Feels lol.

Oooh, published author now? Already interested! I have added them to my to-read list for my weekends :P I'm actually excited to read them considering this rave review. Thanks for the rec! Oh my god, watch - after reading these and writing all Buffy/Dean crazy, I'm gonna start swaying my butt over to The Dark Side (LOL! That's awesome!).
Review By [Angelinasway] • Date [12 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Two" from Valeee
You can't stop here :OOOO
That's just cruel :D
I love that story
Comments from author:
Thank you so much! I'm so happy you like it! And no, you are very right, I can't lol. I really want to see what happens next myself. :P Thank you for taking the time to review, it means so much that you like the story! :D
Review By [Valeee] • Date [12 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Two" from AbigaelRose
Another double review reguarding chapters 21 and 22. Damn B! Way to make a chica crave more with a short close out like 22's. Now on to chapter twenty one, (yeah I know I'm kinda getting the order screwy and I can think chronoglocicly otherwise I wouldn't have gotten into the college I did) That was a chapter of Queens (Kings are to over used and patriarchal) you covered all your bases with tying up your visit to 2014, forming your characters, making sure Dean still gives up everything for the greater good and Sammy, how no matter what they love eachother even in death. I notice Dean is still in his puppet phase doing everything for some reason that someone else told him about let's hope that when Buffy returns (and that better be soon!)he can move out of puppetville and into I -have- a -reason -it's- just- not- your's -and -we're- gonna- do- this- my- way- land. I must hear more soonish and please promise me no Lisa she is annoying! I wanna see how you are gonna pull off writing two realities untill we squish them back togeather.
Comments from author:
Lol! I know, I got crazy with the double postings at the end, I just couldn't wait. I was just too giddy about getting it going. :P But, as always, WOW! Thank you so much for this glorious review, you always make me feel way to blushy after reading these. Thank you so much. I'm glad it all came across, that I got everything put together. I really just wanted to focus on The End and just add Buffy so it had to end sort of quickly without too much craziness.

Dean very much so is - a lot of what he's about will be questioned in the next installment as far as how things play out with Buffy and where she is, who she is, what she is... etc etc etc. He will be forced to make changes and deal with changes as well as who he is and how he lives his life. Buffy has the effect on people! Hehee, I hope you like it! I have some of it written so I'll be posting it pretty soon here once I get a cohesive plot hammered out.

And... I can't say anything about Lisa. :P

Thank you, thank you, thank you for your awesome support throughout the posting of this story, B! You were always there with such positiveness and I so appreciate it! :D
Review By [AbigaelRose] • Date [12 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from raintree
Nooo you can't end it there! Lol i can see why you ended it there as it was a good ending but please don't say this is the end! Im a proper addict to this story i need another hit! :-)
Comments from author:
Oh my goodness, I know! It would be the perfect ending to bring everything back to where it was supposed to go but I can't do that! I need more angst and I need an eventual happy ending so there is going to be a sequel in a few weeks (at least, the beginning of it...). Thank you so much for your support and reviews on this story, I'm so glad you liked it so much and thank you for always taking the time to review! It means so much knowing you like the story and where my crazy brain takes the characters, lol. Thank you! And I hope you like the sequel!
Review By [raintree] • Date [12 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Two" from JohannaMK
Noooooo!!! It can't end there! What am I going to do now?
Thank you so much for writing this. I loved the way you blended the universes, the characterization, the plot...I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
Comments from author:
Thank you SO MUCH! I'm so, so happy you liked it - especially with the blending of the characters and how it effected the plot. Thank you! And there will be a sequel! There will, there will, I can't leave them hanging like that, I need to get some sort of happy ending eventually! Haha.

Thank you for taking the time to review! It's so appreciated! :)
Review By [JohannaMK] • Date [12 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Two" from legarde
Please tell us there is going to be a sequel. Buffy has to get back to Dean. She just has to. She keeps him, if not human, then happy, sane, confident. And I would love to see Buffy show up with her powers, like the two combining into one completely, instead of just their souls and personalities. This was a real fun story to read. Thank you for continuing with it.
Comments from author:
There is going to be a sequel! :P This 'verse somehow got designed into a trilogy-esque sort of story line so YES! I'm planning on at least two more installments for this series. THANK YOU for the awesome review, I'm so glad you liked it! And I completely agree with you on Buffy and her relationship with Dean and how it effects him. She was his rock in 2014 and now he knows everything that 2014 Dean went through so needless to say, he's going to have a bumpy road ahead of him in the next installment as far as where he stands with Buffy, where he wants to stand with Buffy, etc. Especially compared to how he felt when it was only a few days and BOOM! He gets to feel everything his future self felt as well - that Zachariah is a downright bastard.

I can't give anything away but I do hope you like where it goes when it gets posted, if you're still interested in reading, as far as what it means to be the Slayer and how it plays out in different worlds! Thank you so much for taking the time to review, I'm so glad you liked this story! :D
Review By [legarde] • Date [12 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from val
dying to read next chapter this story has become so addictive
Comments from author:
Thank you so much! :D I'm thrilled to bits you are liking it!!
Review By [val] • Date [10 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from AbigaelRose
Okay chica here's a review for both chapters 19 and 20 (The semester just started up a few days ago and I have just gotten internet in my dorm setting up a network is a bitch.) I liked 19 for the tension and the transition to the next chapter it really got me prepared for 20 reguarding both Buffy and dean's relationship and how far both of them are willing to go. Chapter 20 is I think so far the best chapter you have written in this story so far because of how striking it is. This one made me cry because of how in love they are even when they both have hit the extremes of exahustion, hopelessness, fear, and anger and are so jaded that it has taken them over. You B, are the first person who has written something that has made me cry fan fiction and original fiction congrats you've got the skills to evoke emoton from readers.
I hope to hear more soon! I'll be on stand by,
Comments from author:
Oh my god, wow, thank you. Your insights are so wonderful when it comes to this story and understanding where both Buffy and Dean are coming from and how they are responding to each other. I love the idea of them being so desperate and at the edge but still loving each other very much - enough that they want to do the right thing but they are willing to let it all go for the other. It's just... a passionate helplessness here.

Thank you so much for this amazing feedback, you always make my heart do this squeezy-emotional thing that just... thank you, B, I'm very appreciative of it.

And oooh, classes! Lol. I don't miss classes but YES for internet!
Review By [AbigaelRose] • Date [10 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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