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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)jcon
Review:
Very thought provoking!!! Really makes you sit back & ask the question; does all this fighting help? & who does it help? People? Country? Corporations? Religion? Excellently written, thankyou.
Comments from author:
Thank you! *g*
Review By [(Current Donor)jcon] • Date [19 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LordCorwin
Review:
we are fighting the wrong enemy ... I think we just glass the place and start over.
Comments from author:
Tempting, but too much collateral damage to even really contemplate. *shudder*
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [18 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from silvergaurd
Review:
its sad
Comments from author:
Yeah. Thanks for the review.
Review By [silvergaurd] • Date [16 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ArjaiH
Review:
We seem to be fighting (rather impotently) everywhere!
Comments from author:
Yeah, it's pointless, really and demoralizing to our military.
Review By [ArjaiH] • Date [16 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
Well written but extremely disturbing both for content and how true it is.
Comments from author:
Thank you and I agree. *shaking my head now*
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [16 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from fredthebadger
Review:
I was a little surprised to find that there wasn't a rule against stories like this, but ok.

As for my review, I didn't really see any 'story'. What you have is, in my opinion, a scene. I didn't really like the reactions of the Buffy-verse characters, because they strike me as the kind of people that wouldn't care if it was technically legal.

It feels like you wrote this scene from the perspective of some international aid workers, and then switched the names for Buffy-verse characters.
Comments from author:
I have this marked as a ficlet.

While they may not care if something is technically legal or not, even slayers aren't immune to guns and I don't know if you've noticed this or not, in those countries, the fundamentalist muslims are armed and very dangerous.

Nope, didn't do that. Don't really know any aid workers personally... Sort of. I am acquainted with someone who works on the naval hospital ship, "Mercy", but this didn't come from them.
Review By [fredthebadger] • Date [16 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from misterwhy
Review:
True. Much savagery and ignorance is rampant in the middle east. Strangely none of it is actually supported by the Qur'an that the people over there live by. Sad but true.
Comments from author:
We'll have to agree to disagree on that point, hon.
Review By [misterwhy] • Date [16 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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