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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Review:
Makes you wonder how many other artifacts she has inadvertently left behind over the years.
Comments from author:
Yes, it does, doesn't it?

How many other artifacts might have guardians who would 'use the Force' to make anyone forget what they might have accidentally found?

Possibly a good plot bunny, there. ;-)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [27 Aug 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from draconis
Review:
While reading, I vividly imagined Spike's colorful response to being described as "fauna".

Some minor "issues" based on my preconceived notions:

Some folks think having something blessed by the Archbishop of Canterbury is akin to having it blessed by a devil of the 6th Circle of Hell (Heresy). Such might be consummately ineffective against demons.

I would think Lara has at least a TEENY-TINY bit of resistance to mental manipulation. She could have had at least one token "these ARE the droids I'm looking for" response before succumbing to the Guardian.
Comments from author:
True, it's a shame Spike didn't hear that remark. ;-)

And Lara basically got sucker-punched by the Guardian; Lara was expecting to at least discuss the matter a bit more, but she got whammied immediately.
Review By [draconis] • Date [16 Aug 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LordCorwin
Review:
Bad Lara, no Axe for you....
Comments from author:
Yeah, the Guardian was very possessive of it, wasn't she?

Which doesn't explain how Caleb got hold of it.
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [15 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Cute, yes it would have really messed things up if Laura had gotten the Scythe that soon.
Comments from author:
Possibly. It might also have prevented some of the problems from developing in the first place. All we know for sure is that its discovery interfered with the Guardian's plans.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [15 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
I was never sure about what the Guardian's purpose was and to whom, another of those questionable later season moments. A nice uncomplicated solution to her Tomb Raider problem, well done.
Comments from author:
Yeah, Joss had a habit of pulling 'deus ex machina' solutions out of his butt over the course of the series, and the Guardian suddenly appearing out of nowhere, just in the nick of time, was just another example of this.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [15 Aug 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from cmdruhura
Review:
The old "These are not the droids you seek" ploy. I'll chalk it up to the fact that Lara was caught off guard rather than weak minded.
Comments from author:
Basically, Lara got sucker-punched by a sorceress she wasn't expecting to find there. Anyone could be taken down by that.
Review By [cmdruhura] • Date [15 Aug 12] • Not Rated
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